I already don'the like Hope and it'seems only the second chapter. Hope threw herself at Bradley, what made him give him? Hope was a thirsty heifer.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 01:11 am
Why doesn't Hope want Jussy to go home with her father? Are they divorced?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2016 01:07 am
Ch 2 opens up from the past,and I really like that we are starting to see what could of have been or what may be for pandora and bradley! Their chemistry wasn't a love at first sight but there is something there that eventually blossoms to something deeper... I can't wait to see what memories they make!!
Author's Response:
thank you for your comment! I was super nervous about not starting off with the past but, just as you said, we can see what could have been. now we just have to wait to see what really happened.
Reviewer: Leya Sade Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 11:25 pm
i'm waiting to see how hope ended up having a baby with bradley
Author's Response:
lol it's coming!
Reviewer: sandradee Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 11:25 pm
Ok so first of all welcome back lady, I know the struggle and commend you for pushing forward with your craft!! I really love where your story is going!! I love the way you write your characters,there's a mystery to them and I can't wait to see what develops as each chapter builds. That makes me want to know more and I love that !! Great start!!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much! it's been a struggle and I've cried over it because I do this for fun and feel so pent up when I can't release. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
Reviewer: Leya Sade Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 10:59 pm
Just like jacqua43, I agree that there is going to be a twist that is going to drive us crazy and will want it to end super fast but I am here for it and can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
thank you! I hope you like wherever this story goes!
Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 07:34 pm
Honey welcome back!! I'm glad you got your mojo back! Girl, I'm all in on this story. I was not coming on the chamber today because I have a lot to do before my book club meeting tonight but I couldn't help it. I love Pandora and Bradley plus Ron seems like a hoot!. Girl, I have twins and their personality at 9 months are shining through. So I know Hope and Pandora are probably like night and day. I think Pandora and Bradley were an item first and Hope did the switcheroo one night and slept with Bradley, with him thinking he's sleeping with Pandora and she got pregnant and being the good guy that he is , he married her. Girl, I can't wait for more, but not tonight I got to go.
Author's Response:
thank you so much! I'm glad you're sticking with me! It's honestly, been so hard to get my mojo back. After I finished my last, For Her Pleasure, it just ran away. I struggled to finish that one. Took almost a year. I considered quitting but this story came to my and I had to share it with you all to get some feedback. So thanks for your comment!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 07:01 pm
I see trouble coming.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 06:52 pm
I love the cast!!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 06:52 pm
Glad you are back, love the beginning development of your characters. Also a huge fan of C.S Lewis, and Tolkein.
Author's Response:
thank you and it feels good to be back! I'm a huge geek myself and I love C.S. Lewis and J.R.R Tolkein. I constantly re-read their books.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 06:43 pm
Not really liking Bradley already. He was married to Hope and even has a daughter with her? I thought she was crazy, clingy and that he didn't like her. How did he still fall in bed with her and even has a child?? Nawwww,Pandora deserves better. He is not worth it.
Author's Response:
thanks for your comment! Pandora does deserve better!
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 06:35 pm
I don't doubt that you are a good writer, but I already don't like Bradley and this is only the first two chapters. All that talk about Hope being clingy and crazy, yet he even married her and has a child with her. I'm guessing either he gave in or Hope formed a plan that he stupidly fell for and got her pregnant. I'm liking Pandora and if I continue reading the story I hope she will eventually fall in love with someone else or that she already has someone special in her life. A guy between two sister and having been intimate with both of them is anything but attractive. Pandora deserve better.
Author's Response:
thank you for your feedback! it really keeps me motivated to continue on.
Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 06:31 pm
Brillant!!
Author's Response:
thank you!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2016 06:24 pm