Reviews For His Mercy
Title: Run & Hide

Well, I'm thinking some time on her own is what she needs. You do learn a lot about yourself on your own. And I think Mercy needs to learn more about herself and how to be strong and know that she can be independent. And just plain form her own opinions about things and life. Its no more than what Gage has. He has his own home, a career that he loves and his own resources. Also, a total sense of himself. He knows who he wants and what he wants from life. I want the same for Mercy.

And I wont be too hard on Violet just yet. Maybe she thought an ultimatum was what Mercy needed. Gage sort of does the same thing with Mercy. MAKE her confront things! Sometimes Mercy just wont. She stopped talking to Gage when that precisely what she needed to do. Then said her mom made her do it although there was more to it than that.

Glad Gage was supportive...even though it was a bit self-serving. But at least comprehends the situation. Violet and Gage will work it out.

Nice!

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 07:34 pm

Title: Run & Hide

Violet needs to hear Gage, really hear him and his heart.

Gage really loves Mercy and would do anything for her. What more can you want for your daughter?

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 09:07 am

Title: Run & Hide

Your updates get me as excited as a fat kid getting her favorite cake!! I can hardly wait for my next bite!!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 04:56 am

Title: Run & Hide

Wow!  Gage is determined!  When he wants something, he goes after it. That has to speak for something, for sure. I can't imagine how he plans to approach Mercy's mother. I can't wait!!! 😁😁😁

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 04:05 am

Title: Run & Hide

Great update.

Wow what is Gage going to say? I'm sure he is not going to back down from letting Mercy's mother know he is in love with Mercy. 

Well this conversation is going to be interesting needless to say.

Can't wait for the next update.🤔

Reviewer: Gloria Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2017 03:54 am

Title: Run & Hide

Gage Colton v. Violet Stovall: 😱😱😱😱😱

Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 08:35 pm

Title: Run & Hide

Great update. 

Gage is not giving up on what he wants and that is Mercy! Now he needs to convince Mercy's mother. I think he needs to talk and express his love for Mercy and intentions to Nana June first or with Nana June and Violet together.

Keep the updates coming. Great story 

Reviewer: Connie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 08:14 pm

Title: Run & Hide

Oh I love this update. 😍

I believe in Gage. I'm glad Mercy's grandmother is for Gage. That's a plus. Nana June needs to talk to her daughter Violet.

I believe Violet is passing past hurts through Mercy.

I'm glad Mercy told Gage what her mother said. Now the both of them need to sit down and really discuss their feelings to each other, their desires/wants for the future and their approach for their discussion with her mother. 

Reviewer: Joyce Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 08:07 pm

Title: Run & Hide

I know I'm being greedy, but.....Don't stop there, I need more! LoL...So Mercy's 3 days are up and she's been avoiding him.....Homegirl is in so much trouble. Can't wait for more.

While I loved the orginal version of this story, this version of Gage is much more dominant and I am definitely liking it. I'm glad he's not letting Mercy push him away and I'm glad he's going to say something to her mother. Violet has a right to be concerned for her daughter's future, but why can't her future including a career and love?? Sure there's the risk of something happening to Gage, but there's alway that risk regardless of what the person does for a living. Why wouldn't she want her daughter to have a chance @ happiness no matter how short rather than be miserable? Hopefully someone, maybe Nana June, will put it into perspective for Violet and stop her from coming between Gage & Mercy.

Reviewer: Nicci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 04:49 pm

Title: Run & Hide

Go Gage...he's not letting anyone keep him for Mercy...love it...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 03:08 pm

Title: Run & Hide

I knew Gage wouldn't  let her get too far.   Move in with Gage Mercy, it would make Riley loose her remaining sliver of sanity.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 01:39 pm

Title: Run & Hide

I love Gage and Mercy!!  I love how every time she runs, he keeps chasing.  I understand that Mercy's mother wants what she feels is best for Mercy, but in the end that is Mercy's decision and it just might be Mr. Gage Colton.  I don't think that conversation with Violet is going to go well...

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 12:37 pm

Title: Priorities

Well, I cant say that I disagree with Violet about Mercy to some extent. She needs to get her ass in gear! I don't want her staying just for Gage! She owes it to herself to give herself at least a year to try because in some ways she needs more of a sense of herself as an independent woman. She might regret not giving herself a least that bit of time. However, if she's cool with never trying anything just for herself, that doesn't include her family, friends, or Gage, fine then. I think they could work it out. Again, just no regets later.

And I'm going to go ahead and give Gage credit in advance for supporting Mercy if she indeed does make a decision to get out in the world for a little while and find herself minus all of them. That's not a bad thing.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 01:39 am

Title: Priorities

I apologize my review repeated itself twice. I could not get it to post the first time and I had to copy and paste.

Anyway, Gage and Mercy need to get together and set their priorities. Who knows, they may come up with the best answer for their problems.

Gage seems to be financially stable from different statements made in the story. So moving for him may not be an issue if it comes to that to be near Mercy?

 I believe Mercy's mother is going about this situation wrong. Colton doesn't need to be weeded out. Adjustments need to be made.

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2017 06:47 am

Title: Priorities

Thanks for the update. I really miss the story.

Everyone have different priorities.

Thanks for the update. I really miss the story.

Everyone have different priorities.

If Mercy's mother push Mercy too soon she may loose her daughter. She does not need to push her out the nest based on Gage. 

I believe Gage's priorities is Mercy, her happiness, which of course includes her in his life. He probably has or is trying to figure out his present situation/job and how it is going to fit in his life with Mercy. I'm sure he knows Mercy wants a job and the possibility that job will take her from home. We need his POV.

I believe Mercy's priorities are just emerging. Of course she wants a job and realizes that that job is not home. However, she is coming to realization that she is in love with Gage and does not know how he fits into the picture and his true feelings for her.

Gage and Mercy need to sort their feelings out and set their priorities out together.

Update as soon as you can.If Mercy's mother push Mercy too soon she may loose her daughter. She does not need to push her out the nest based on Gage. 

I believe Gage's priorities is Mercy, her happiness, which of course includes her in his life. He probably has or is trying to figure out his present situation/job and how it is going to fit in his life with Mercy. I'm sure he knows Mercy wants a job and the possibility that job will take her from home. We need his POV.

I believe Mercy's priorities are just emerging. Of course she wants a job and realizes that that job is not home. However, she is coming to realization that she is in love with Gage and does not know how he fits into the picture and his true feelings for her.

Gage and Mercy need to sort their feelings out and set their priorities out together.

Update as soon as you can.

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 12 2017 06:31 am

Title: Priorities

Mercy, you love Colton don't let your momma still your joy. It's true you will never get a job there.  I want Mercy and Colton together. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 07:45 pm

Title: Priorities

Wow...I guess grandma and ma are not on the same page where Gage Colton is concerned...I'm not liking Violet but her heart is in the right place...I just think she went about it the wrong way...there's what she wants and then there is Mercy's life which belongs to Mercy...she is right that Mercy should not put her life on hold for Gage especially as someone she used to hate...but why can't she have both Gage and career...what does Gage plan on doing with his life or is the oilrig it for him...so many questions but Mercy and Gage are just getting started so there is time for them to decide the path of their relationship...and it should be their decision not Violet's...but she's right if they are thinking long term then it's a conversation that needs to be had...I'm just glad to see Gage thinking about Mercy and her wants/needs...let's see how he handles this latest "problem"...such a good chapter... 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 06:58 pm

Title: Priorities

Interesting turn of events. I understand her mom's concern about Mercy's future, but to discourage her from a relationship because of someone who is a hard worker is a bit extreme. Seems it's time both Gage and Mercy had a serious heart to hear about where they want things to go. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 03:06 pm

Title: Priorities

Thank you for the update. I appreciate your time and effort.I love this story.

Mercy has a serious problem. However, all problems have answers. First like her mother said, Mercy may need a little push from the nest to become what she was intended to do in life. However, I think she needs to talk to Gage about what her mother said. He may have a genuine mature answer.

I believe Gage genuinely loves Mercy and she loves him. That hate they had in school was really the love bug. 

Mercy finding a job outside of her hometown doesn't necessarily mean giving up Gage. This might be what she and Gage needs. He may want to leave what he's doing and even relocate.

Thanks again for this wonderful update. See you soon.

Reviewer: Connie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 02:47 am

Title: Priorities

So good! Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: kaci Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2017 02:42 am

Title: Yearn and Burn

Okay, we are waiting on an update. It seems like forever since we read the last chapter. Please have "mercy" on us and update soon. 

I have truly enjoyed this story.

Reviewer: Minnie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2017 06:06 am

Title: Yearn and Burn

When you coming back?

Reviewer: Nena Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2017 12:20 am

Title: Yearn and Burn

You know set backs are set ups for great comebacks!!

i miss this story.

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2017 08:01 am

Title: Yearn and Burn

Update soon. 

Reviewer: Suzy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2017 02:31 am

Title: Yearn and Burn

When can we expect an update?

Reviewer: Connie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2017 10:31 pm



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