Title: Chapter 2: Boyfriends and Girlfriends

I like it. Great title by the way!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2017 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 2: Boyfriends and Girlfriends

Wow! I'm really enjoying this story.  I didn't expect her to respond like that to his confession of love. Please update soon...

 

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2017 04:03 am

Title: Chapter 2: Boyfriends and Girlfriends

Team Riley all the way!

Reviewer: Destiny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2017 06:36 pm

Title: Chapter 2: Boyfriends and Girlfriends

I hope Rocco will not be drawn as the evil man forcing Laura to run in Ryley's arms because that would be too simplistic. 

Reviewer: Kit Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2017 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 1: Friendship between a boy and girl

Wait.. Was that dindi? With her hunk of a boo thang? 



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YESSSSS! 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2017 09:49 am

Title: Chapter 1: Friendship between a boy and girl

Brilliant.

Riley, you've had numerous chances. Your laziness is going to cause you to lose Laura. And now you're falling into a relationship with Sue. You seem so passived, my friend. Well, Rocco isn't for sure. Good for Laura for trying to have a life and a family.

Chica, you have some raw talent right here. Well written and such an eye for detail. I like the structure of the story. Well done, Chica.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2017 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 1: Friendship between a boy and girl

Now this is a great story! So much discription that you feel as if you're in the story! I'm all for Riley and Laura but I'm also rooting for Rocco and Laura 😫😫... Update soon! 

Reviewer: AmmaWem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Friendship between a boy and girl

This was such a great chapter.  So real.  It made you know what was going on in Riley and Laura's heads.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 06:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1: Friendship between a boy and girl

WOW.....just...WOW!!! This story is amazing! The characters are real, the emotions are deep and the writing is stellar.

Please continue and finish this story! 

Reviewer: itsmeboo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2017 05:55 pm



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