When you come back, you came with a bang! Poor Willow, although I am glad she is showing sadness for Simon loss. She has enough remorse for that bad husband of her's. Glad he is not giving up, either.
J. needs to be taken care of, esp for sending someone out to film S. while he was working. Maybe S. didn't finish off Simon, but the person fiming did and it is on the DVD. Wistful thinking; looking for a straw that Willow can hold onto and fogive S.
Thank you, Penelope! :) Your take on Willow's remorse is absolutely head-on. Willow does have enough remorse for the both of them because Sebastian had already said in the last chapter that he didn't regret taking Simon's life. Juliette's time is coming as well. :)Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 03:14 am
I feel for Willow. I couldn't imagine dealing with being the indirect cause of someones death. Simon was not a nice person but Willow is, so her guilt is understandable. I want her to accept that Sebastian loves her enough to protect and avenge her at any cost, so that she can find peace and kick Juliette's behind! Can't wait for next update.
I, myself, wouldn't know what it's like to be the indirect cause of someone's death and fight the reality of still loving the man who was the direct cause. I absolutely agree that Simon was not a good person, but Willow is very much, so that guilt eating her alive is understandable. Her marriage with Sebastian is deeply wounded, but the next chapter will begin the healing process. Thank you so much for your time and your review! :)Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 03:11 am
Why does she wish she were dead? Simon's life is not worth more than hers, it sad that he's dead but he did you wrong. His death is not your fault you didn't put that bat in Sebastian/Nathaniel's hands. No one will love for who you are like he can. Nathaniel isn't a monter, his father made him murderer.
Willow wished she was dead because she felt like she indirectly played a role in Simon's death. She was the one who said she wished he were dead in a moment of weakness and Sebastian acted on it. She didn't put the bat in his hands, but she still feels responsible for Simon's demise. That guilt is eating away at her because she knows that Sebastian killed Simon and she still loves him. I think it is a difficult situation to learn your husband murdered someone for you and you still love him after all of that. In the previously-uploaded story, Willow confronted Sebastian then accepted it. I feel that her reaction and response to this situation is much more realistic. Thank you so much for your review, pmgayles. I appreciate it! :)Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 02:30 am
Disappointing! Willow is ridiculous. Is she upset because she wanted Simon dead or was she in love with the a-hole? I'm done...can't take her weak a$s.
I'm sorry you feel that way, but thank you for investing your time into the story as much as you did.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 02:23 am
Wow... What a way to find out that your new husband is really about that life. LOl. The fact that he wanted her to kill him is truly scary. And I think she still wants to jump his bones even after all that. Haha. I wonder if he will tell her. I think he will because her leaving him will do more damage than her shooting him in my opinion. So time to spill the beans hubby!!!
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Date: July 13 2016 08:26 am
So, Willow is a fully grown woman with familial issues who continues hanging out with her disrespectful family. Why? I'm confused, this isn't anything I would put up with - blood doesn't make you family.<p>On the other hand, Will IS very defensive. If you're going to go to lunch, go to lunch. It's way too easy to look places up online (hello, Yelp) before visiting them. If your judgmental mother and sister invite you someplace, look it up, see if you think you'll be judged, skip accordingly. I don't know, she Just keeps putting herself in situations and then balking at said situations like she didn't know exactly what she was getting herself into. Also, take your phone with you everywhere you go, you don't leave that thing in the car!</p><p>Ah, Willow is DEEPLY insecure, I get it now. Starving yourself is insane, working out while starving yourself is insane and stupid. Girl, bye. You better get a bacon, egg and cheese. He is a man, not a computer, and him kissing you was sexual assault. Girl, take your sister up on her personal trainer, not because it would work better but because it would be SAFER. Be fucking safe. This girl needs to take care of HERSELF, that totally includes making sure you're strong enough to workout. Come on, Google how to get that body poppin'! </p><p>Sounds like a BEAUTIFUL home, Seb. I'd like to rent the place one weekend. Lol, let's get physical! You found her passed out and brought her to your house because...? Dude, put a strong scent under her nose (I prefer bacon) and wait 'til she comes around! </p><p>I'll take a gift card to Macy's, they sell pots and pans I love. </p><p>Um, you can't tell this man what he likes, lol. </p><p>Hah, he might seriously be insane, though, for real! I imagined myself as Flavor Flav as I typed that. Good times. </p>Reviewer: Die A Mouse Death Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 02:47 pm
So they became man and wife. I feel for Willow but she should have investigated Sebastian before they got married, with all the tool's out there to help her. I see them staying together with her thinking she could change him, and I think she could try. Sebastain needs to teach Willow how to defend herself and she needs to know about J, and what he does for a living. Thanks for the updateReviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 12:10 pm
Awesome sauce!!!Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 12:08 pm
I love how this story is evolving. At first I thought of Willow as the type of woman who needed saving now it's totally changed Sebastian definitely needs Willow. Love how the character development in this story. This is such a nail biter!Reviewer: Nana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 11:34 pm
Wow.... That is truly how you make up. Lol. I'm glad they are back together. I hope this isn't a rush decision because he just doesn't want to see her with someone else. Sadly, I'm glad that she said yes. LOl. Wedding!!!!!!!
UPdate soonReviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 01:39 am