This has become one of my favorite stories next to your other story Kingdom Come. d84;d84;d84; can't wait for another update 😊.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much! In the future, I actually plan on re-writing Kingdom Come like I did Save From Myself and His Mercy. It's in the works.
Reviewer: bebe2pink Signed
[Report This]Date: August 27 2017 01:15 am
I would be petty an drop dime on ole girl😆
Author's Response:
LMAO! Some folks you'd go to jail over and she's one of them.
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2017 02:45 am
Please update this lovely story
Author's Response:
An update is coming soon! So sorry for the wait.
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2017 12:13 pm
Need more!!! Need more!!!!
Author's Response:
It's coming. I promise! :)
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: August 19 2017 12:49 am
Great chapter.
I can't wait for Lance to find out about his super model wife.
Author's Response:
I can't wait to write that chapter, LOL.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed
[Report This]Date: August 18 2017 10:24 am
@ MJ, No honey that's not my birthday but it is the birthday of our 21 month old twins. We had them when my beloved and I were both 46 years old... the same age as Chef. I truly love this book MJ an I can't wait until it's published because I'm buying every woman I know a copy. Keep up the good work honey!
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you, Mrs. J! I hope to finish this and publish this some time in the future. I have a lot of wonderful things planned for Sugar Mama.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2017 01:07 am
That was a great teaser, I'm loving Chef more and more. I can't wait for the Dominate sdie of Chef, and I have a feeling that Sugar is going to Love it,, he's bringing oiut a side of her that Lamar kept well hidden b/c he wanted the "perfect wife" Chef is a Real Man and Sugar knows she loves it... I have a feeling she;s a Lady in the Streets and a Freak in the Sheets LOL.
As for Mariah, I kinda saw that coming, seems she found a Bigger Bank Account... I do wonder if the baby is really his, hope he was smart enough to get a Pre-Nup, but I highly doubt it... Oh and Sugar had THOT Mariah Shaking in her Boolts.. I Loved it.
Oh and I loved how Sugar handled Mallory. hit him right in the wallett, very classy.
Looking forward to Pt.2
Author's Response:
Sugar is definitely a lady in the streets and a freak in the sheets. Chef and Sugar are going to be surprising each other, LOL. Mariah is so young and immature, but her plotline is going to be so interesting to write. I've got a lot of good things involving her.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 06:12 am
Yaaaasss 🙌🏾d84;a039; Cannot wait for pt. 2
Author's Response:
It's coming! Sugary Sweet is coming!
Reviewer: KayLaShay Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 03:08 am
Bravo!!!!!!
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[Report This]Date: August 15 2017 10:51 am
I hope you had a good first day. Let that coworker do her. Just document everything and focus on the kids.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2017 05:45 am
I hope you had a good first day. Let that coworker do her. Just document everything and focus on the kids.
Author's Response:
Our first week was pretty good! :D And my co-worker has settled down a lot, but I try to keep my distance from her unless absolutely necessary.
Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2017 02:55 am
I have a special place in my heart for chef's birthday 11/8. The way Chef explained boxing to her was on the money. I partake in that sport often... it keeps me physically and mentally fit at my age. I like Sugar's don't want to know and don't care attitude towards Lance and his baby mama ( let their problems be their problems ) because her life is looking up! Chef is about to make Sugar say... Lance who?....... MJ I pray you have a peaceful school year. Thanks honey for this update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Mrs. J! :D
Is your birthday on that day?
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2017 04:06 pm
I think I need a cold shower......
Author's Response:
Forget the shower next chapter. Just clutch your invisible pearls!
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2017 03:07 am
Gurl....... Love those details.! It was like I was watching a movie.
I ain't mad at you. That was a great update. I will just continue to stalk, er um wait until the next one. You are spoiling us. I would definitely buy it if you publish it.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you! Hopefully, I will be able to post a chapter this weekend. Keep an eye out.
Reviewer: Belladonna400 Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2017 01:11 am
Wish she had changed her status to 'taken' that night.
Author's Response:
Sugar's in total denial.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2017 01:07 am
Leaving this review 1/2 way through the chapter. YASSSS Can't wait for the shit to hit the fan and blow up in BOTH Mariah and Lance's face.
Author's Response:
LMAO! I hope you enjoyed the last half of the chapter too!
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 11:09 pm
Aaaahhhhh ... Lol!!! 😁😁😁 Mrs. James, thanks for this nice long update. But, you know you're wrong!!!! LOL ! I've got this mile wide grin on my face and can not wait for your next update, 'cause I know it's going to be juicy!
Mariah straight up got caught, but I don't blame Sugar for turning that blind eye. Don't start none, won't be none! Why should she look out for Lance? I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next one. Don't make us wait too long! 😏
Author's Response:
Juicer than a medium rare steak! :D
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 10:17 pm
Chef brings Sugar's inner freak out (the way he looks at her and the things he say). Go girl! They are so right for each other, Sugar just needs convincing. Lance is getting just what he deserves and so will the heffa.
Author's Response:
Chef and Sugar are totally perfect for each other, but Sugar is just in so much denial. smh
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 08:08 pm
Mariah has neither class nor morals and she dereseres to loss everything. I can't wait for Lance to realize that his ho hios cheating on him. He derserves to meet karma. Chef is about to put it on Sugar but can she handle it?
Author's Response:
Mariah has no self-respect, but her plotline will end very interestingly as well as Lance. As for Chef and Sugar, it's about to get wild, ya'll!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 08:07 pm
YAY, update!
1. Glad Sugar put her foot down where Mallory's concerned. The business would go under in a hurry if she had let that slide. Best nip it early. Also, I hate when relatives think they can play around like that. It's grow up time, Mallory!
2. Wow, the baby's not even a year old yet and Mariah's looking for her next sugar daddy (which reminds me of a distant cousin, but I digress)? Amazing yet unsurprising. My condolences to their baby but serve Lance tf right. He chose a real piece of work, and her ordering around the bartender like a slave shows how dispicable she is. A bleach and caustic soda cocktail would suit her well, with a knuckle sandwich to mop it up.
3. Sugar - stop lying to yourself. If all you wanted was fun, you'd hire a gigolo and call it a night.
Author's Response:
The scenes between Sugar and Mallory are a trip because Rochelle warned Sugar about working with him and she ignored it, LOL. But she's definitely going straight boss lady on baby brother now. And LMAO about a gigolo!
Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 07:57 pm
Hello,
well well...I can't wait to read the second part. Lance is a fool, I can't wait to see Mariah leave his sorry ass. I don't think the baby is his. Sugar you're taken, you just don't know it yet and you're in love, but as always you'll be the last one to know.
Author's Response:
LMAO, Sugar is the last one to know, ain't she? Chef will help her figure it out!
Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 07:26 pm
Have an AMAZINGLY GREAT SCHOOL YEAR!!!
Don't let these knuckle head kids, coworkers, or parents get to you
Oooh and I can't wait for part 2
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope it will be a good school year. And more updates to come.
Reviewer: itsmeboo Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 06:20 pm
“Then what is he then, Shug?”
He's none of your damn busy with your little nosey ass. Mallory makes ME want to hit him on Shug's behalf. He should be doing his job and stop acting like a damn man-child. So glad that Shug docked the little shit's paycheck. He needs to learn. He's got the nerve to complain about Helena. Although, Hel seems to be a little "extra", but she makes me laugh, so, OK. Lory is a pain, but, what are little brothers good for but to get on your last nerve. He does love his big sis for sure. I can't wait for him to become a fully formed man. HA
Sully, honey, he is a force. It will be interesting to see what happens when he meets Miles. Too much fineness in one room. whew.
Miles Thibodeau, TAKEN. Alright now. Shug, pay attention. EVERYTHING says this man is SERIOUS about you. HA.
So Shug, do you always buy special lingerie, drive like a bat out of hell and rush around getting ready for a thing? Just asking for future reference. And your reaction, heart paps, all this tension, for a thang? Sure, Shug. Keep telling yourself that. You'll prolly be chanting that when you're walking down the aisle to marry Miles. And more chanting when you and Miles welcome your first born. HA
Compare and contrast, Lance, who has the outer trappings of being a gentleman, while Miles IS one, treating Shug as someone that he respects and cherishes. Lance, who uses words to denigrate and teardown Shug, while Miles uses words to affirm Shug. Her reaction to Chef, playfully, saying that he was mad at her was telling. That ex-husband of hers tried to do a real number on her.
Chef, that man makes sure that there in no ambiguity with Shug. whew
I see I'll have to add to my list of things not to have in my mouth when I'm reading this book, my dental appliance. That thing prevents me from laughing my ass off and screaming. Maybe, I just want put ANYTHING in my mouth when reading this. HA
Yep, Lance sure knows how to pick 'em. Karma, thy name is Renard. kmsl.
You have a gift, Chica. You really do. Thanks so much for the update. It'll hold me over until the next one. Shug, letting her freak flag fly? I'm so there for that. hee.
re: that delusional collegue of yours, stay the course.
Author's Response:
Stop putting things in your mouth when you read, woman! I need you alive, but you're so right about Sugar doing all those extra steps to get ready for Miles for this date, LMAO. She went the extra extra extra mile to make sure that she's ready for "a thing". She's in denial, but she'll learn. Miles and Lance are compltely night and day, but because she's only ever been with one man most of her life, she'll always compare Miles to Lance even though she shouldn't. :<
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: August 13 2017 05:51 pm
Missus James I want to wish you a great, productive and fun filled school year. Don let the haters win.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Aiwen! I'll try to keep my distance from that chick.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 03:52 pm
I love love love this story and your writing. Sorry I didn't review sooner
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy what happens next in the story! :D
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 03:49 pm