His parents were evil ,is his incubator still alive? If she is dead I hope her death was painful, and that it took to her a long time to expire. I think that Willow and Sebastian/Nathaniel can heal each other.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14 2017 12:09 am
Thank you so much for this update !
I am really curious to know how and why Sebastian reconnected with his father because if I understood well he was raised by his crazy "single" mother...
I didn't know that he was à policeman too...
There is so mych to discover about his past ! And the futur for Willow and him.
Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2017 07:43 pm
Wow... his upbringing was horrible. How could anyone entice their child like that? And when they react on it and give you exactly what you want then its woe it's me. No! You asked for it and now you're getting it. That dream is crazy. I wonder if that's how they died though. I mean, they were just chilling and the shots came out of nowhere type of thing. I wonder where those wounds came from on Willow, I don't remember her getting hurt in any way.
Hey, KeiKei! Willow got her wounds from the previous chapter when she fell on broken glass. The dream is a mix between memories and a horrific nightmare. The interaction between Nathaniel, his wife Giselle, and Valerie are real up to the jumping on the bed by Valerie, but violence is fabricated by the nightmare. However, the bullet wounds that were inflicted on them are a true detail. Valerie was shot in the chest. Giselle was shot six times. Nathaniel played no part in their deaths. Their deaths were an act of revenge against him when he was a police officer. Hope this helps.Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2017 06:22 pm
Wow! this chapter was intense... I loved the flashback. Sebastian is a torture soul. His childhood was horrible with his mother, no wonder he was so acceptable to Juliette and her mind games. He has to be deprogrammed from this cult... because that's what that organization is a diabolical cult. I hope Willow can help save him from himself. MJ, now I get the title to this story. I was thinking Willow was the one trying to be saved but Sebastian is the one that needs saving. Great chapter honey! and thank you for it.
Your feedback and encouragement means a lot, thank you, Mrs. Jacqua. I am glad you noticed why Sebastian is so desensitized to Juliette's mind games. Why he lets her do it. It all goes back to his childhood. I really like the comparsion you made between the company and a cult. It is very much like a cult. I am so happy you understand the title now! In the beginning, Willow did need to be saved physically and mentally. She was attacked by a madman and she suffered from low self-esteem. Sebastian exposed her to the fact that she was beautiful and very much wanted. But the title has always pointed to Sebastian needing to be saved from himself. :)Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2017 05:45 pm
Is that person dead??
Is who dead?Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 13 2017 02:17 pm
Poor Sebastian...he needs to try and talk this out with Willow so it doesn't completely destroy their marriage, even though there are some fringe benefits ;-p
Next chapter will definitely address that.Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2017 11:54 am
Yay!! Can't wait to read more of this! You're dragging it out and I need to know the end!Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 12 2017 08:26 pm
This was a very good chapter. I'm glad that Willow is starting to understand him, it doesn't excuse killing someone but I completely get it. I just don't need Sabastian to loose it. I'm afraid of what he will do if he does. I feel like he will kill without a second thought in this state if you look at Willow or him in the wrong way. Not good!
I completely understand, the school year is always hectic at the end. Between the students trying to do thngs last minute and end of year duties for teachers. It's a lot. They don't understand how much we need summer vacations. LOl. Update soon!Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2017 08:07 pm
I love the way that you've written these two characters. At first, He saved Willow both literally and figuratively. He made her feel desired and wanted when she did not believe that she was those things. Now she is the one "saving him."
Reviewer: anouk Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 10:56 pm
Sebastian and Willow are two lost souls but they can find themselves together not apart. When she told him " We're going to be okay " that was giving him HOPE. MJ, Honey try not to stress over that peace stealer. God moves mountains he can move teachers to. Thanks honey for this update.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 01:45 pm
Great update as always.
I am really curious to see how Willow will save Sebastian. This journey is like a roller coaster. When I think of something, you always push me in the other direction. This trip was for Willow's forgiveness and now it is more to Sebastian's humanity.
I hope your muse is not going anywhere soon and that you can post more chapters.
And for your job issues : keep calm, say hello, say goodbye, answers her questions but don't try more. People always try to have informations from you to turn it against yourself. So, minimize contact as possible with her.
Have a great day.Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 08:57 am
I am so glad you are back. Hopefully Willow can save Sebastian before he self-destructs.
I totally understand how grade level shake ups can throw you. This is the 3rd year we have lost great teachers and there were unwanted moves by administration. I'm afraid of what this year will hold!Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 03:13 am
I am happy that you are getting your muse back. I beleive that WIllow's love can help heal him. Willow remember you are just messed up as well, your childhood wasn't lollipops. Give the man a break and help him come to terms with his life.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2017 03:12 am
Lol now that's some make up sex. But I'm glad that he knows that all is not forgiven and he still has a ways to go before he is completely back in her good graces. But in the meantime, she should get hers. It seems to be worth it. LOl.
Update soonReviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2017 06:42 pm