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Title: Chapter 11

Rueben will be thinking about this conversation wen the shit hits the fan. Thankyou for the updates much appreciated

Reviewer: dounome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 10:16 am

Title: Chapter 1

Happy Valentine's Day! This was a great way to begin mine. Best treat ever!

Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 09:14 am

Title: Chapter 11

I realize why she didn't tell Rueben who she believes the flowers are from, but I hope she's told his mother. If she did, will Mrs. Masterson tell her best friend?

Rueben isn't curious like Dylan. He's intrigued by what he subconsciously perceives as a secret treasure from an unexpected source.

I wish he would lay off her about her vernacular. I hate when people do that! I love how quick and succinctly Amelle put him in his place.

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 09:12 am

Title: Chapter 9

I hope Gerrie doesn't try to sabotage what Amelle promised to take care of for Reuben. 😒. I can easily see her trying though. Amelle ... girl ... watch ya' back!!! 👀

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 04:05 am

Title: Chapter 10

I knew Hilary's @$$ was up to something!! 🤔

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 04:03 am

Title: Chapter 10

He knows she is with his competitor and shouldn't trust her--H. cheating on him should be warning enough.  

Reubs is feeling someone...

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 02:26 am

Title: Chapter 10

I hope the screen is still active so he knows she was looking!

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 10

Dylan is manipulating Hilary's love and lack of backbone to get back of Reuben.  What else is there between Dylan and Reuben besides Hilary and them being professional rivals?  Dylan is acting like he wants to destroy Reuben's life on a personal and professional level, why??  What did Reuben do to him that he wants revenge??  Dylan doesn't love Hilary, he took her away from Reuben for some other reason.  If he loved her, he wouldn't be flirting with Amelle and sending her flowers or using Hilary's emotions for his financial gain.  I hope that Reuben and Amelle find out what is going on really soon and deal with this craziness. 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Great job...

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 06:16 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Love your story. I look forward to more.

Okay, Hilary's mother is having a dinner party. What is Hilary's mother up to?

Reuben needs to take Amelle.😊 If Reuben does not invite Amelle, hopefully Mrs. Masterson will. Of course Amelle needs to dress to the nines.

Maybe Amelle can mention the flowers and bust Dylan's bubble. In any form Amelle needs to let Dylan know she is not phased by his under hand tricks and not pulled into his mess.

Reviewer: Penny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 06:11 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Lol..I love your word play..great work...please keep going

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 05:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I KNEW IT ! The meek little mouse is a spy! Dylan is so insecure and hiliary is so blinded by " love" I hope he gets what he wanted and still loses that will be the best blow to he ego ever. I also can't wait to see Dylan get shot down by Amelle again it bring me joy to see his masculine pride crushed. Keep the updates coming!

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 05:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I KNEW IT ! The meek little mouse is a spy! Dylan is so insecure and hiliary is so blinded by " love" I hope he gets what he wanted and still loses that will be the best blow to he ego ever. I also can't wait to see Dylan get shot down by Amelle again it bring me joy to see his masculine pride crushed. Keep the updates coming!

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 05:24 pm

Title: Chapter 10

You have everyone hooked on this story. 😍

Please keep it alive. Don't drop it.

I love Amelle and Mrs. Masterson. 

Hopefully Reuben will see the value Amelle is bringing to his life and his business. She is waking him up from his creative block and hopefully his emional block.

Reviewer: Grace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 03:38 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I know Hilary was up to something. Is she called what s between her and that Dylan guy love, then i don't  want it.  They can definitely keep it all for themselves.    I am tired of that Hilary.  I hope both she and Gerrie will get what  s coming for them.  For real though, Hilary just got me so upset.  She s not that naive, that she doesn't know that Dylan doesn't love her and is just using her.  I really don't like it when women will do anything for a man, no matter how wrong they know it is just so they could get the D. Weak... Thank you for the update.  Do you know i check this site at least almost every hour, to check for any update from you.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: rosa1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 03:20 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I knew Dylan was behind Hilary's visit. He's  in insecure, manipulative SOB trying to weasel  how way to folding out about the competition and hope to beat them.  I want to know the real reason  Hilary  left him for Dylan. Probably because some type of arranged family marriage or something.  Ugh. Reuben may need counseling to officially get obver Hilary. Amelle is great!!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 03:12 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the update.

I am glad Amelle is discerning and smart. How is she going to handle Dylan? He thinks he is sooo smart. He is going to be busted.

I would love to know Reuben's private thoughts/POV about Amelle every now and then.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Hilary is a devious, spineless, little girl; because real women don't comport themselves that way. A real woman wouldn't need to sank to such depths to prove her love or have to prove it to a real man. Thank you for the clarification into her character. Here I was giving her the benefit of doubt. I hope what she saw were the black and white drawings and not the colorful 3D drawings. I also hope Rueben or Amelle notice she accessed his computer. Maybe next time they'll be ready with some fake drawings for the fake people. Rueben doesn't seem to quite believe her sincerity.

Thank you so much for the quick updates! You ROCK!

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I knew it!!! I just wish Amel let would've caught her and tried to tell Reuben, but he wouldn't believe her.

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 03:03 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Ha! Take that Red!

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 02:58 pm

Title: Chapter 10

I wonder did Amelle get the chance to tell Mrs. Masterson that Dylan was the one that sent the flowers? 

Reuben is sensing something is up with Hilary. Follow your instincts Reuben. Don't assume nothing. She is with your enemy! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 02:42 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Dumb Rueben. Grrrr 

Reviewer: dounome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 02:40 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Well, you certainly came through! This is a great story! How long before Hilary realizes that Dylan is using her?

 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 02:35 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Thanks for the updates.

My grandmother always told us, never put all your eggs in the same basket. I hope Reuben has his presentation in a secure place and not easily accessible.

Come on Reuben, as smart as you are, you have to have an idea of Dylan's deceitfulness. After all, he has Hilary. If he took Hilary, what else will he take of yours? Wake up and smell the coffee!!

Listen to Hilary's words. She describes the love she has for Dylan as an "uncontrollable love, like a tidal wave, a love which she couldn't not be with him." That sounds a little strange. She is not in control of herself. She is being manipulated.

I believe at some point Hilary is going to wake up from the Dylan spell and fire back with his own concoctions.

Reviewer: Mavis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 01:48 pm

Title: Chapter 1

ooh, yes, please do! I cannot wait to see her do her 'job', straighten out Reuben or read the 'look' on Bosslady's face when her son falls in love with our Amelle. 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 01:32 pm



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