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Title: THREE

So that's why she's there. She killed her mom... I guess I can see why from the snippets of flashbacks you give us. It was nice to hear Jackson's story. I really don't blame him for killing his stepfather. I figure he would be doing it anyway but it would only be after he killed his mom or raped his sisters. Fucking bastard did deserve it so kudos to Jackson for saving the world from one sick fuck. 

Update soon. 

 Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2016 11:14 am
Title: THREE

I really love this story please continue taking your reader on journey of these to wonderful souls.  Great job

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 05:10 pm
Title: THREE

JACKSON 'ST MOTHER WAS REALLY STUPID. WHY IS INSTITUTIONALIZED FOR A CRIME THAT WAS IN SELF-DEFENSE. GREGORY DESERVED WHAT HE GOT.  EVIL ASSHOLE!!  I STILL DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY HE WAS DIAGNOSED AS A SOCIOPATH?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 12:37 am
Title: THREE

Jackson protected his family...he's not a sociopath...poor Al is messed up but hopefully we'll learn the reasons soon...good job...

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 07:18 pm
Title: THREE

Well... Gregory had it coming. This makes me like Jackson more and more. He was only protecting his mother and sisters, but mom should've been the one to protect her children ( I would die for mine ) and Gregory was not going to stop until he had control and fear over everyone. I can't wait to hear Al's story on why she killed her mother ( but I think I know why? ). Thanks MP for this wonderful update.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 06:59 pm
Title: THREE

Thanks for the update, it is much appreciated

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 05:43 pm
Title: THREE

Hmmm, from the way Jackson describes Wilson, I don't trust him. 

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 03:50 pm


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