Reviews For A Rival's Claim
Title: Chapter 13

Thank you for the update. This chapter showed the true meaning of the term 'marry in haste and repent at leisure'. The problem between Michonne and Rick is not Jessie, Shane or even Lori. It's  the lack of knowledge between them both. Neither one of them knew enough about the other to marry that quickly. I maybe in the minority here, but I never disliked Jessie. The real culprit has always been Rick. He has a rescuer complex and Jessie has a victim mentality; thereby this makes them almost the perfect couple, dysfunctional, but perfect. Michonne on the other hand whilst strong in some areas, is a bit naive and in denial about a lot of things and people in her life. What it all comes down to is that it seems to be she can be easily manipulated,  if one knows the right buttons to push. I think Mike's illness will be another source of discontentment between them. He will probably use it to further guilt Michonne. Rick is using his unborn children as an excuse not be straight forward, which will definitely come back to bit him. He should take Morgan's advice. As my step dad always say to us..." who don't hear, will be made to feel." And his personal favourite ..."if you choose to be blind, then you will be forced to see."    

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2018 06:14 pm

Title: Chapter 13

I don't care that Mike is dying😐 he has a lot of life in him 😴to ask a man can he spend the rest of his life with that man's wife😕 I say put him out of his misery now😆 Rick got some nerves to be mad at Michonne when he has secrets too😕 They are smart enough to not let the intruders invade their sanctuary😕 I hope they can work it out😐 I'm digging this update😆

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2018 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter, Mike is an asshole..  Him getting the reocurence of cancer is poetic justice. Can you k8ll Jiessie in this story, I really hate her?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2018 03:14 am



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