Interesting, , though I can't get a firm read/feel of Jaime, the start of some of the conversations tend to be a little vague at times between who is now or who was talking. Show a better separation between dialogues. Other than, I like the story.Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 07:35 am
Oh wow. Now she is all alone. I hope that bastard doesn't find her. And I really want to know more about ole boy. What exactly is haunting him like that? Alex doesn't seem like a bad person so what's the issue?
Update soonReviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 03:48 am
This story is still very mysterious right now and I can't wait to find out more about Genevieve's husband and whatever it is Jamie is hiding from.Reviewer: annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 01:20 am
Soooo, she is with child; terrified and alone in witness protection. Dhe is in a small country /southern town, so she is bound to noticed.
Did Lanzo kill his Aunt? What line of work is he in? Ifhe didn't kill her, why didn't she call the policeor excape herself?
I positively love this story so far. Keep up the great writing.Reviewer: Lovely Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 02:45 pm
So she is pregnant by that fool, I know that she is afraid. Genho your husband didn't love you, he beat you and treated you shit. Genho be glad that you got away from that asshole. Quit the crying and just be happy that you are still alive. That your baby has a chance to unscathed by your abusive relationship with it's donor.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 11:32 pm