Title: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Merci pour ce ansewring! Et bien sûr, ne peut pas attendre de voir ce qui se passe ensuite :)

 

Seriously, you made my day !

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 02:53 pm

Title: Self Destruct

I do think this version of Willow is more realistic.  I don't know any sane woman that in finding out her boyfriend brutally killed her coworker would be okay with that and just keep it moving like its no big deal.  Frankly, I'd be running for the hills.  

 

I just hope in the next chapter on healing that you don't make Willow's inevitable surrender too easy or too quick.  As you said she's an ordinary girl caught up in a world of darkness and violence.  Some good loving by Nathaniel/Sebastian might help relax and relieve the tension she's experiencing, but it won't make the the situation that caused it to disappear.  Great sex does not heal mental wounds.

 

Reviewer: Avidreadernotwriter Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 11:47 am

Title: Self Destruct

Wow. I have to say that I am really impressed to see that Nathaniel said all the truth (right ?). That show us how much he cares about Willow, but we already know. Even if he killed someone for her, he told her. Trust someone at this point to speak about something like this is crazy... But I kind of like it. The end of the chapter is heart breaking. Willow wants to kill herself because she loves Sebastian. 

 

Sorry for bad english but I'm french.



Author's Response:

Nathaniel loves Willow unconditionally (no doubt unhealthily), but he cares about her deeply and trusts her entirely. He kept mim because she didn't know that he orchestrated Simon's death, but once she did and he realized that he was going to lose her from all of the secrets, he spilled it all no matter how painful for him and importantly, her. Willow is in a very difficult place in an extremely difficult situation. She thought killing herself might be the easy way out, but we all know it's not. Also, your English is perfectly fine! :)

Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 11:15 am

Title: Self Destruct

Is the original version for us to read somewhere ?



Author's Response:

Not at this time. The orginial version had been converted to a PDF file and transferred from my old computer to this computer. I would have to change the PDF into a document then upload it most likely into the Vault, but the orginial version is very incomplete. I never finished it. I removed it to revise it into this version.

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:47 am

Title: Self Destruct

Sorry I meant *unintentionally*.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:42 am

Title: Self Destruct

I get the point of view from both sides. Willow has a deep sated guilt over Simon's death (though he may have been a jerk, she believes that he did not deserve to die. I hate to agree, but that's true). She riled him up and then turned him loose (untenionally) and Simon paid the price.

Sebastian loves Willow and knowing that someone hurt her like Simon did, he did what came naturally to him eliminate the problem. Maybe he sees Willow as a saving grace, if someone as sweet and loving as her can truly love me, I must not be all bad and there must be something about me worth saving.

I don't think anyone will ever love Willow that much, not even her family. (especially her family).



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you understand where I was coming from when I wrote it like this! I especially love your explanation on Sebastian. That is exactly what I was going for. Thank you so much for your review, Sarah.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:40 am

Title: Self Destruct

Wow!  You can really feel Willow's pain. I feel so bad for her. I hope she can find some way to deal with this before she does self destruct. 



Author's Response:

All she needs is some time and lots of persistence from Sebastian. :)

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:22 am

Title: Self Destruct

Poor Willow...she loves her monster Sebastain...good update....



Author's Response:

She sure does, but they've got a lot of healing to do. Thank you, jahchannah! :)

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 03:28 am

Title: Self Destruct

When you come back, you came with a bang!  Poor Willow, although I am glad she is showing sadness for Simon loss.  She has enough remorse for that bad husband of her's.  Glad he is not giving up, either.

 J. needs to be taken care of, esp for sending someone out to film S. while he was working.  Maybe S. didn't finish off Simon, but the person fiming did and it is on the DVD. Wistful thinking; looking for a straw that Willow can hold onto and fogive S. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Penelope! :) Your take on Willow's remorse is absolutely head-on. Willow does have enough remorse for the both of them because Sebastian had already said in the last chapter that he didn't regret taking Simon's life. Juliette's time is coming as well. :)

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 03:14 am

Title: Self Destruct

I feel for Willow. I couldn't imagine dealing with being the indirect cause of someones death. Simon was not a nice person but Willow is, so her guilt is understandable. I want her to accept that Sebastian loves her enough to protect and avenge her at any cost, so that she can find peace and kick Juliette's behind! Can't wait for next update.



Author's Response:

I, myself, wouldn't know what it's like to be the indirect cause of someone's death and fight the reality of still loving the man who was the direct cause. I absolutely agree that Simon was not a good person, but Willow is very much, so that guilt eating her alive is understandable. Her marriage with Sebastian is deeply wounded, but the next chapter will begin the healing process. Thank you so much for your time and your review! :)

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 03:11 am

Title: Self Destruct

Why does she wish she were dead?  Simon's life is not worth more than hers, it sad that he's dead but he did you wrong.  His death is not your fault you didn't put that bat in Sebastian/Nathaniel's hands.  No one will love for who you are like he can.  Nathaniel isn't a monter, his father made him murderer.



Author's Response:

Willow wished she was dead because she felt like she indirectly played a role in Simon's death. She was the one who said she wished he were dead in a moment of weakness and Sebastian acted on it. She didn't put the bat in his hands, but she still feels responsible for Simon's demise. That guilt is eating away at her because she knows that Sebastian killed Simon and she still loves him. I think it is a difficult situation to learn your husband murdered someone for you and you still love him after all of that. In the previously-uploaded story, Willow confronted Sebastian then accepted it. I feel that her reaction and response to this situation is much more realistic. Thank you so much for your review, pmgayles. I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 02:30 am

Title: Self Destruct

Disappointing! Willow is ridiculous. Is she upset because she wanted Simon dead or was she in love with the a-hole? I'm done...can't take her weak a$s.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you feel that way, but thank you for investing your time into the story as much as you did.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 02:23 am

Title: Monster's Wife

Wow... What a way to find out that your new husband is really about that life. LOl. The fact that he wanted her to kill him is truly scary. And I think she still wants to jump his bones even after all that. Haha. I wonder if he will tell her. I think he will because her leaving him will do more damage than her shooting him in my opinion. So time to spill the beans hubby!!!

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2016 08:26 am

Title: Slim Whims

So, Willow is a fully grown woman with familial issues who continues hanging out with her disrespectful family. Why? I'm confused, this isn't anything I would put up with - blood doesn't make you family.<p>On the other hand, Will IS very defensive. If you're going to go to lunch, go to lunch. It's way too easy to look places up online (hello, Yelp) before visiting them. If your judgmental mother and sister invite you someplace, look it up, see if you think you'll be judged, skip accordingly. I don't know, she Just keeps putting herself in situations and then balking at said situations like she didn't know exactly what she was getting herself into. Also, take your phone with you everywhere you go, you don't leave that thing in the car!</p><p>Ah, Willow is DEEPLY insecure, I get it now. Starving yourself is insane, working out while starving yourself is insane and stupid. Girl, bye. You better get a bacon, egg and cheese. He is a man, not a computer, and him kissing you was sexual assault. Girl, take your sister up on her personal trainer, not because it would work better but because it would be SAFER. Be fucking safe. This girl needs to take care of HERSELF, that totally includes making sure you're strong enough to workout. Come on, Google how to get that body poppin'! </p><p>Sounds like a BEAUTIFUL home, Seb. I'd like to rent the place one weekend. Lol, let's get physical! You found her passed out and brought her to your house because...? Dude, put a strong scent under her nose (I prefer bacon) and wait 'til she comes around! </p><p>I'll take a gift card to Macy's, they sell pots and pans I love. </p><p>Um, you can't tell this man what he likes, lol. </p><p>Hah, he might seriously be insane, though, for real! I imagined myself as Flavor Flav as I typed that. Good times. </p>

Reviewer: Die A Mouse Death Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 08 2016 02:47 pm

Title: Monster's Wife

RAW.  and DELICIOUS.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 10:35 pm

Title: Monster's Wife

Sooooooooo goooood! Please update soon! Sebastian is just it for me! He appeals to my fantasy crazy side! I'm loving Willow's dominance!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 05:39 am

Title: Monster's Wife

Willow is turning into a different person. She needs to decide if she really wants the good with the bad in her marriage. Too many  people don't treat Willow well. Sebastian worships her. 

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 01:42 am

Title: Monster's Wife

So they became man and wife. I feel for Willow but she should have investigated Sebastian before they got married, with all the tool's out there to help her. I see them staying together with her thinking she could change him, and I think she could try. Sebastain needs to teach Willow how to defend herself and she needs to know about J, and what he does for a living. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 12:10 pm

Title: Monster's Wife

Awesome sauce!!!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 12:08 pm

Title: Monster's Wife

This gave me life...

"You're a sick fuck," she hissed.

He countered huskily, "I'm your sick fuck."

 

That was literary gold. 😉

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 06:12 am

Title: Monster's Wife

How in the world could they possibly get through this?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?

Got my heart palpitating!!!! Ugh!!!!

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 02:48 am

Title: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

I love how this story is evolving. At first  I thought of Willow as the type of woman who needed saving now it's totally changed Sebastian definitely needs Willow. Love how the character development in this story. This is such a nail biter! 

Reviewer: Nana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 11:34 pm

Title: Monster's Wife

OMG!  That.Was.In-tense!!!!!   Wow!  WTF?!?! Can't imagine being in Willow's shoes right now.  Bas needs to fess up!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 01:59 am

Title: Monster's Wife

Did happy dance for the update! Pleaseeee let Willow torture Juliette before ending her.

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 04:42 pm

Title: Monster's Wife

I'm so conflicted. This story has me tied up in knots. I can't figure out Sebastian.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 03:58 pm



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