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Title: o4

Awesome short story!ðŸ‘

 Reviewer: keshah321 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2019 12:53 am
Title: o4

Cute,

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2016 07:53 am
Title: o4

Ohhhhhh damnnnnn this was hotttt. There should be a part two beginning years later lol

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 10:50 pm
Title: o4

Short and sweet, well hot!! That was good, you should make it longer. 



Author's Response:

thanski for reading and reviewing! ashleyt and maksim will back but first i got other projects that i plan to post first - i hope you will enjoy them too :D

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 07:02 pm
Title: o3.5

Now that's how you do it sir!!!



Author's Response:

in deed!

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 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 12:20 am
Title: o3

They aren't about to screw at the party in their friends office! Just nasty.



Author's Response:

Eric will not - and i repeat - will not be happy about that, hahahaha!

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 12:17 am
Title: o2

Girl, face that man. He is your ex, what can he do to you? His lost



Author's Response:

so true - just do it!

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 12:05 am
Title: o1

Wow, miss him that much?



Author's Response:

lol, yes she does - they have been together for a long time and suddenly it just ended. i think ashley would've liked them to at least try to fix things but oh well - onto the next page, haha

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 11:30 pm
Title: o4

Such a cute little story...loved it!



Author's Response:

Yay,  thank you!

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 28 2016 04:19 am
Title: o4

Yuukiyanagi, you sadist.  THIS is why I avoid short stories.  Inevitably, I'll happen across one that leaves me salivating for more.  

Russian, possessive, relentless?  Yes, yes, and YES!!!  

In the name of all things Eastern European and deeply delicious, you must--I repeat--MUST began a sequel, a prequel, and a part trois posthaste.  Pretty pleeeaaassseee with sugar and a BIG ole heap of "I gotta have more" manipulation on top : )



Author's Response:

Hahahaha  - just give me Brandon or Rich and we are done, lol! But honestly I'm starstruck. To get a review from you - makes me wanna dance!

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I digress. 

Yes. I'm a sadist 😈 and yeah I kinda guessed that the end felt abrupt, lol! Ashley and Maksim will return - first I got a few other stories lined up that i hoped you will like 😊 thanks reading and reviewing JJ! Means loads!!

 Reviewer: Joelle Jax Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 27 2016 06:58 am
Title: o4

Girl this story was HOTT!! as hell!! I love it, what a great writer you are. Thanks for sharing this with us, I can't wait to see what you have for us next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so so SO much jacqua43! Reading these words from you means a lot - I'm thrilled that you read my story and loved it! Thank you!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2016 06:05 pm
Title: Cast

I wasn't ready, for it to end. Thank you, for sharing.



Author's Response:

Your welcome!  I understand that the end felt abrupt,  lol! but I'm planning a sequel.  Wont post it right now but we will return to Ashley and Maksim - for sure! 

 Reviewer: Blk_Papps Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 06:12 pm
Title: o4

Excellent!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 05:11 pm
Title: o4

I loved this

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 01:25 am
Title: o4

What a way to end it. Nice tie back to your inspiration.

I hate to see them go, but you wrapped it up so nicely I have no complaints.

Thank you for bringing them to us and completing their story.

You are a great writer with an awesome future.



Author's Response:

Wow Presh! Thank you so much for your kind words - that  means a lot! These two will back but first i need to finish my ongoing story and i plan to post another story that I hope you like just as much if not more! 

 

So I will be back! For sure!!

Hh

 Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 11:26 pm
Title: o4

I liked it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 11:10 pm
Title: o4

Yay, they made up!! Please write a sequel?



Author's Response:

I want to and plan to write a sequel.  I won't post it any time soon because I have anot her story that I want to post but these two will be back. I'm pretty sure of it - thank you for reading & reviewing!  😊

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 09:06 pm
Title: o4

MAKSIM - DROPS MIC!!!

WHAT AN ENDING.



Author's Response:

Yy

 

Boom. Mic drooped - we out!

Thank you! 

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 08:14 pm
Title: o1

That pic is E'ERTHANG!



Author's Response:

it sure is!

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 08:12 pm
Title: o4

Loved loved this short. Now can we finish Tommy & Rafeals story

Author's Response:

Yes. Let's end Tommy & Rafael's story - it's long overdue!

 

Thanks for reading & reviewing! 

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 07:00 pm
Title: o4

Great short read! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: Akira Jade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 06:49 pm
Title: o4

😱😱😱😱 Good grief!!!!! Come on.... I know you said this was going to be a short story. I was not wanting or ready for it to end NOW!!!!

Sequel or a series a must!!!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, yeah this chapter is over for the couple but yes I have an idea for these two and I think they will get a sequel later on.  I want to finish my other ongoing story first and post a series that has been brewing for a very long time  😊 1000s thanks for reading and reviewing - I truly appreciate it!

 Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 06:23 pm
Title: o3.5

Update soon😃



Author's Response:

updating now now now but it's the last one i'm afraid, lol!

but i'm glad that you enjoyed the read!

 Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 05:40 pm
Title: o3.5

Super update. Loving the story.

Makism seems to be truly in love with Ashley. The man is relentless. 

Maksim and Ashley need to sit down and talk about all the possibilities concerning Ashley's promotion; pros and cons, both dreams and aspirations. 

Hope the next update is soon.

 



Author's Response:

thank you so much! Ashley's is Maksim's world. they do need to sit down and talk however Maksim has one thing on his mind right now - Ashley too! - so the talk will have to be a bit later, lool!

thanks for reading and reviewing! the last update is up soon!

 Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 02:22 pm
Title: o3.5

Halfway between angry sex and makeup sex! Yum!



Author's Response:

agreed! couldn't have said it better!! XD thanks for reading and reviewing!

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2016 09:49 pm


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