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Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

For those of you who have read the 4th chapter of Love's Workout, I must apologize in advance, it would be great for me to expand on Laura's character and delve into her affair with her father, but I chose not to do so because this story is soley about the growth of Kit and Cole's relationship. But who knows what could happen in the future with this story. Thank you for reading and all constructive criticism is welcomed with your comments.

 Reviewer: Cassandra Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2017 03:43 pm
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

This can't possibly be the end of the story. If it is...its disappointing. We need some explaination and I want to find out if Cole and Kit get together. Please write more than this!



Author's Response:

Hey BossLady,

Sorry about the brief hiatus, I've been dealing with a lot lately, but I went ahead and submitted three more chapters. Enjoy.

 Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 04:59 pm
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

Wow! OK, well I'm assuming that man isn't really Laura's father and she's been lying about who the man is all those years. Coz if he really is her father then he must have been grooming her and molesting her from when she was still a child, there's no way that only started in her 20s, that woman was raised by a Paedophile.

 Reviewer: K' Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 10:30 am
Title: Chapter 1 Just Breathe

Immma need that explanation from old girl...like daddy's not really her daddy right? I did not see that coming. New chapter tmrw right?!

 Reviewer: jcjoie Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 04:46 am
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

WTF

 Reviewer: Puccapurple Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 12:07 am
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

Whaaaaaaaa😮 WELL....DAMN!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2017 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

SCANDALOUS😲

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2017 11:05 pm
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

That's just nasty! I bet her father was planning his perfect wedding to his daughter... and how in the heck they were going to explain to Cole what he saw with his own eyes. Now he can give Kit a chance, when he heals from his heartbreak. Great update!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2017 02:06 pm
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

Oh my GOODNESSS

 Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 08 2017 01:35 am
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

Ik Laura was cheating

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2017 01:28 am
Title: Chapter 4 Going Through Changes

Somehow I missed the updates.

Now... I KNEW it! She was way too accommodating to her father for that to be normal. And pops is standing there in a sheet getting ready to say who the hell knows what to explain that mess. And she's like just listen to me...lol! Really? Poor Cole. I'm sure he never saw that coming!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2017 01:05 am
Title: Chapter 2 New Look

I like this story! Good job!!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2017 12:43 pm
Title: Chapter 2 New Look

Wow, can't wait to see Cole's reaction.  I'm so glad Laura is written as a snotty person.  Now I won't feel bad when Kit steals Cole away! lol

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2017 01:40 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Just Breathe

Loving this story so far!

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 29 2017 01:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Just Breathe

I think it's rather pathetic of her to have ttorch for the friend when he's clearly showing he's disinterested. He's gushing about his romantic date and beautiful gifts to his fiance and she still wants him? I know you'll probably make him break up with the fiance so that he will be in a relationship with her or give her a meaningless relationship as she waits for him to ' come to his senses' anyway that's the plot for many stories here. It paints women in a bad light and maybe it's a reflection of how pathetic we've become in society. 



Author's Response:

I haven't had the time to look at the reviews, but I must say that I agree with your statement. At the time that I wrote this story, it was never meant for Cole to be with anyone other than Kit and it still isn't. Laura is never developed as a character. But overall, I'm happy with the outcome of my story and don't foresee me making any changes. Keep being honest. I'm very happy that you were. I'm looking forward to hearing more from you.

 Reviewer: freader Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 12:32 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Just Breathe

Cute story. I can't wait to see where it goes!

 Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 04:43 am
Title: Chapter 2 New Look

Once a guy tells me about his romantic date and shows me the gift he has for his FIANCEE, that door is closed.  Cole  should let the future wife go before she even step into a romantic picture with him.  

Maybe Cole wil come home early to check on Kit and catch the fiancee with another man...

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 05:16 pm
Title: Chapter 2 New Look

Get your man, Kit...

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 03:18 pm
Title: Chapter 2 New Look

I like it!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 06:36 am
Title: Chapter 2 New Look

Excellent!!!!

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 02:14 am
Title: Chapter 2 New Look

I can't wait for Cole to see her new look👗👠 but don't cutc86; off all that pretty hair💇

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 11:36 pm
Title: Chapter 2 New Look

Cole is an awesome fiance and hopeless romantic but to the wrong woman😞 Kit is the woman for him... As soon as they stop pussyfooting around the attraction, maybe some lovin can happen😁 she can wear a paper sack and be bald headed wearing 500lbs an this man will still find her attractive😁 love this update💕

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 11:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Just Breathe

Nice👍

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2017 01:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Just Breathe

Is this story complete?
The beginning had a decent story setup. Wondering if we'll have more character depth.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2017 12:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1 Just Breathe

I'm sooooo happy you're putting this story on the chamber! I've read it on your blog(which I can't find now..😢). Looking forward to reading it again!!

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi Ritz,

 

Thanks for being such a great fan. I'm not sure why my blog isn't visible anymore, but just in case you want to check it out, it's called romanticraving. I'm working on a new story. I hope that you get even more enjoyment out of this story the second time around as you did the first. I also welcome any constructive feedback. Can't wait to hear from you.

 Reviewer: ritzbitstrickk Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2017 07:42 pm


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