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Kelsey will be protected by Nickolas, she is going to need it.  She seem like an intelligent person but a bit naive concerning Randall.  

 

 

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2016 10:34 pm

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I am definately looking forward to more of this and what it will add to your series. I am already hooked. 

Reviewer: Umiza Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2016 12:53 pm

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 A total rewrite and It is connected as all your stories are. I love that! I hate Randal and his critique of Kelsey and how he can make her better. Please have Nickolas whip his ass! Lol

Reviewer: OrangePeelings Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 07 2016 03:57 pm

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Oh yes I can't wait for more of this. Love the series that you have created. Keep it going!!!!!!

Reviewer: KnightPhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 09:43 pm

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Okay. Now I get it! You're back with a BANG! And we have to read all your stories in parallel to get what's going on on all sides! I am in awe!

Randall is a major as&! Yeah you're gorgeous, if only your eyes were green, and your hair straight!?! ROFLMAO! You make some of the best, off-their rocker baddies that I've read in quite a while!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 04:17 pm

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I'm really excited about this. Especially since it goes along with the concrete dog. Its like seeing both sides of the plan unfold. I don't like Randall just as much as I don't like Kyle's ass.

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 03:53 am

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Oh YES they are connected!!  Love it! i hate Randall! Update  please

Reviewer: Water Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 12:07 am

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Grest so far. 

Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2016 11:53 am

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Oh I am definitely into this. I LOVE that all your stories are connected brilliant. I am waiting for more

Reviewer: Russian Sunflower Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 09:03 pm

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You little stinker they connect. yOu are awesome. This is awesome. I can not wait for more

Reviewer: Jane doe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 07:51 pm

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What a man!! I say keep him Kelsey and get rid of that snake Randall. I'm along for the ride. Good job!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2016 02:56 pm

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I love that the stories connect keep it up! Love it!

Reviewer: kier101 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 09:40 pm

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Oh I like this! This is going to be so interesting bouncing off the Concrete Dog. I can't wait for more. I hate Randall already. Please update Me Carter you Jane also 

Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 07:57 pm

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I'm interested in any story you write.

Welcome back

Reviewer: Hopieland Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 05:08 am

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Yes!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 04:31 am

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Good so far

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 03:01 am

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10  

Cast pictures please!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 12:46 am

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I like!! Please update when time is allow.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2016 12:08 am

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ANtiVenom you are my shero!!  Why did you decide to link these Concrete Dog  with this story?  Now you have Kelsey and Lauren related and Randall is no longer engaged to KElsey.  Interesting change.  Looking forward to reading where you're leading us.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2016 11:58 pm



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