Hilary that duplivutious ho, doesn't deserve to ever be happy!! I want something bad to happen to both het and Derek!! A fatal car accident, a mugging gone wrong or s drowning in their car in a flash flood. Either of those work for me!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 01:24 pm
Girl, you are on the ball, rolling all these updates. Two in one day!!!! I just read chapter nine earlier. Thanks.
I knew Dylan was a snake. Now we know what happened to the other PAs Reuben had and why Dylan's company win the bids. He probably used them like he using Hilary.
Poor Hilary. Dylan is using her for his own gain. He knows how to manipulate her. However he better watch Hilary. When she wise up to his shananigans he is going to get bit.
I wonder if Reuben will notice his desk/computer has been tampered with? Hopefully Hilary found the old plans of Reuben. Come on Reuben wise up!!! Do a check mate on your opponent. Set traps for old Dylan.
Thanks again for the updates.
Date: February 13 2016 01:09 pm
Uh Oh between the ex snd Gerrie Rueben has no chance.
Reviewer: dounome Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 10:13 am
Their idea will be stolen because of his exes visit
Reviewer: dounome Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 09:46 am
Oh please Gerrie, you waited ten whole minutes!! You are not all that!
Smart girl Amelle!!!! Let these crazy ladies know you are not going to be stepped on and you are on to them in every way. Cover yourself and your work.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 06:20 am
You are really keeping me tied to this story. Love it.
Keep a watchful eye Amelle. You are the eyes and ears for yourself and Reuben. Always keep a back up plan and strategize. Don't underestimate your enemy about nothing. Your enemies are after you as well as Reuben.
Reviewer: Macy Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 06:07 am
Thank you, thank you for the update.
I am delighted you are presenting Amelle as a strong insightful character that can stand up for herself against someone that tries to belittle or tries to intimidate her. She was able to see through Gerrie and not back down from her. I like that.😊
I have read too many stories where the character crumbles, cries, freezes or shuts down. Thank you!
I am sure Gerrie is not through, but I believe Amelle will be discerning enough to stay ahead of her opponents, even Dylan.
Dylan seems to be after Reuben and wants to destroy Reuben. It seems he took Hillary from Reuben and now he is after Amelle. Not because he really wants Amelle, but to get back at Reben any way he can (sly fox).
I am glad Mrs. Masterson is on Amelle's side.
I am looking forward for more great updates.
Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2016 05:41 am
That Gerrie girl is not annoying that dhe s getting on my last nerve. She needs Jesus and an intervention. Thank you for the update. Cannot wait for the next one.
Reviewer: rosa1234 Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 04:46 am
Yay.... so excited. When i saw your update, i left what i was doing so i could read it. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: rosa1234 Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 04:35 am
That Bentley is smooth--i need to brush up on my luxury car styles.
Gerry will hurt Reuben. while trying to sabotage Amelle. I bet she thinks twice before coming after A. I would doubscheck all plans and put all projects/computers, USBs in a safe. Hell, I would put hidden cameras up.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 03:33 am
When is Rueben going to get tired of Gerrishank throwing herself at him?? I am already tired of Gerrishank, can she be hit by a bus or crushed between two semi's?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 02:41 am
Yeah, Gerrie needed that bottled water, 'cause she's one thirsty azz heifer. PATHETIC.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 02:38 am
Amelle just that read that ho and now it's time to erase her!! Rueben buyGerrie's thirsty ass out of our business. Amelle is now my shero!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 02:18 am
Dylan is sneaky bastard, don't like him at all!! Tell Rueben who sent the flowers so he can two and two together expecially HIlaskank paid him a visit.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 02:11 am
Beautiful flowers and Reubs is not going to know what hit him--his mom will though.
I love their interactions, from the petty arguments to her helping him and listening and him seeking her approval.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 11:38 pm
Ok so I think Dylan is going to try and take Amelle for himself. Hillary caught on to what is going to happen to her and she's trying to worm her way back into Reuben's heart before Dylan dumps her.
Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 11:21 pm
Great story.
Thanks for the update. I will be looking for more.
Reviewer: Lena Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 10:40 pm
Great update... I am really enjoying your story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 09:06 pm
Loving this story.
Amelie set Dylan straight NOW!!!! He seems to be TROUBLE!!! He seems to be the type to use people for his own purposes.
Reviewer: Diane Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 08:39 pm
You don't let your enemy(enemies) or connections with the enemy know your startegies.
Reuben be watchful.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 03:15 pm
I'll take Hillary over gerrie any day but she still getting the side eye too ... It's real convenient how she just popped up at the place where all his designs for the mayor where. It's the quiet ones you gotta watch I think she's a spy for that little rat Dylan, nobody is being trusted. So glad Dylan didn't fold to either of them stay strong man. So happy about the update keep them coming girl!!!
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 01:23 pm
I smell espionage.
Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 08:55 am
I don't like this Gerrie girl...she seems too desperate. I'm not sure about Hilary's motives. Why did she decide to come see Reuben now? She supposedly had moved on and if she is so happy with Dylan, why bother Reuben? I don't trust her.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 05:10 am
Ew gof away Hilary...something is off with her like she's fishing for something...maybe to steal his ideas.
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 03:45 am
Please update soon...
Reviewer: rosa1234 Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 03:36 am