Title: Cast Pics 1

Can I have Razor?  For some reason he is really attractive to me and normally I don't like completely tatted guys.  Never know sometimes what will attract you to someone. Anyway great story so far.  Wonder what her "friend" is up to and what will really instigate this showdown.  They will need Scully's support otherwise it won't be a good outcome for anyone.  I can also foresee Sheila being an issue to.



Author's Response:

Hi lajack1,

 

Yes, Razor is ruggedly attractive.  There are some things brewing. Hopefully Nia and Isa's friendship survives.  Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 04:57 am

Title: Chapter 6-Revised

Great story!! I cannot wait for more.. 

Reviewer: AWESOME!! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 03:46 pm

Title: Chapter 6-Revised

Girl... Nia don't need counseling she need a good divorce attorney, a private investigator ( To document all james dealing, and to take pictures of her abused body ). I hope Isa is a loyal friend to Nia, I think she knows about James abusing Nia and she wants to protect her friend. I also think that Isa knows about James profession and I hope she's not on his payroll. I also think that Deke was friends with Nia uncle Cliff and he's watching over her. Girl my beloved swears he's the best griller in the world, I don't know how many grill cook-offs we had and I lost every one. Honey have yourself a wonderful Memorial Day Weekend and thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 01:24 pm

Title: Chapter 6-Revised

Nia, Nia, Nia?! A man who beats a woman the way he lays hands on her will need more than counseling to help him see the error of his ways.

I hope Isa isn't sleeping with Jaime.

That's going to be an interesting conversation between Deke and Jaime. Can't wait for that.



Author's Response:

Hi Presh,

 

She is a little lost, but hopefully she can find herself.  What did you think of the interaction between Deke and James?

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 09:14 am

Title: Heading

Good start to what looks like a great story

Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 09:40 pm

Title: Chapter 5-Revised

Wow!! her husband is in the other biker group, girl.. this is about to get deliciously good. I don't see a truce coming after they find out about each other, and when Deke finds out that Jaime has been hurting his Nia, it will be on and poppin!! Good Job!!! honey. This story will be tracked and put in my favorites.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 05:45 pm

Title: Chapter 4-Revised

Oh Hell to the NO!!! this mofo put his hands on her, what he blames her for the lost of their child. Then this mofo had the nerve to force sex on her. I'm sorry but my glock would be cocked and his weak *ss would be filled with bullets left to right. Loni girl IT'S TIME TO GO!!. I hope she tells Deke what is going on. Girl this is good!!



Author's Response:

Hi Jacqua43,

Yes, he took a turn for the worst. Please do cheer Loni on because she needs it.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 05:34 pm

Title: Chapter 3

So Deke is the enforcer of the club. With all those scallywags running around the club, will Deke be true to a woman.



Author's Response:

As the story goes on you'll find out just why he has that title.  Thanks for responding.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 05:26 pm

Title: Chapter 2

 No he didn't just put his number in a married woman's phone, Deke is a ALPHA!!.



Author's Response:

Lol! Bold yes, Deke is very bold!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 05:23 pm

Title: Heading

Deke is persistent isn't he. I like this story.



Author's Response:

Jacqua43,

Thank you so much for your response. Every woman loves a good looking persistent man. *Winks 🙂

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 05:20 pm

Title: Heading

Good start. Can't wait to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

Presh,

Thank you! We'll see. Got some good things brewing. 

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 10:38 am



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