I don't like Mr. Rossi he's possessive, cocky and very annoying. Hiroto did right by not fighting him, let a group of your peers see how unstable he is. Rae needs to take her talents somewhere else because this man is not going to give up this dream of having her. Rae and Hiroto relationship is about to heat up YES!!!. Thanks for the update D&L
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: April 04 2016 02:19 pm
Good stuff!
Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2016 12:20 pm
This is a great story. Please continue
Reviewer: Water Signed [Report This]Date: March 28 2016 01:15 am
you are a wonderful writer in many ways: I can visualize the characters, feel the pain and see the growth of the charaters. You have grown and found your way to be at peace... Please continue share your gift with your fans.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2016 01:51 am
Historic is all man. He's a real man and I live how he's protective, sexy, sensitive, intelligent, honest...so many endearing qualities. Rae is gonna get it soon, but the right way. This chapter was perfect. Thanks for all the updates, of course I'm waiting on the next one!!! Oh and Rossi is on my nerves too! He needs to get over it and move on.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: March 27 2016 01:17 am
Wow, Rossi is such a ahole. Who was that trick, who said that Rae got around? That heifer knows nothing about Rae to make that assumption. THe scene where Rossi got tossed out of the gala made me smirk. Why did Roto allow Rossi to get the best of him? That kiss between those two was coming home after being on a mission for years, just beautiful. Rossi and Hoa are both in denial but Rossi is weak like Hoa. Looking forward to confrontation between Rae and adoptive donors. They are not better than her biological mother! Thank you for updating so swiftly!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 26 2016 05:43 am
Great update
Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed [Report This]Date: March 24 2016 01:05 am
Daniel is just like some men who think a woman who has a position of power recieved it lying on her back. Daniel was out of line! and Rossi should have been the one who set him in his place, because he knew what Daniel was talking about and he knew that it wasn't true. I loved how Roto stood up for his woman, he was the only real man in the room. I can't wait to see how this friendship blossom more. Thanks for the update D&L.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2016 08:18 pm
Wonderful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2016 06:49 pm
Rae and Roto's story is quite beautifully written...two damaged souls that are healing but still need each other to truly be whole...it's so good to see a love story where a black woman is valued for who she truly is...you have taken such time to carve out the characters of Rae and Roto and as a result this story is like a spiritual journey for them both...love it...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2016 04:36 pm
Yes, Rae is finally going to give Roto a real chance!! Has Roto dealt with Hoa yet? I know that you would write about it in the present and not in flashback. I want to read the scene and picture it in my head when Roto sends Hoa packing. I can't wait to see her wish washy, punk tail crying and whining saying but I love you Hiro!! I want him to finally say, " but I don't love you and I never have. " Those words leaving his mouth would make me so happy, especially if you use the 7up line, you know never had my love never will. Yippee skippy, Rodney Allen Rippy!!!!
DarkandLovely you have made my Wednesday morning!! Daniel Logan is punk and Roto should beat him like he stole his dollar. Thank you for this SMARVELOUS update!! (SMARVELOUS is smart and marvelous )
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 23 2016 02:03 pm
Wonderful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2016 12:13 pm
Ok so now they've seen each other...yay! What's up with Rossi though? He confuses me. Oh well please keep the updates coming.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 20 2016 04:06 am
Now it's time for their friendship to commence again. Thanks for the update D&L.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2016 03:04 pm
Roto is back in New York now and I want to know when he is sending Hoa packing? Will you give me and the other readers the pleasure of reading about it? When is Rae going to confront her adopted traitors?1
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 19 2016 06:10 am
Fantastic update...I love your writing style and the feelings that you put into your characters.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 19 2016 03:09 am
Reunited and it Feels so good!!! Roto was looking fine when they ran into each other. Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2016 11:27 pm
Wow, that was a deep chapter. Good job
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2016 07:46 am
Many blessings, just beautiful this story it's just so beautiful!
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2016 03:23 am
Girl..." Don't feel as though you have to carry the world on your shoulders... You're not alone anymore. When you get tired, I 'll carry you. When you get frustrated, I'll listen. When you need someone to comfort you, I'll wrap my arms around you. I'll defend and protect you. I'll cherish you all the days of my life and provide the best way I can. If you let me. " D&L THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2016 12:55 am
I like how Hiroto signed his letter to himself " The One Who Overcame " DEEP!!!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2016 12:45 am
Roto is fully enveloped in peace and serenity!! He has released all od his demons and is ready to love Rae fully and to the best of a ility. This chapter was full of warmth and love. Roto was spiritually reborn and he can fully love himself. Now Rae and Roto can come together free from all their demons and garbage and love themselves and each other fully!!
Have a great week DL!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2016 07:12 pm
Roto has finally forgiven himself and has found peace. I loved the letter that he wrote his sperm donor and he will have his son in his life but his incubator ain't got nothing coming. His life was heart breaking and to know that his parents who were suppose to love are the ones responsible for his pain is heart wrenching. The parents in this story areally an abomination and deserve to know nothing but pain and suffering. DL you did that damn thang!! Looking forward to Roto's and Rae's reunion.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 14 2016 06:10 am
I just absolutely adore this story and these characters. I really want the both of them to finally come together and truly heal. They deserve all the happiness in the world and I know that you will give them that wonderful ending, but I know for a fact that I will cry once this story is finished. Lol
Reviewer: Valentine Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 13 2016 01:38 pm
Thank you for sharing you story. Beautiful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2016 01:05 pm