I must say, I truly enjoyed that first encounter. I can tell that I don't care for this Richard kid. But Namea handled that entire situation with a style and grace that most people don't possess. Hell I don't think I do. Lol.
I can't wait for your next chapter. Update soon.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2016 07:55 am
I love Namea!! boy does she have a quick tongue. Dickhead has a lot to learn about Black women, this is not the 1950's or 60's this is a new breed of African American women. How are you going to be roomates and don't talk to each other, I would go stir crazy because I'm a talker. Adam ( interesting ) can't wait for more. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 17 2016 09:32 pm
I am already completely enamored with this story and it's only 2 chapters in!!! I love your writings. I love the fact that Namea is raw. Her personality is rough and she doesn't have the usual "ugly duckling" character flaw.
I love stories with flawed characters. I love to watch them grow and expand. She's real and I officially have a crush on her.
Please, don't hold back. If the interaction between Namea and Dick(head) is any indication..... Whooooo!
Keep it coming! Happy writing!!!
~EJ~
Reviewer: ErisJade Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2016 12:52 pm
Drama already, typical meathead jock mentality. But I think this story has "teeth" and it will worth it!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 09:28 am
Not sure yet, but it is interesting!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2016 09:13 am
I came across your story and I already love it, I also agree with your views about couples falling madly in love with each other in a short span of time I feel like that kind of love is misleading or just a strong attraction. Anyway I love it so far and I'm looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 16 2016 06:32 am
It's funny how dudes like 'Richard' proclaim to know what "ghetto" is, and in all reality, have never step foot in one. I think her name is pretty. It's unique.
I wonder what is 'The Experiment'?
I wonder what's up with her roomate?
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2016 04:18 am
I am impressed by people who type papers and such on their phones, I don't have the patence for that sugady. Dick will bare watching as he has my spdiey sense tingling already just by being a douche.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 16 2016 03:49 am
I tell you, I CACKLED at the interaction between Ghetto and the Dick. I mean, Namea's sarcasm is ME.
I was concerned that I might not like this, but so far, so good. Adam, interesting. But, he might tick me off later. As Namea might as well. But right now, I'm liking her snark. She might wear then if that's all she is. We'll see. Layla, hmmm, she would probably get on my nerves if she was perky all the damn time. But might be good for a few laughs.
Good job, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2016 02:57 am
I like, I like! When I originally read the first chapter, it caught my attention but I wanted to wait until the next one to see if it still held it before I reviewed. Good news: it did, lol. I like Namea so far; I find her character funny and interesting. I also like the way this story is written. Great job! Looking forward to the update.
Reviewer: Sweetest Voice Signed [Report This]Date: March 16 2016 01:01 am
This sounds pretty interesting. I'm interested to see what perspectives arise throughout this story. Sucks what happened to her mom.
Update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks girl! lol I literally just came up with the idea for this story out of (seemingly) nowhere and I'm already in love with it! Haha. Yes, her mother's murder has a lot to do with her personality.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2016 10:31 pm
I am very, very, very intrigued by this! And I love your writing style. The flow is smooth and effortless. Looking forward to reading more.
Thank you for sharing!
~EJ~
Author's Response:
Gracias! I'm challenging myself to try out different writing styles with this story so I appreciate feedback on that! :)
Reviewer: ErisJade Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2016 06:03 pm
I don't know yet, you haven't made her a sympathetic character despite her mother's murder. Stories with heavy racism in them tend to make me angry. So yeah, I don't about this story.
Author's Response:
Don't worry. Themes of racism won't be that bad outside of dialogue and very little physical action. Also, don't assume I want Namea to be a sympathetic character. I don't ever want any of my characters to come off as perfect or too lovable. I really appreciate your comment though! I always love and appreciate constructive criticism! :)
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 12 2016 03:42 pm
1 down 7 more to come. I like Namea, she going to be one of my fav's I can tell already. This is going to be interesting giving the fact that we are dealing with Donald Trump right now. Please continue with this story.
Author's Response:
I like her too! Lol. I really enjoy writing her POV as it's challenging in some ways, but fun as hell in others. Ugh. Girl, don't get me started on that troll. -_-
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2016 04:52 am
Interesting start. Curious to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you! So am I. haha
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: March 12 2016 02:22 am