This could turn into a love triangle. Ethan is being very difficult and needs to do the right thing. Nice chapter!😊
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: May 28 2018 02:58 pm
Ethan is too much. I understand his reasoning though we don't know everything that happened with the humans. Mia doesn't deserve this treatment, hopefully there is a way they can work through all of this
Reviewer: etham and Mia Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 23 2018 03:20 pm
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what happens nexttt! So happy Shawn is standing up for his girl.
But what about her career? She really needs to just leave! I wonder what would happen if she did? That'd be funnnn.
Kinda want Shawn to fall half in love with her and her to be receptive of that.
Kick rocks Ethan! I hope you choke on jealousy and die (not die but...yeah, I see sooo much delightful groveling in his future)
Poor girlie, she needs to be strong and steadfast in her denial of Ethan...I really hope she doesn't fold too quickly....
Reviewer: Jamilla Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 14 2018 05:46 am
I forgot to add that Mia needs to tell Mr. Ethan when she can that she's just as disgusted by him as he is of her at this point in time. And that he forced this on her, so lose the attitude. He's been walking around like she's the one who did this to him! He was a complete effing stranger to her when he attacked her and still is now! If he's starting to listen, then get some perspective on how things really went down.
Best line of the chapter...."Not today Satan"...LMAO!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2018 03:08 pm
Yeah!!😆 she has her friend back👏👏👏👏 but Ethan has to go😡 I'm not feeling him yet😕 I'm digging this update😆👏👏👏👏
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2018 02:34 pm
I hope she gives Ethan a very hard time. I would not just roll over and be all willing to benefit him because he needs it. As far as Mia's Lunas role, I would take no disrespect because they Alpha who has his head stuck up his ass in the past hasn't claimed her. People will treat you how you allow them to treat you.
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2018 05:20 am
Hopefully Mia will show Ethan that she is not afraid of him. She should tell him that he is not all that and she deserves better....after that, just look clear through him.
Can't wait to find out what the compromise will be? Ethan is territorial toward her as man and wolf, but don't want her...will he still cheat on her? That would be something she shouldn't put up with. I kind of hope she leaves him.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2018 03:41 am
At least Ethan is listening a little now. He still needs to talk to someone about this for real! Dude has issues to work out!
Mia is my girl! Just taking care of her business and herself like a woman. A smart woman!
Beth...meh...I'm still a little salty about her.
Good work!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2018 02:54 am
Nice update😀
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2018 02:10 am
You're back! Thank you for updating the story, it's a rare occurrence in this site nowadays.
Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 06 2018 07:53 pm
Why not just kill off the worthless Alpha Ethan and let Mia run the pack...good story but needs a good editor...
Author's Response:
Oh ive got something planned for Ethan. dont worry. thanks for reading. I'll try to go back over it and see what i missed.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: May 06 2018 06:52 pm