Excited to read the next part.
Author's Response:
Glad to see your still here! Thanks for the support!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2018 06:36 pm
Mia must really be feeling him to spend the weekend with him this soon! I wonder if the mate bond is already locking in place for her to act this quickly.
Can't wait for the rest.....
Author's Response:
Thanks for hanging with the story! Yes the romance is a bit fast paced, it's my first so i struggled a bit with it. Hope you like the next part!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 25 2018 03:43 am
It’s about to go down! lol I doubt Kale is gonna hold off. I really like this story. I hope you don’t mind if I make a suggestion though. Can you somehow identify when chatcters are texting? For speaking you have the quotation marks but nothing for texting. It makes those areas of the store hard to read.
Author's Response:
Hmmmm when i write it on Google docs the texting is in italics so when i copy and paste I assumed that transferred over. Thanks for pointing it out for me I'll fix that next time
Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2018 03:11 am
Kale is smooth, I could use a Kale in my life.
Author's Response:
I know right! Don't we all!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 23 2018 02:11 am