Some parts of Brazil is so breathtaking and it seems he found the perfect spot. Sometimes you need a change of scenery to regroup and reconnect. Sebastian is during all the things in his power to get his woman back, but Willow is not going to make it easy for him ( stand your ground willow, and making him work! ) I hope she has the will power, because Sebastian is sex on a stick LOL!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2017 05:21 pm
i don't think Willow is frustrating, simply being realistic. How many people can be with someone who killed another in cold blood, even if that person was viled and probably deserved it, especially if it was done on their behalf?
She'll probably blame the alcohol and be a little difficult for awhile. I would really her like to realize that she is not responsible for Simon's death. She had no clue about Sebastian's intentions. The reality however, is that she will always bear that burden and so will Sebastian.
What Willow will have to do in order to move on is accept what has happened and the fact that she can't change it. However, if she wants to with him, accept what he has done, that he never meant to hurt her intentionally. She can never change what he did nor who he was/is, but love him and let him love her, in spite of it.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 24 2017 12:46 pm
Hot update! I can't wait to see what Sebastian has in store for winning Willow over, but I must say, he's off to a good start. But damn, he pulled a 1st degree ... I'm not quite sure what/ how he can redeem himself from that and earn her trust again. I so can't wait to see where this is going! Love it! Thanks for the update! d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;!!! 😁Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 10:14 am
Willow Sebastian loves, he proved his love to when he killed that cruel sap sucker Simon. However, his murder is not your fault the fault is entirely Sebastian's. She is blaming him for the guilt that she feels and for not telling the authorities what she knows. The guilt you feel is all yours WIllow, either forgive Seb or report what you know to the police.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 01:23 am
Omg, plz update. I'm loving this, trying to figure out what I'd do in her place....go absolutely crazy!Reviewer: Cindi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 11:39 pm
Omg! I'm totally sucked into this fabulous story.... love it!Reviewer: cindi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 10:44 pm
Poor Willow, when you love someone you usually love them so hard and that Is how Sebastian loves willow. But in Willow's defense you can still love the person, but hate the sin. I hope it gets better for them. Thanks for this update MJ.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2016 04:30 pm
I loved this chapter. It seemed so real. It's all the emotions that any person would feel after learning those kinds of things about the one you love. Personally, I don't think you have to explain yourself to anyone, it's your story. I can see why you did it but you're the one writing this so go wherever your muse takes you. I'm enjoying the ride. LOl. I wonder where he takes her? She really needs to figure out if she's going to accept his life or not.. Until then, she won't be able to heal from anything and it will continue to eat her alive. Hopefully she can move on from this.
Update soon.Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 05:52 am
I do think this version of Willow is more realistic. I don't know any sane woman that in finding out her boyfriend brutally killed her coworker would be okay with that and just keep it moving like its no big deal. Frankly, I'd be running for the hills.
I just hope in the next chapter on healing that you don't make Willow's inevitable surrender too easy or too quick. As you said she's an ordinary girl caught up in a world of darkness and violence. Some good loving by Nathaniel/Sebastian might help relax and relieve the tension she's experiencing, but it won't make the the situation that caused it to disappear. Great sex does not heal mental wounds.
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Date: August 28 2016 11:47 am
Wow. I have to say that I am really impressed to see that Nathaniel said all the truth (right ?). That show us how much he cares about Willow, but we already know. Even if he killed someone for her, he told her. Trust someone at this point to speak about something like this is crazy... But I kind of like it. The end of the chapter is heart breaking. Willow wants to kill herself because she loves Sebastian.
Sorry for bad english but I'm french.
Reviewer: FeelSoClose Signed [Report This] Nathaniel loves Willow unconditionally (no doubt unhealthily), but he cares about her deeply and trusts her entirely. He kept mim because she didn't know that he orchestrated Simon's death, but once she did and he realized that he was going to lose her from all of the secrets, he spilled it all no matter how painful for him and importantly, her. Willow is in a very difficult place in an extremely difficult situation. She thought killing herself might be the easy way out, but we all know it's not. Also, your English is perfectly fine! :)
Nathaniel loves Willow unconditionally (no doubt unhealthily), but he cares about her deeply and trusts her entirely. He kept mim because she didn't know that he orchestrated Simon's death, but once she did and he realized that he was going to lose her from all of the secrets, he spilled it all no matter how painful for him and importantly, her. Willow is in a very difficult place in an extremely difficult situation. She thought killing herself might be the easy way out, but we all know it's not. Also, your English is perfectly fine! :)
Date: August 28 2016 11:15 am
Is the original version for us to read somewhere ?
Not at this time. The orginial version had been converted to a PDF file and transferred from my old computer to this computer. I would have to change the PDF into a document then upload it most likely into the Vault, but the orginial version is very incomplete. I never finished it. I removed it to revise it into this version.Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:47 am
Sorry I meant *unintentionally*.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:42 am
I get the point of view from both sides. Willow has a deep sated guilt over Simon's death (though he may have been a jerk, she believes that he did not deserve to die. I hate to agree, but that's true). She riled him up and then turned him loose (untenionally) and Simon paid the price.
Sebastian loves Willow and knowing that someone hurt her like Simon did, he did what came naturally to him eliminate the problem. Maybe he sees Willow as a saving grace, if someone as sweet and loving as her can truly love me, I must not be all bad and there must be something about me worth saving.
I don't think anyone will ever love Willow that much, not even her family. (especially her family).
I am so glad that you understand where I was coming from when I wrote it like this! I especially love your explanation on Sebastian. That is exactly what I was going for. Thank you so much for your review, Sarah.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:40 am
Wow! You can really feel Willow's pain. I feel so bad for her. I hope she can find some way to deal with this before she does self destruct.
All she needs is some time and lots of persistence from Sebastian. :)Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2016 05:22 am