Thank you fir following thru to finish this story, e u gonna write about Sasha and Shane?
Author's Response:
Hello Minxie, thank you so much for reading and reviewing. i had not planned on writing about shane and sasha but i have gotten more than a few messages asking me to do so. i just never thought anyone would really care about them that much since they are background characters. So i might. I'm thinking about it.
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: September 21 2017 06:25 pm
This chapter was perfect!!! I love the letter from his father. Great update honey.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: September 19 2017 05:56 pm
What a great update honey! Thank you!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: September 15 2017 05:45 pm
Girl I love this story, keep it coming
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2017 03:04 pm
Deal with the evil you have raut Ellen, my man Rick says that you ain't got nothing coming. Get to stepping, trick!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 13 2017 12:16 am
oh wow u got me in tears, this us great
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2017 10:38 pm
Great update honey!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2017 08:16 pm
You killed Rick's father but you left his incubator breathing, that was just foul! Now the baby is here but Michonne is sick. How much can Rick take?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2017 03:59 pm
Ellen's evil is never ending, much like our current fake president the orange buffon. Both LOri and Ellen are psychotic and don't realize it. Lori's baby doesn't stand a chance,
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 30 2017 10:46 pm
Love this update... You ROCK!!!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2017 05:30 pm
Sasha you are so wrong for using that man, I never would have that you would have gold digger tendencies. Shane is you truly loved Sasha you wouldn't have Andrea haning on but told her it was over. I hope that you are success with your art becasue it's stupid to stop your education. What if he gets tired of you not loving him and divorces you? What will you have to fall back on without an education?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 25 2017 12:48 am
hmm i wonder why in all these stories the blackmen are protrayed as sterotypically bad . is this the reality of the africian americian male?
Author's Response:
That's an interesting question. In some cases yes, but I don't think we have seen the last of Mike in this story. And, i don't think he is a bad guy at all. I think he is spoiled and used to getting his way. But, he's definitely not a bad guy.
Reviewer: ireader Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 23 2017 05:19 pm
Did I miss something? It appears that chapter 6 is a repeat of chapter 5? So far, so good. I'm loving this story. 👍🏾
Author's Response:
You were right, i must have copied it over incorrectly. Thank you so much for catching that! I fixed it. Happy reading!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: August 19 2017 03:24 pm
Why would Sasha break Shane's heart? I guess it's bring it on drama! LOL! Your writing is very catching, I like it.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2017 05:32 pm
I just started reading this story...and wow! You are good. I hope Rick and Mich, secretly get married and go home together. That should give his old hag...I mean mother a heart attack. LOL! Thank you for the update.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 18 2017 01:46 pm
I'm enjoying this story honey. Great job!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2017 12:51 am
Shane got denied and Michonne said yes!!! I can't wait to read about his incubator's and Lori's reaction to his proposing to MIchonne.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 05:31 am
Why is not giving Rick the same benefit that he gave her? Yep, he called it right she is a scared little girl.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 05:25 am
Mike is like a pitbull on a pork chop, relentless.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 05:09 am
Richonne forever!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 04:58 am
First of all why was Mike invited to her birthday party? WHy would Michonne accept his gift?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 04:36 am
I love Rick!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 04:27 am
Michonne admitted that she's in love with Rick. Richonne is born!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 04:18 am
Please end your relationship with Mike Michonne.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 04:05 am
Rick is working his magic. I really want Michonne to whoop Lori, please?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2017 03:31 am