I'm not loving his attitude. I wonder what will spark his change; will it by Sydney, Natalia, or will something bad happen to make him change his ways? Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2017 08:54 pm
I like Laceya86;some women can be so mean to other women when someone else comes into the picture. She's more mature than Jesse. Nice update😌
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2017 08:37 pm
Someone as a crush
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2017 05:38 pm
It's going to take a lot for me to like Jesse, he's acting like such a douche. He's going to have a hard time redeeming himself. Great job so far with this story!
Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2017 04:43 pm
What the hell is his problem?
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2017 03:59 pm
Jesse is acting like a little girl who lost her playmate😡 he needs to grow some ballsc17; 👍
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2017 02:20 am
Great start. How are we ever going to like Jesse? as a grown man shouldn't he be a bit more involved in hiriing his daughter's caregiver?
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 01:09 pm
I love the plot, hope to read more soon. Thanks!
Reviewer: Bel Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2017 04:35 am
Jesse is an ass!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2017 01:32 am
Great start..could do without the 'if I was a white girl' part but intriguing none the less.
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Could do without the dusty irrelevant backhanded comment
Reviewer: intheroar Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2017 12:08 am
Jessie Stone is going to be a problem for Natalia but if he wants to be a jackass treat him like one. I know he's her employer but she's there for the child not her disrespectful daddy😀
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2017 08:56 pm
This is going to be so good. Please continue with it. I'm very interested, good job!!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2017 04:51 pm
Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2017 04:18 pm