Gah!!! I can't take it! The slow burn build up! I'm kidding, I love it! But I'm certain
that heffa of a shrew will show her face soon
Author's Response:
Aleta, you may or may not be happy to know that I altered the story a bit so she could do just that. Mainly because you brought it up. She was in total flotsam-n-jetsamvill.
Thank you for the review!^^
Reviewer: Aleta Signed
[Report This]Date: September 10 2015 10:16 pm
Kurtarici and Daniel have each allowed their attraction to show, yippee skippy!!! Can I just say,that I love this family? I love this family, they are cool peeps. For them to rich they appsar to be remarkably down to Earth. I am looking forward to watching their attraction grow and mature. Daniel won't be going home. Loving this story. You have created wonderful characters who are complete entities with rich lives. Awesome sauce!!!
Author's Response:
You may say so as many times as you like! They are a great family and I adore them as well. Thanks very much gayles, its encouraging to see you so into the characters and story.
Thanks for leaving your thoughts!^^
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2015 11:23 am
Daniel and Kurtarici are so cute. I like the way they tease each other and like being around each other.
Author's Response:
I'm satisfied with their relationship as well. I really want them to more than wet panties and hard arousals. That's what im going for anyway. Epic true love.
We'll see how it goes...
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment!^^
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2015 05:32 am
I'm curious to where are the other princes and what is Kurt. Why has this family really taken her into their fold. Faza is also an interesting character. Can't wait for more to be revealed.
Author's Response:
Very good thinking Lajacks. While they may have cameo appearances, I'll be focusing on the Okuz for now. You will learn about Kurt though. I like Faza's character as well and he only grows on me.
Thank you for coming this far with me. I hope you continue to enjoy It! ;)
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
[Report This]Date: September 10 2015 05:11 am
Love this story so far! Faza seems mysterious. Wonder what's the connection between Faza and the family? Is he trying to set up Daniel with Kurt? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
There is indeed a connection there. Give it a few updates baha. Thanks for continuing to read the story! ;)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2015 01:21 am
Alrighty then!! That dream was crazy or was it a memory given to her by the shared connection with Kurtirici?? I don't think that will be leaving aa she will marry Tawny ans the family from Adonia. Awesome sauce!!!
Author's Response:
I think your mind is moving in the right direction with question about the connection between Daniel and Kurt. Bravo!! The dream sequence was a mother to write so I'm pumping air that you liked it.
Thanks Ms gayles! ^^
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2015 11:22 am
Loved the update! Wonder why Kurt drew her into his life?
Author's Response:
I appreciate you letting me know you liked it. As to Kurt, I'm not quite sure he knows himself at this point. Thanks for taking the time baha! ^^
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 07 2015 02:28 am
I really like this! So interesting! I can't wait to read more soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment Rosie, I'm glad you are enjoying it thus far. ^^
Reviewer: Rosie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 06 2015 11:16 pm
Daniel is kind of ride, the doesn't like being called Kurt so stop it!! You could'very asked him if he minded. Voda and Mir are funny, I like those two as well. It's dark out, people with a brain in their head don't ride a bike in the dark. I am annoyed with Daneil, Kurt has been nothing but kind to you, put you are all attitudinal!! Please let get back to her domicile in one peace!! Is this going to be a paranormal story?
Author's Response:
I'm glad you feel so strongly about the story. I'm also excited to see you have become invested in the characters. Daniel and Kurt definitely have an unusual relationship, but they don't seem to mind. As to riding her bicycle at night...you've never done that? I highly recommend it. Just make sure there are some lights around. :)
to answer your last question, yes, the story will introduce more paranormal aspects as we go. Thanks for reading pmgayles!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2015 10:59 pm
I can be pretty clueless when it comes to spotting clues, so now I really want to know what is going to happen.
What I like most about Daniels is that even though she is 38, she's like a society rebel. She's doing things her own way, she's adventurous, she hasn't gone the accepted route of going uni, 9-5 job, getting married, having kids and all that.
She is her own woman and powerful and I sense a little vulnerability too which I have a feelign I might see in future chapters.
Looking forward to the next chap as always.(By the way I was the one that wrote your first comment, I just couldnt be bothered to log in lol)
Author's Response:
It's nice to have a name, thank you Caterina! I love the same thing about Daniel. And you are right, you will see more of her vulnerability later. As to not spotting clues. It is okay. Things will become clearer as we go. Hopefully I'll weave the story correctly. Thank you for reading and for the lovely comments.
Until next time! ;)
Reviewer: Caterina Signed [Report This]Date: September 02 2015 06:32 pm
I appreciate authors who do intensive research, it shows a true love for your cradt. I love the authenticity of your writing because of the research. Daniel is going to fall in love with Okuz. She seems to feel connection to this land and it's people. Why doesn't she have her own camera or a smartphone? She has traveled extensively in her life but doesn't own a camera? I like Kurt already!!
Author's Response:
Pmgayles you make an excellent point about the camera. Hmmm, we will assume that because it's a photographers precessional quality camera, it was a once in a lifetime opportunity.
Thank you for your acknowledgements, I really appreciate them. I hope you continue to enjoy the story! And keep calling me out too. ;)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 01 2015 12:05 pm
Okay so, I've never really been into the whole fantasy thing but something about your title intrigued me.
Author's Response:
Hello!
thank you so much for your review I appreciated your honesty and willingness to give the story a try. Also for acknowledging my research. I did indeed spend a lengthy amount of time deliberating over different aspect of my country. I wanted to make it as real as possible or at least open the possibility that it could be real.
i hope not to let you down! :)
Reviewer: anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 31 2015 07:36 pm