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Title: What Frankly Was and Isn't Anymore

D@mn. Bee's life is too depressing. I hope she can see some light, or at least a spark in this tunnel. 🙁

Interested in seeing where this goes. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 11:25 pm
Title: Last Day

Love this so much. The imagery leaps off the page. I can absolutely picture her life in prison. And Carr is the perfect villian for our heroine. Can't wait to see where you takes us.

 Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2016 10:33 pm
Title: What Frankly Was and Isn't Anymore

Bee is something. What the hell is up Carter's ass?

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2016 06:33 am
Title: What Frankly Was and Isn't Anymore

Update soon!

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 02:49 am
Title: What Frankly Was and Isn't Anymore

Lol. That makes sense, let's be nice and give her the best to see what other information we can get out of her. Shame.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 02:48 am
Title: Last Day

Reading is always an amazing thing. It's an escape from reality into a world full of endless opporotunities.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 02:17 am
Title: Prologue: What is and Should've Never Been

Lol haha. Read his ass like an open book.

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 01:57 am
Title: Cast Pictures

Interesting line up

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 01:44 am
Title: Last Day

Interesting start. I'm intreauged. I hope that doesn't mean she's not getting out. The warden seems to have it out for her. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! We'll just have to wait and see if Carr decides to act on his anger. :)

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2015 08:09 am
Title: Last Day

Bee has no one, so what will she do when she is released?   I loved when she told off the warden, it was priceless!!



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch! Bee will just have to pave her life out from where she is. :D

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 01:27 am
Title: Last Day

I love update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2015 01:58 pm
Title: Last Day

I love your update...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing each chapter! :)

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2015 12:00 pm
Title: Prologue: What is and Should've Never Been

Wonderful start

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2015 11:59 am
Title: Cast Pictures

I like the cast

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2015 11:58 am
Title: Prologue: What is and Should've Never Been

That's it, I'm hooked! I knew from the amount of detail you put into your characters that this was going to be good.

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next instalment!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! :)

 Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2015 07:23 am
Title: Cast Pictures

Seems promising, so far it's very well written and I appreciate getting to know the characters over time and not feeling rushed... hopefully the next chapters come out soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And the next chapter will be coming out very soon. :)

 Reviewer: intheroar Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2015 10:22 pm
Title: Prologue: What is and Should've Never Been

Already the first chapter, not even a chapter really just a prologue was enough to pull me in ready for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad to see you're interested; I hope to please you with the next chapter also. :D

 Reviewer: Diamond Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2015 07:12 am
Title: Cast Pictures

I'm sure it'll be a great story, but not feeling Ian(Damon) because of other reasons..(TVD). : )

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) Yeah, TVD is pretty garbage show, but it's a guilty pleasure for me. I only stick around for Bonnie, but they mistreat/sideline her constantly. At least Ian has a nice face.

 Reviewer: Kimikae Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2015 02:27 am
Title: Prologue: What is and Should've Never Been

I like Bee!! More please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I based Bee's character off of a couple of my mother's friends back when I used to visit Miami a lot - I hope she remains enjoyable throughout the story. :)

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 11:45 pm
Title: Prologue: What is and Should've Never Been

I like it please update when you get a chance



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you! Hopefully the next chapter will come out in a couple days! 

 Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 06:40 pm


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