dis you give up on it ? please
Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]Date: October 23 2016 11:14 pm
This is a very good story, but is has been a whiile since your last update. Oh, but let me guess, you have lost your muse, so therefore another good story is left in the dust.
Reviewer: Bettye Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 14 2016 01:05 am
Girl... I'm not liking Ron right now at this moment. I thought that was a low down dirty trick he pulled inviting Hope over there. What's his problem is he liking Pandora now, and wants to get Hope and Bradley together so he could have Pandora all to himself. Thanks for this update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: September 06 2016 04:10 pm
Wow! Games on ... I wonder what Hope has up her sleeve? 😈 Nothing good, obviously! Can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2016 07:38 pm
Hopefully, Bradley was drugged slept with hopity, nasty Hope, she got preg. He felt guilty and to be near the child he loves chose to marry Hope. Apparently it wasn't like she thought it would be, because they are divorced. I can't understand how Pandora is still friendly with either. Then again, perhaps she is just there for the child, because she is not with Bradley in the present. I too hope she met someone she likes, and it is not Ron.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: August 31 2016 05:10 pm
damn i kknow hope is going to do something dirty and not care that she's going to hurt her sister in the process
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2016 07:45 am
Yep... I ready for the present
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2016 01:31 am
I think we all kind of guessed that Hope might of set up a plan to get Bradley. Even if he got her pregnant, he still didn't have to mary her to be able to be a father for his child. I still hope that Pandora will find true love with someone else instead of her sisters left overs. Sorry but I still don't and can't ship her and Bradley.
Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]Date: August 29 2016 06:41 pm
What a sad future in store poor them
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed [Report This]Date: August 29 2016 02:12 am
Brilliant. A few grammatical issues, but still very good.
I'm feeling sorry for her in advance seeing as he was her first and she seems to have given not just her virginity, but her trust to him.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 07:51 pm
Oh damn what happened that he had a daughter with Hope and not Pandora
Right choice of names by the way very clever
according to the legend Pandora that means gift of all gods in Greek had a box she was told to never open. Out of curiosity she did and set free on earth all te bad things ans demon. Afraid she closed to box leaving inside the only good thing: Hope
I bet that Hope girl get Bradley drunk and he mistook her for Pandora
Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 07:12 pm
Girl... I just have to say I love myself some Pandora!! she is almost like me. That love scene was MONEY!!. I can't wait to find out how Hope got in the way of their happiness. Thanks honey for this update
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 12:55 pm
Beautiful love scene.
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 07:15 am
I can't wait to read how Hope ended up marrying Bradley.
Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 04:46 am
I am still wondering how the evil twin got her hooks into Bradley? Did she drug him at party and had unprotected sex with him? Is that why he married her simple ass? The evil twin doesn't know what love is and wouldn't know it if it jumped up an bit her in her face.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 26 2016 02:25 am
This is going to suck when whatever Hope has up her sleeve comes to play. I love the story so far but I have a feeling the breakup is going I be the death of me but them getting back together will revive me. Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2016 11:38 pm
There's nothing like a man that wants to spend time with you, it's make you feel loved and special. Girl, I'm with Pandora I need color in my life, no white walls or carpet it's has to be fall colors and hardwood floors for me. I'm thinking that Pandora has a little self-esteem problem, girl some guys like the flashy type but most like the calm, cool, and down to earth and a little nerdy type too. Thanks for this update honey I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 22 2016 06:09 pm
Pandora is obviously the good sister and Bradley had no interest in her sister, so did she end up with Bradley?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2016 10:38 pm
I so love them. I seriously do not like Hope!!! She had to do something dirty!!!
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2016 10:34 pm
You're stories start out so detailed and really good in the beginning and middle. They suck me in lol. But towards the end you kinda rush it like you're in a hurry to finish. Please update this soon though! I wanna see how he ended up with Hope :(
Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 20 2016 10:05 pm
Sneaky ass Hope is about to mess everytbing up. Mark my words.
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2016 08:19 pm
Damn this is going to hurt so bad when Hope jumps in ruin everything and why do I feel that she will know exactly what she is doing but feins as if she doesn't know but when Bradley and Pandora start spending time together as adults, she will let her little secret plan out and piss everyone off. Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2016 06:58 pm