Reviews For Heartbeat
Title: Chapter 2

His mother has some nerve coming to talk for her BOY! not man but BOY!. I always say if it don't feel good to you, then it no good for you. Ms. Alana is getting her grove back!! and Wesley is getting his grove on. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 03:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That bastard knew that wasn't his first time cheating, that was the first and last time he got caught. I'm glad she knew her worth and let that no good piece of SH*T go. She needs her girl right now and a little fun. I like this story.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 03:37 pm

Title: Chapter 2

More please!!  I hope Wes lives in NYC.

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 01:30 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Well now, Alana. She's taking that old adage to heart.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 06:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

The having to work on telling her he loved her more often should've been a red flag. Good riddance.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 06:14 am

Title: Chapter 2

I love the update...good to have true friend

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter!  She did the right thing, and having her girls there to help her out was exactly what I would have done. Looking forward to the next chapter, and the nex...and the next!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2016 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic beginning.



Author's Response:

Thanks girl!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2016 02:40 am

Title: Chapter 1

I like this.



Author's Response:

Hopefully you keep liking it!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2016 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 1

Very promising.

 

Happy new year



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happy new year to you too!

Reviewer: intheroar Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2016 11:42 pm



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