My goodness, what a birthday indeed! Man, she's never going to hear the end of it from her sisters. Never! As mortified as Sugar was, even she can't deny that this was the best birthday (so far) of her adult life.
As for Chef? Gawd and Damb.
Author's Response:
LMAO, you know her sisters will drive her insane talking about that birthday and getting caught redhanded. But you are absolutely right! It was the best birthday she has had so far!
Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed
[Report This]Date: August 04 2017 12:11 am
Oh my this chapter was all kinds of delicious.
Author's Response:
I am so happy you enjoyed it! More to come! :)
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 03 2017 11:30 pm
ummm, whoa, *cough*, whew chile. Yeah. whew. little hot up in herre. whew.
“Um, shouldn’t we go…to the bedroom…first,” she asked
“Where else would, um, this happen?”
See now, it's very clear that Lance was not handling his business. If loving was limited to just the bedroom, Shug has been missing out. Even if she and Miles don't make it, he will open up a brand new world to her as to what she should EXPECT and DEMAND from a relationship.
“Let me in, honey,”
Yeah, not just the physical, but much, much deeper. Does Shug even realize what he's asking of her? Chef is a rascal, but he is dead serious when it comes to Shug. Every word has more than one meaning.
Her girl squad cracked me up. I love their dynamic. Their support of each other is really a joy to behold. Even if they get into spats ever now and then, they are all fam.
Yeah, Shug no longer needs a dildo. She's already gotten rid of that ineffective dildo, Lance "I don't know what to do with good pussy if it came with instructions" Wallace.
I sound like a broken record, but, great chappie, Chica.
So, I had to read this a few times, you know, for literary reasons, ahem.
Author's Response:
Uh huh, "literary reasons"! *side eye* LOL
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 05:59 pm
😂😂😂😂😂 I'm crying lol! Best chapter yet. Chef has me fanning myself
Author's Response:
Every time Chef got up close and personal with her, Sugar was like:
LMAOOOOO!
Reviewer: saquir19 Signed [Report This]Date: August 03 2017 08:44 am
I'm speechless! That glass of water was definitely needed. Chef is slowly working his way into her life. He just needs her brothers approval and he's in the family! Can't wait to see how he surprises her next!
Author's Response:
If Mallory meets Chef, he'll give a thumbs up because Lory is sneaky and he knows that if Sugar got a man then she won't be on his case as much, LMAO. But Sully. Nah, bruh. Sully gonna be looking at Chef like:
"I don't like you. I don't like yo face. Stay the hell away from my sis, bruh. Don't even breath in her direction or there'll be problems!"
Reviewer: MiaIsabella1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 03 2017 05:38 am
LOL, busteeeed!!!! Too funny!😂
Sugar was standing in that kitchen with a sex toy box in her hand, looking like this: And feeling attacked when she got busted!
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 05:29 am
Anyone else hear Sam Elliot's voice as Chef. Good Lord that man!!!!!
Author's Response:
OH! Sam Elliot has a nice deep voice! He's in one of my favorite movies of all time.
Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed [Report This]Date: August 03 2017 05:19 am
My neck, my back, my ..... and my crack. First you got to put your neck into it. Then...
Yes
girl you have singing Trina. This was an amazing update, I loved every second of it. Helena is crazy. How are you going to go into someone's master bathroom uninvited. Bless her little heart though for being a lovable snitch. Sugar needed that pick me up really bad. I was waiting for update, anticipating all over the lemony goodness to come. I wasn't disappointed. Thank you, I loved it.
Author's Response:
Trina knew the dealio, LOL! Sugar definitely needed some serious pampering from Chef. She was starving for some chicken noodle soup and something else she didn't know she needed until Chef laid it down her!
But I love Helena so much! She was prime reason I was laughing so hard. Helena was like: "LET ME SPILL DEZ BEANS!"
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 04:20 am
Ooh Chef!!!!
Author's Response:
Here's some cold air to cool you down! I'm right there alongside you!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 03:27 am
Bitch
I moaned outloud reading that chapter. My broken dry pipe was suddenly fixed. Guuurl
Author's Response:
THE FUN JUST GETTIN' STARTED, HUNTY!
Reviewer: besus Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 03 2017 03:24 am
SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTT!
That was...that was...(fanning myself) CHEF IS
KILLING ME RIGHT NOW! WHOO CHILD!
Author's Response:
What a wonderful way to go though!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 03:14 am
Ole lame behind Lance was a dud in the bedroom😆 Chef just let loose Sugar's inner FREAK!😉 that man is a keeper👏👏👏👏👏 Sugar family is a bunch of crazy wild freaky women😆 I love it!😂 Chef is the kind of man that will keep a smile on your face😊 every day😆 GET IT SUGAR👍 I need some air😩 it just got hot🔥up in HERRE!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
The women in Sugar's family are a bunch of freaks. Mama Hartwell been admirin' Chef even tho she's a married woman, but now she want him in the fam as a son-in-law, LOL. Rochelle got Sugar a freakum dress. Helena got Sugar f*ck-me-pumps. Hell, even Sugar can use that spa basket with Chef. But Odette and that toy, LMAO. She has no cool whatsoever. The only one who did right was Katrina with that spa giftcard!
Sugar all worried 'cause Lance didn't like doing that with her, but a real man like Chef loved it. If she think Chef's headgame is strong then what until he lays his stroke game, ya'll. She only got Lance to compare to and when it happens, she gonna be like:
"WTH? LANCE BAMBOOZLED ME FOR 18 YEARS!"
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: August 03 2017 03:07 am
Yassss. Chef!!!
Author's Response:
Date: August 03 2017 03:03 am
I love Chef's real name!!! THis chapter had sweating and then laughing out loud. Missus James you are the sugady!!!
Author's Response:
Chef has a good strong real name, but there is some history behind it that will be explained later on. I am so happy you enjoyed the chapter. I kept fanning myself or laughing while I wrote it, LOL. So I'm glad you got the same reaction.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 03 2017 02:29 am
Oh My Fucking God...Where is my Chef?
Author's Response:
He's something else!
[Report This]Date: August 03 2017 02:07 am
OMG, I would LOVE for Chef to take care of m in every way possible... If I were Sugar, I would let that man have me Walking Funny with a Smile glued to my face... I give it another day b4 she has him Blow her Back Out.]
As for Lance WTH is he even calling Sugar, its not like they're friends, shouldn't he be keeping an eye on his THOT.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
LOL! Sugar has some willpower left. She'll try to hold out. Keyword: try.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 02 2017 05:28 am
This whole section right here is sooooo perfect. That had me fanning and blushing at the same time. Seriously, Chef !
Author's Response:
Wait until the next chapter, girl! It's gonna be blazing.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2017 11:26 pm
This man, and when I say this man, I mean Chef, because Lance... NOPE.
Chef does not play games. That's being GROWN. Lance on the other hand... NOPE.
Chef is very clear with Shug and is all about Shug. Shug is liking that A LOT. He's just getting started.
Lance is so low rent. I can't see him faring well when you have him standing next to a real man. It's quite easy to see counterfeit when you're experiencing the REAL thing. Shug will come to see that. She's already starting to see it.
Wonderful update, cher.
RE: your co-worker, I've had several who've tried to sabotage me during my career. One thing that I did was to memorialize any conversations of consequence that we had with a follow-up email documenting what was said.
Author's Response:
Chef can be playful, but he doesn't play games at all. You are absolutely right. Lance is all about games and winning, but he's gonna come correct when he goes toe-to-toe with Chef. Sugar will realize that Chef is the real deal.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2017 08:51 pm
What a wonderful update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2017 08:26 pm
Missus James you are awesome!!! Your co-teacher is obviously Satan's concubine so I will pray for you often. Now back to my review, why is Lance, the broke down maho still contacting Sugar? Why is Sugar allowing Lance to harass her? I am loving Chef, he is my hero!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, PM! I had a good laugh at that "Satan's concubine" comment. Lance is a parasite from her past that just won't let go of her, but Chef gonna be there with a pair of pliers to yank Lance off of her, LMAO. Chef ain't having that. Sugar promised that he was going to be the only man in her life and even though Sugar isn't in love with Lance anymore, Chef doesn't want her wasting time on old dude. Chef wants all the attention, LOL.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2017 03:14 pm
This was funny, I'm glad she allowed him to come over and take care of her. I love how he handled Lance's trifling ass. You couldn't remember my birthday while we were married but now you can when you're married to someone else? Is there trouble in your jacked up paradise? I know this next chapter is going to be intense! And I'm all for it!!! She might not be sick after this honey!! LOl.
I'm glad you were able to get back into your classroom, they haven't let us yet. I'm sorry that you have to deal with a walking snake this year. Just focus on your kids, deal with her as little as you can. Hopefully you get a new grade level partner either mid-way through the year or after this year is over. Update soon!
Author's Response:
After Chef hung up on him that second time, Lance was like:
As for the two-legged snake, I'm shutting my door and teaching. I'm not even going to bat an eyelash in her direction unless we gotta do something together under principal orders.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2017 12:31 pm
I love everything about this story. I need to find me a Chef.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am glad you are enjoying Chef because I love writing him.
Reviewer: LuKohana Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2017 10:55 am
This whole section right here is sooooo perfect. That had me fanning and blushing at the same time. Seriously, Chef !
Author's Response:
Chef ain't even got the fun started yet and everybody like:
I love ya'll so much!
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2017 03:12 am
Ooooouuuuu weeee chef got me lovin him more and more. I can't wait for when him and Lance meet.. blessed are you d84;d84;d84;
Author's Response:
Lance and Chef are gonna meet in the next three or so updates.
Reviewer: ynise1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2017 11:16 pm
Damn! You sure know how to heat things up! I am sitting here all ummm hot and bothered. The way you write is magical. More.. more please.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much! I am glad you enjoy the story so far! Keep a fan and a glass of ice cold water nearby for the next chapter, LOL.
Reviewer: Belladonna400 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2017 09:10 pm