Reviews For The Entitled Girl
Title: -- 10 --

Thank you for responding to my comment. I too partly agree with you. We as human often like to use the "People make mistakes" quote as an excuse to get away with the wrong things we had done. When someone knowingly takes the steps to do something they later claim was a mistake, then to me its not a mistake. Its a choice. 

A mistake is when you do something you had no idea was wrong. But do something you know is wrong, does not qualify as a mistake any more.

There was an tense silence before Remar drew further into me and his cold lips pressed onto mine, gently at first as if testing the waters to see if I'd draw back.

I didn't.We kissed.

Though it didn't have that certain sweet and spice me and Angelo had when our lips mated, it was a lovely kiss nonetheless.

Luciana may be young, but she is not stupid. When Remar was pulling in, she should have pulled back. But she didn't. She choose to kiss him instead. She wanted that kiss to happen. She has a boyfriend which to me she has zero respect for.  I'm really curious as to what the consequences will be and how all of this will play out. Will she continue to be friends and talk with the guy she cheated on her boyfriend with. That would just confirm how little she respect Angelo and their relationship. This is when peoples morals and ethics come in to play. I curious as to what hers will be. Hopefully a new chapter will be out soon. Thx for sharing. 

Reviewer: Ms. Starsz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 22 2017 12:34 am

Title: -- 10 --

Insecure people most of the time end up cheating on their partner. Sometimes its not even worth wasting your time on them. Luciana is insecure and has a low self esteem. If Angelo was the one hanging around other chicks and ending up cheating on her, I doubt she would have been able to handle it. But then again I doubt she cares or has any real feelings for Angelo, otherwise she would have pulled back from that kiss before it even began. I'm sorry but as the chapter go by I like Luciana less and less and find myself wondering what Angelo sees in her and why he is wasting his time with her.



Author's Response:

I understand and partly agree with what you said. But the thing to remember is that people make mistakes, and people who are insecure often use other mechanisms to cover up their insecurities. Luciana is young, so by default, it allows room for more error. But of course there are always consequences.

Reviewer: Ms. Starsz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21 2017 04:01 am



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