Reviews For STANDING FAITH
Title: BUTTERFLY

I'm happy she tried to get away, when Howard said " It don't need to be a girl cause then it would be you all over again you dumb b*tch" meaning I will do to her what has been done to you. I'm currently 32 weeks pregnant with twin girls and you are right I'm carrying high, I don't know their names yet because my husband named them months ago when we found out we were having girl's and he wont tell me their names until they are born, but I know their names will start with a M that's my only stipulation, right now I call them my "Beautiful Surprises". Man! it burns me up! that no one tried to help this child, even after witnessing her get hit, OH HELL NO!!!!. Now she's all alone again no baby, no family, no life and to her no hope. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 08:29 pm

Title: BUTTERFLY

Howard needs to die!  Why didn't the the hospital report this to child services, ahe is a pregnant teenager with a grown ass man?  I hate her donors even more now. There is a speial place in hell for Howard!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 08:04 pm

Title: BUTTERFLY

Kay, at this point the hospital should have intervened.  They would have taken her to a private area and asked if she felt safe at home, especially with the type of injuries she had.  This is still a 15yr old girl and there should be some questions asked.  I can't believe her mother allowed this travesty to happen.  If she didn't like it happening to her and in a new country.   I will be honest and say I can't understand and I am coming from a position of ignorance with regards to the traditions she has grown up with but sometimes love and the right thing to do has to outweigh that.  If we kept that thought, we would still be in chains right now without the small, minute successes we have had.  I am all in my emotions right now.  Time to woo-sah and calm down and realize it is just a book but at the same time, understanding there is some girl going thru this BS for real.  Deep breathing.

 



Author's Response:

Didn't mean to make you upset lajack1 and it's sad that things like this actually happen. The only reason her mother allowed this to happen was beacuse she actually felt that this was her daughter's place in society as a female and Faith didn't feel comfortable going to her mother since she was the one who put her in that situation in the first place.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 06:33 pm

Title: TRAINING

Supreb!!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 01:10 am

Title: TRAINING

I'm a firm believer that a women can be and do anything a man can. How dare they try to put her in a box, Faith is strong she's a fighter and more important she's a survivor. I now understand why Faith has that attitude about authority, she had to call her rapist sir. I don't know about you but if Dominique open her mouth one more time I'm opening up a can of "Beat that hoe down" on her, I hate jealous women. I'm hoping Conrad and Faith team up and train for the PST together. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 08:20 pm

Title: TRAINING

I love the update.  Keep them coming. And please, please, stop calling Comrad Sergeant, call him Petty officer, tell me his job and I tell how another way to address him I was an Ak2 (E5), hubby is an IC1(E6), which is a first class which you indicated  Conrad was.What is his job and I will tell the job letters and the number to call him.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 05:10 pm

Title: TRAINING

Why did Faith go to juvenile? Is Howard dead, please say yes? Please tell me that she killed him to be free?? Please tell me that her donors are under the jail? I feel nothing but pure hatred for her donors and Howard!!! If they aren't dead them kill them, please?!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 03:06 pm

Title: TRAINING

Can't wait to see what you have in store

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07 2015 01:40 pm

Title: PERMANENT NIGHTMARE

What they did to that child is unhuman to me, this child was 13 years old not 33 and they are going to marry her off to a man who's 27 years older then her. I think her mother and father and husband should be charged with child prostitution, statutory rape, human trafficking and child abuse. I'm glad her life situations didn't break her but made her strong and a warrior princess in my eye's. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 05:21 pm

Title: PREVIEW

I  like  what you have so far, but there a few things that bugs me because my husband and I  was in the Navy. Petty Officers can't stand to be call sergeant and Faith would be at least a PO4 or she would be out of the Navy. After 6 yrs you have to be an E4 or you will be put out.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 03:16 pm

Title: PERMANENT NIGHTMARE

Very nice

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 03:13 pm

Title: PREVIEW

Very good

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 03:10 pm

Title: PERMANENT NIGHTMARE

Okay, I feel beyond sick to my stomach because of the reality that as we speak these barbaic practices are still going on. But, I applaud for your amazing writing and descriptions that strucked and plucked a cord inside of me; Significantly, drawing an array of emotions and feelings. One of them being a deep disgust and hate for Howard and resentment towards the mother, but just like the intangible faith is just gets stronger with trials, tribulations and trouble. And I also really beyond a doubt emphathise with Faith and see how her present behaviors and actions; Also, reactions in dealing with Ramsey and her superiors can burgeon out of her horrific past.

Reviewer: Ms_Kisha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 08:36 am

Title: PERMANENT NIGHTMARE

Wow. So sad!  My heart is breaking for Faith. To be abandoned by her family like that!! 😰

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 04:43 am

Title: PERMANENT NIGHTMARE

WOW!

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 12:06 am

Title: PERMANENT NIGHTMARE

How is that legal here in the states?  Her father song her to that man?  I seriously hate her donors and I hope that they died an horrific death.  Kill the parents and that per error that she was forced to marry!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 12:05 am

Title: PREVIEW

Great job, can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: alee92 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 02:12 pm

Title: PREVIEW

Hell yeah... I Love it!!!

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 08:46 am

Title: PREVIEW

I'm not going to lie, I really fell in love with the beginnings of Restoring Faith. I as well am loving what Standing Faith is all about and really love the whole concept you took in creating this story with the whole modern-day perspective.

 

Faith: I really love seeing how this character is a determined and hard-working woman, but who does come across a little headstrong (Presumably, because of her past?) Which, I am looking forward in reading to see how that shaped Faith's psyche, mindset and attitude because she reads as a woman who has a tough shell to hide her sensitive and sweet interior. Coming from the point of how she quickly addressed to the base being her home. I can't wait to see how you'll beautifully develop Faith's character, within her own self as well as with Ramsey.

 

Ramsey (My bad, Sergeant Ramsey): Man, oh man. Mmh-mmh-mmh. He reads as a tough, disciplined yet sexy cookie. Because, I saw how he sweetly interacted with Hoe-ther, I'm sorry I meant Heather. (Tramp is what a Tramp does because dang, how can you cheat on the man you claim to love, who is also working his tail off to provide a stable home and provide for your frivolous needs plus that beautiful kitchen you're sitting in as you Skype. Because, a sorry excuse on how he's so far away can cut 1) You cheated 2) You're pregnant by said lover 3) You're stringing Ramsey along for the dang ride, making him believe that's his seed cooking in your oven, just the deception because that is some BALLS she has to do that, hmmm) Rant, aside, he reads like a fine, dominant man, who won't take any bull crap from Faith and I'm all for that relationship building. So, if this long thesis of a review don't say anything, I am already a fan of Standing Faith and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Ms_Kisha Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 01:57 am

Title: PREVIEW

Heather is a ho, passing off another man's baby as her husbands.   The ho should perish in some horrific accident with her baby's daddy.  Loving this story!! More please!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 12:30 am

Title: PREVIEW

Who says it's a man's world, and women or only allowed to live in it. I say get your Faith you deserve it just like any man would. Would they make it hard for her YES! but she seems to have the spunk and will to get through it. I feel sorry for conrad it seems like JODY has stepped into his relationship with Heather, Jody means the guy at home having sex with your wife or significant other while you are on deployment. I guess Heather was not strong enough to resist. I hope Corad find out before he marries Heather or all his benefits goes to a child that not even his. I like this story MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 09:23 pm



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