Sorry! I meant to say I knew it would not be completed. The other stories aren't and this will be no different.
Don't take offense. These things happens.
Reviewer: Mandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 16 2016 02:41 pm
I just discovered this stor just going by the author's history.
It is a good story though. Who knows she may finish it and the others as well.
Reviewer: Mandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 16 2016 02:38 pm
I love this story so much! Please continue...you spoiled us with the regular updates and now I think we are all experiencing withdrawals lol. I hope everything is okay on your end. Update soon! <3Reviewer: jane_DOPE Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 01:48 pm
This is a really good story. Please do not let it go. You have great talent. Looking for more of this story.Reviewer: Lena Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 10:47 am
Pleas give us some Saa before the week starts!!Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 06:17 pm
Love love love this storyReviewer: Karen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 08 2016 02:28 am
Reuben and Amell need to watch out for Gerrie. Do not be naive to her antics. Please show some smarts.
If she wasn't satisfied with his judgment about Amelle the first time, surely she is not this time!!!!
Reviewer: Karen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 08 2016 02:16 am
This has become one of my favorite stories here. I log on often looking for an update. If I may say this without any criticism meant. I think Reuben should be in on the plot if they have true feelings then allow them to grow without the lies of deception. Hillary left him for his enemy and he was deeply hurt so he may not be as forgiving this time. I am just a fan of the story and it is your story to write as you see it.
Date: March 07 2016 03:20 pm
Wow, Gerrie real is that crazy! I'm glad Amelle isn't underestimating her or the situation. It could save her life with the way Gerrie is acting.
And can we get into Hilary and Dylan at some point? Because that is some kinda twisted with those two. Dylan is totally an emotional master manipulator with Hilary and she's apparently the right type. The kind of betrayal she's indulging in for him towards Reuben, in the name of loving him, is truly breathtaking. He must be laying it down like no other for her.
Nice!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 03:28 am
So, if Reuben gets out of this meeting alive, I hope that will be the end of his excuses for this crazy bitch.
Interesting conversation between Mel and Mama Masterson. Very.
This is a real treat to read. Although, Reuben, this is looking like you might get a scene from Misery in a few. Boy, open thine eyes.
Good update, Chica. Very good.Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 10:23 pm
Very good storyReviewer: black girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 10:09 pm
I wish we could get an update before you go back to work.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 07:55 pm
This is suspense, right here!
Since he is so trusting, I hope he has plans to have a witness in the room, or the next room. Because I put nothing past that nutjob!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 03:27 pm
*In Kevin Hart voice* It's about to go down.Reviewer: Shae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 05:51 am
What's that cooking on the stove? S.mells like rabbitReviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 02:28 am
I can't wait until Amelle recognizes her feelings for Reuben, whew I can just see her standing next to Reuben while her family and his mother are behind them and the others are knocked down all around them as the dust settles. I think with his mother and her brothers he will find out what it means to be apart of a loving family unit who will have his back and not let petty jealousy interfere with success. Gerrie is ridiculous. He never gave her any indication that he was into her which makes it so hard to figure out how she created this fairytale. I could understand her obsession more if he had kissed her, slept with her or something to indicate that he had a semblance of "more than friends" vibe but NOTHING...she's a reincarnated Flew over the cuckoo's nest for sure. I really hope he shows up with someone tonight to meet with Gerrie. Here's to hoping Reuben starts to show some common sense and he is faking us all out with the clueless act *cheers*.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 02:08 am
Reubs is about to get hurt from more than one person. Gerrie is about to put it all out there. Hopefully, Reubs will remember that old saying about a woman scorned.
Gerry is going to hurt Ruebs and Amelle is going to have to put a whupping on her---maybe then she will admit her feelings for him.Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 12:55 am
Thanks for the update.
Amelle, you are the right. Don't under estimate Gerrie in no way shape or form!!! She is out to get you out of the way!!!! She tried it once. She will try it again!! but I believe in a more drastic way this time. So, try to anticipate Gerrie's next move. Gerrie is scheming right now about how she is going to get rid of Amelle.
Gerrie has more than character issues. She is mental!!!
Reuben definitely does not need to meet with Gerrie alone. Hopefully he realizes that.
I can't wait to see what is going to happen in the meeting. I just hope Gerrie is surprised she will not meet with Reuben alone.
Keep those updates coming.Reviewer: Joyce Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 05 2016 09:08 pm