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Title: Chapter 4

I had this story saved in my favorites and just re-read it. Why did you never complete?

 

 Reviewer: Tracy Reynolds Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2021 01:34 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Hi, I really liked this story,  are you going to continue??

 Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 04 2017 02:23 pm
Title: No Fury

I love it.

 Reviewer: kier101 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 01:09 am
Title: Chapter 4

Welcome back! Long time no read! I had to reread my original comment to remind myself.

To tell the truth, I'm not so interested in the machinations of the aunt Lorraine. I am more interested in how the sister could be so bipolar. Why does she feel so powerless compared toher sister that she feels she has to do that? What broke her?

Plus, is a divorce paper signed at gunpoint still valid?

 

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2016 04:46 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Marissa has met a real man and will become pregnant, that is my predication  Hopefully her sister will lose that baby, it would be karmarific!!

 Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 10:24 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Girl.. you are right! with family like that , who needs enemies. Aunt Lorraine needs to sweep around her own door Ms. Backstabber. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 07:04 pm
Title: Feeding The pain

she should have shot Marx in the balls and her sister in her left tit! 

 Reviewer: sjrucker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 05:25 am
Title: How the great fall

What the hell happen to Marie? was she raped? and by who?. That damn sister has got to go, this B*tch thinks that just because she said she was sorry that negates her actions B*tch Please! she needs to go where the baby father is. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 10 2015 04:25 pm
Title: How the great fall

Wow! I wonder what happened to her. Her little sister is a d@mn trip. What will she do now that she's pregnant?  

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2015 06:04 pm
Title: How the great fall

I remember this story from a ways back & it leaving off with her finding out about her sister pregnancy & all the drama that followed & it bent a little longer in the story. Now this one seemed a bit more polished but I kinda stuck on one part. She blacks, the guy that was watching her is waiting for her but don't see her come out & her car is still there then sees the bar guy dragging something in the Alley that seems suspicious & leaves & he doesn't check but leaves I take it to because she woke up sore in an alley then drove herself home. That part kinda didn't fit & didn't make sense to me. Other wise great writing can't wait for the next update

Author's Response:

I don't really understand what you don't understand, but would urge you to be patient. If your concerns are not addressed later on in the story then we can say we have a problem. I took it down to rewrite and polish it up, so I am thankful that the effort is noted. Thank you for the review and I will try to clarify the problem areas, rest  your concerns and not render you too confused. Please keep reading.

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 09 2015 10:38 am
Title: No Fury

Before or after we get to what happened in the alley, I need an explanation as to why Angie would think such behaviour is appropriate! Is she so spoiled? Or so jealous of her sister? Or what?

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 08 2015 07:47 pm
Title: How the great fall

I did forget to add that I'm kinda confused about the alley situation myself. As a previous poster said, it would be creepy if this dude either assaulted a drunk woman and/or just left her in an alley. Its going to be interesting to see how you resolve it.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2015 04:48 am
Title: How the great fall

Wow, I'm sure this sh%t happens all the time to people, but damn. Marie has gone through hell. So, it seems as though she was beaten by the bartender or whoever decided to beat her because she was out cold. I don't know, I didn't think the bartender would freakin assault her, but strong evidence seems he did. Who is this asshole in his car talking about plans with Marie? Wow. It's not a far stretch to believe she was most likely raped, could be possibly pregnant (maybe not since that witch Angel said she couldn't have kids), and possibly have a disease.  What asshole who rapes women in alleys uses condoms. Their ass has been EVERYWHERE and don't care how they get off as long as is has a hole. This story seems like heartbreak. But again, things like this and worse happen all the time so it's very believable and sad. Things can get better or worse, but fiction can go either way. 



Author's Response:

That's the beauty of it all. Thank you for the review. Keep reading*

 Reviewer: Anna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2015 04:45 am
Title: How the great fall

I'm sorry but I just can't see how the bartender would drag her outside and leave her in an alley. She would be assaulted, which it appears is what happened and I'm assuming she ends up pregnant which is the reason she has to discover what happened that night.

I don't know how to critique. This seems like a creeper and I just don't see how you're going to get us to love a hero who watched her be dragged into an alley and then assaults her and then also leaves her in the alley although he had imagined this wonderful life for them.



Author's Response:

Like Anna said, with fiction things can go anyway and anywhere, isn't that where the beauty of it all lies?. Thanks for the review*

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 07 2015 01:17 am
Title: How the great fall

Why is this lecherous bitch there? It takes a special case to do that to her sister like she did. Look at how she's acting and talking. This behavior after all Marie did for her and she tells her to kiss her ass like this? Ungrateful brat! Why didn't she go to her lover-man for help? I can't believe this chick!

Marie has a lot to sort out and get over. From the scumbag husband she could deal with. But not from her blood; a girl she sacrificed so much for to raise. That probably hurts most of all. That Angie could do that so easily to her and then turn around and act like it was so easy to do.

Soooo gooood! I love these kinds of plots!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2015 01:07 am
Title: How the great fall

Oh no she didn't!!!, YOU CAN JUST LEAVE US(ME) HANGING LIKE THIS.   I next chapter tomorrow????   Way to short

 Reviewer: Tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2015 12:57 am
Title: How the great fall

Damn

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 07:52 pm
Title: How the great fall

Oh this how bag deserves to get BITCH slapped and then some. Can't wait for the next update! 

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 12:55 pm
Title: How the great fall

I don't Angaho being ptegnabt in the frst version, does Marx kniw?  Angaho just tolh on hetself they slapped pelvises mire than once. Dumb ho!! Angaho has put herself on the list of all time hated characters!!  Don't let her take anything you bought Marie, Let Marx buy her shit.  Why did Marie and Marx grow apart?   Just for last remark, Angaho needs to loose that babtly.  Nit before they court in the divorce, that is sho nuff proof if Marx's infidelity.  Hate those two characters!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 12:12 pm
Title: Feeding The pain

I just realky want het to heat her sistet's ass and then kick her to the curb. Let that kittke bitch eat some much curbage that needs surgery on her damn face!!  Marx is such an asshole!! They should both loose everything!!  Please don't let her get drunk again.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 11:58 am
Title: How the great fall

She should have killed her......or came close to it

 Reviewer: Pillow82 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 10:14 am
Title: How the great fall

Really want to knowwhat happened afer she passed out, right now I have a bad feeling I know but...

Damn those parting words from her sister were beyond cruel.

 Reviewer: nikol Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 07:51 am
Title: How the great fall

Uhhhhhhhhbhhhhhhbahahqhahbah!  That little ooooih!!!! Ok this is good (ignore the obvious spelling mistakes). But never have I ever been so angry!!! I know this is book but do you have no shame?! If that way my little sister she wouldn't be having the baby the husband would've never been found and well I would've gotten away with it point blank period with that fu-/3'y!!! 

 Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 05:39 am
Title: How the great fall

I can't wait for Angie to get hers. My heart was beating with so much anger for Marie I thought that I slapped the girl myself. Great update.

 Reviewer: MiAmourrr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 05:09 am
Title: How the great fall

I had a brief flare of anger at Angie that made me want to jump through this laptop.  Does Angie really think M. is going to wife her?  I hope our girl divorces him so fast.

So who made her tenders tender?  The bartender wasn't with her for long and he should be ashamed of dragging her to the alley--animal.  

Your Editor is doing a great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for acknowledging the Editor, Appreciate you*

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2015 05:05 am


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