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Title: THE TRIP 2

Karma is a bitch and Anika's co workers got what was coming to them.

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 05:42 am
Title: THE TRIP 2

I like seeing the interaction before the accident. That Giselle was one selfish birch and Hunter wasn't't much better. 

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 07:09 am
Title: THE TRIP 2

Good Job! The backstory is giving more credence to the story.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 01:07 am
Title: THE TRIP 2

Try as a might, I can't issue one ounce of compassion for Giselle. She's more concern with her image and lounging at the pool then poor people dying around her.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 12:57 am
Title: THE TRIP 2

GIselle and cronies were total bitches and deserved to die.  Hunter was and is a victim of his mother greed and bias.  Hunter you are such punk!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 12:37 am
Title: THE TRIP 2

Very good update..I love getting to know your H/h

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2016 12:21 am
Title: THE TRIP 2

I hope Anika got to whup Giselle's ass before that heffa died. 

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 09:15 pm
Title: THE TRIP 2

Man! Anika can't catch a break, falling down getting on the plane in front of all those evil eyes, but my girl took it like a trooper and got up, brush herself off and walked with her head held high ( priceless ). You know it made me mad that all her co-workers was treating this trip as a vacation instead of something that was life changing and work. I also saw Hunter trying to engage Anika to talk and join their group, but Anika was not having it. Girl I just went on a trip with a lot of people (family) and I found that trying to get hotel rooms for everybody was to damn expensive, so my sister suggested that we rent a house that was big enough to accommodate all of us so we won't be separated and believe it or not it was less expensive than individual hotel rooms. What if Anika had to share a space with all those pricks, that child would've been living in PURE HELL!!. Is it me or does Giselle acts as though she's jealous of Anika, I wonder way she is so threaten by her. I hope now  Hunter sees what's the different is of being stranded with Anika vs being stranded with Giselle, the love affair would've ended on day 1 of being stranded. Thanks for this update MP

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 06:03 pm
Title: BACK AT HOME 1

Time is a mess but at least the dad seems ok

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 04:02 am
Title: DAY 1

Intense

 Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 03:53 am
Title: THE TRIP 1

Thanks for the update. 😍

 Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2016 11:15 pm
Title: THE TRIP 1

Thanks for the update. 😍

 Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 01:07 pm
Title: THE TRIP 1

Good to know the backstory and what will occur leading up to the plane crash.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2016 02:38 am
Title: THE TRIP 1

Great chapter. I really like your writing style. If this is a repeat comment... Well, who gets tired of compliments. lol

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 01:19 pm
Title: THE TRIP 1

I love it when karma introduces herself to folks expecially ho's like Giselle and her cronies.  Suppose to be helping folks and their talking about vacationing. those losers got exactly what they deserve!!  To bad Anika got caught up in their retribution.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2016 04:00 am
Title: THE TRIP 1

Thanks for the update. 😍

 Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 11:23 pm
Title: THE TRIP 1

Girl... it's hard being the only black person in a company of privilege white people. Some people say " It's not what you know, it's who you know" and they seem to know each other very well. Anika's light was shining so bright and on top of that she was getting recognition for her work, and those hens couldn't handle all that. In my profession I find that I have a lot of haters but it doesn't bother me, girl when I know someone don't like me I will go up to them and say " Honey how are you doing? this beautiful day" and some will give me a look and all I can do is laugh. I try and get alone with everybody, and people know that I'm a nice person but they know if you piss me off, there's a whole new side to me. You can't live your life worring about what someone who's not your family or friend thinks about you. Your sun doesn't set or rise with them. I'm glad Hunter is a new man and he sees the error of his ways. Thank you MP for this update

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 09:13 pm
Title: THE TRIP 1

That Giselle was always a mean birch. I'm glad Hunter is different now. 

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 05:29 pm
Title: THE TRIP 1

Who says karma ain't a bitch. All that smack and Giselle met her untimely end. I wonder if all that resentment towards Annika is just jealousy. Sometimes people resent others when they recognize true strength. Annika is hard working, talented and kind. She earned her way into the company. She didn't have connection or sleep her to the top. Giselle did both of those things. As for her little click, there just followers.

I'm glad Hunter has grown as man an is no longer that petty boy.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 08:38 am
Title: DAY 56

The sexual tension is only going to get hotter. The two of them are going to be a great couple once they get past their hesitation.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 02:19 am
Title: BACK AT HOME 6

Wow!! There is something really wrong with Corrine.. She doesn't care if her son will be happy. it's all  about her. I hope something  of someone takes her down a peg with her racist attitude.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 02:13 am
Title: DAY 49

Good chapter! Hunter and Giselle are attracted to each other and should come clean about it! After all they have aways to go before they get off the island.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 02:02 am
Title: DAY 56

Love it. Bring some happiness to the island.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 08:55 am
Title: DAY 56

Anika is softening more and more to Hunter.

 Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 12:55 am
Title: DAY 56

Hunter is so sweet. When he and Annika finally get together its really going to be special.

Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 11:13 pm


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