Can't wait for part 2!!!
Author's Response:
It's coming! I promise!
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 03:45 pm
Mariah keep trying to upgrade. It doesn't matter to her who she hurts as long as she gets the lifestyle she wants. Hopefully she will get hers soon. I can't wait for part two of this date. Sugar is in for the time of her life. Excellent update.
Author's Response:
Marriage life for Mariah isn't what it's cracked up to be. She thought Lance was a big fish to catch and now, she's caught an even bigger fish, but Mariah is hiding a few things from Renard. Not that he deserves to know the truth anyway because he's a married man sneaking around.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 03:41 pm
I love everything about this 🙃🙃🙃
please update soon!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! More to come!
Reviewer: SleepEasy Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 03:38 pm
First, can we spare thought for what Sugar's life was like with Lance? A pair of boots, a simple reaction or non reaction can bring back a bad memory or feeling from Sugar at any point. I felt her anxiety because she thought simple teasing offended Chef for whatever reason and she was busy trying to gauge his reaction and demeanor for malice of any kind! What the hell did he put her through?!! The stuff running through her head in that moment! I'm glad Chef is a patient and mature man with the kind of life experience he has because he's going to need every bit of it for Sugar.
Chef was just being himself, so that was all kinds of good. Open book, wanting her like crazy so nothing new there. He'll bring it in every way she needs. I'm thinking its the best approach with Sugar. She needs brute honesty because she's so used to lies and subterfuge with Lance. Never knowing what's honestly real in her dealings with Lance except anything negative.
Going to be interesting....and much needed fun! Something tells me she never had a lot of that with Lance.
Last, yes, Mariah's mess will follow her. Good for Sugar to tell her its not her business and she doesn't even want to know. Don't drag her into it! She already knows all about Lance and dum dum will find out soon enough when he finds this out.
Excellent update!
Author's Response:
Sugar is always comparing Chef to Lance because Lance really jacked her up in their marriage. She is always second-guessing Chef's reactions and his statements because Lance was all about appearences, but behind closed doors he was a total bastard to Sugar. Lance is a charming man who can deliver a secretly deliver a threat with a smile. As for Mariah, her plotline will be very interesting!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 03:23 pm
I'm really enjoying Sugar and Chef's story...Sugar is in denial but Chef is giving her much needed attention...and Mariah is a gold digger looking for a bigger pot...Sugar seeing Mariah only helps her to further move on with her life...excellent story...
Author's Response:
Sugar is very much in denial, but Chef's about to make her come correct! :D
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 03:16 pm
I can't be mad at you. That was really a great chapter, I can't wait for the dominant side of Chef to come out. When she said that in the car, the whole, " for now." I could almost read between the lines of how pissed that must have made him. I would have been pissed if a guy said that to me. I mean shit.
p.s I've learned something from my life about sticky situations. If you give constant attention to bullshit, you'll be shit. If you don't clean up that bullshit quickly and move on then you'll eat shit. No matter where you are you're going to find people that want to bring out the worst in you, contemplate don't meditate your responses. Happy Sunday! Also imagine her like FiltyRich and you're Chef.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 02:56 pm
Lol lol lol lol lol Karma,karma,karma. Ok a few things. Lance better call DNA. 😝😝😝When is Mariah gonna learn Shug ain't the one. 👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾And last one. Please use condoms. Because the type of sex Chef and Shug are about to have. It almost always produces a baby. I'm just saying. d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;🤰🏽🤰🏽🤰🏽
LMAO, you are so right about dem condoms, but they just might forget... ;)
Author's Response:
Date: August 13 2017 02:39 pm
I can't be mad at you. That was really a great chapter, I can't wait for the dominant side of Chef to come out. When she said that in the car, the whole, " for now." I could almost read between the lines of how pissed that must have made him. I would have been pissed if a guy said that to me. I mean shit.
p.s I've learned something from my life about sticky situations. If you give constant attention to bullshit, you'll be shit. If you don't clean up that bullshit quickly and move on then you'll eat shit. No matter where you are you're going to find people that want to bring out the worst in you, contemplate don't meditate your responses. Happy Sunday! Also imagine her like FiltyRich and you're Chef.
Author's Response:
You read in between the lines well. Chef was very pissed because dude is working hard to show Sugar that he's the real thing and she's talking about "for the time being"! Sugar thought right. Talking like that is almost like a threat to a man like Chef, but she's gonna learn! You're Chef/Filthy Rich analogy gave me a lot to think about! You're absolutely right!
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 01:50 pm
Thank you for the update! I look forward to the next one!! Good luck with your first day of school!! My mother is a teacher so I know how unsettling it can be for the first few weeks while you and the students are getting took know each other. With this shady co-worker on top of everything else, keep an eye out for her.
Author's Response:
Hopefully, I will be able to update at the end of this week! :) Thank you for your kind words!
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2017 12:36 pm
I live for your writing. Update moreeeeee of this beautiful story.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much! A nice big update is coming your way!
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: August 09 2017 08:36 pm
Chef needs a taste of Sugar's puddin'!!!
Author's Response:
You know it! :D
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: August 09 2017 03:50 am
Chef is DEFINITELY what I call an alpha male! I love it!!!!
Author's Response:
Chef is an alpha male, but he is a patient alpha male. I love aggressive alpha males too, but it's nice writing Chef because he's so calm and patient, but he knows exactly what he wants.
Reviewer: Hot Soup Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 08 2017 06:03 pm
Yeah! i got my fix. Please do publish. I'm willing/waiting to buy this (paper or ebook). Hell both
Author's Response:
OMG, it makes me so happy that you would want to buy this. I actually want this to be the very first story I publish and feedback from you wonderful ladies make me a better writer so I can improve my craft. :)
Reviewer: lgsl Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 08 2017 05:28 am
See now, Sugar has You're Makin' Me High, Toni Braxton, running through her background in this chapter.
I have How Do You Like Your Love Served, New Edition, running through my head for Chef's background. Ha!!
This music thing is catching a bit...lol!
Author's Response:
;) Join the fun, flikchick! Music sets the mood!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 11:57 pm
FYI My vote for the next chapter is - for the Hartwell girls to have a girls night and chat about Chef !?!?! :D :D
I've decided to have the Hartwell girls have their little meet-up in the chapter after next. So, they can pry all the juicy details from Sugar about that date. ;)
Author's Response:
Date: August 07 2017 06:17 pm
Swoon !!! I'm Totally LOVING Sugar and Chef ! Can't get enough of them ! More Please !!! :)
Author's Response:
More to come! :D
Reviewer: stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 06:14 pm
Miles is a real good photographer, but then again, the subject is hella impressive. DAMN. This man. I see now that I can't eat or drink while reading this book. hee
Author's Response:
Read at your own risk, chica! LOL
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 05:09 pm
Great updates MJ! I love how Chef is bringing romance into Sugar's life. This is all new territory for Sugar, she's been going without for far to long. A relationship isn't all about the sex ( but it's a big part )romance an respect is very essential to a healthy marriage or relationship. I give Chef an A+. Sooner or later, these women are going to stop sleeping on these older gentlemen. I can't wait until their date.
Author's Response:
You are so right. Older gentlemen get slept on so much!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 01:31 pm
thank u for writing this story, i like it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 01:22 pm
Just finished the last two chapters.. and they were So HOT and STEAMY I'm in love with Mr Miles aka Chef, he's making Sugar think "Lamar WHO" and if its like this just rome Oral and a lillte Phome sex, whne they do the DEED, (which will be soon I hope) Chef will have Sugar hitting Mairah Carey notes.. I so can't wait.
I also love the Hartewll sister and the in laws they're were a Riot when they met Chef.
And Mallory is getting on my nereves, Sugart needs to have it out with him, I hope he didn't let those ladies eat and drink On the House, and I hope he's not telling them that SugarMama's is His place.
Again I'm really enjoing this story and looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
"Mariah Carey notes" LOL!
Sugar is gonna get with Mallory and she's gonna punish him where it hurts this time around. ;)
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 01:17 pm
Loving this book and so.excited for their date...you have a blossoming romance on your hands...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It is definitely a blossoming romance even though Sugar doesn't want to admit it. LOL
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 06:42 am
So how old is Chef? I'm piture him 45-50.
Author's Response:
At this point of the story, Chef is 46.
Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 04:14 am
Chef is going to open Sugar's eyes 👀 to a lot of things. My vote is for date night too an mind blown mornings😉 Sugar will be speaking in tongues 👅when Chef releases his utensils on her🍴😆 I hope the person she runs into is Lance and he witness how a real man treats a woman💏 Nice update 😆
Author's Response:
"releases his utensils on her"
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 04:06 am
I love sweet talk..:) Best part of the beginning of a relationship! I loved this whole chapter, in fact. And lucky girl, Sugar's gonna have PLENTY of fun in the sack with that sexy marine!
Nice!
Author's Response:
Sweet talk is the best part at the beginning of a relationship! I agree with you absolutely! In the next chapter, Sugar is definitely going to have some fun! LOL
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 04:02 am
I was not prepared for that phone call!
Author's Response:
The funny thing is originally the phone was supposed to be simple and playful. It wasn't supposed to go in that direction. Chef was only supposed to send that pic of him lying in bed when she asked what kind of pjs he wore and the chapter was supposed to have a different outcome. Writers are crazy because sometimes, characters tell you how they want their story to go. So a lot of the times, a chapter doesn't go in the direction you intently planned, LOL.
Reviewer: MiaIsabella1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 04:00 am