Only good things happening 😁
It's over but I did enjoy the story
Yes it is over. These two really needed good things to happen to them. They had too many bad things to happen. Moonie Anonymous once again thnx for the review.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 06:45 pm
Get down Todd 🕺, yes free yourself from Blair
Yes Jovan is married
Todd and Evangeline make good friends for each other. JOVAN is married. Thnx Moonie Anonymous for reading the story and offering your review.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 06:32 pm
Evangeline and John put everything out on the table and start fresh with no doubts. Moonie Anonymous thnx so much for your continued support. Readers like you and others really help me as a writer to stay encouraged. Although I write for my enjoyment and take ownership of all of my stories it does help to have readers to offer comments. Even it no one comments I will continue to write because I enjoy it. Thnx again for taking the time to comment.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 05:53 pm
I'd never expected anything less than Todd putting up a fight about Evangeline marrying John 😂 yes mama Williamson is accepting the marriage, is Layla going to be on board?
Of course Todd would object. Evangeline is his girl. Mrs. Williamson wants her daughter happy as most mothers do. Layla, who cares what she thinks. She always has something negative to say. As long as Evangeline and John agree that does it. Thnx again for reading and commenting Moonie Anonymous.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 05:37 pm
Jovan wedding, I have no problem with getting married quickly to the right person
Moonie Anonymous now you know that these two belong together. Just like peanut butter and jelly. Just because the writers of OLTL couldn't see that this writer does. Thnx for the comment.Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 05:20 pm
Thank you for the update. You wrote this story beautifully. Although, I could not, nor will I ever be a fan of John McBain, I must admit the wonderful job you did with this story. The way in which you captured the emotions, thoughts and point of view of the main characters, thereby, allowing me to feel their joy, happiness and even anguish. It was well written.
I wish you Godspeed. Have a blessed week.
Sarah Anonymous thnx so much for your candid review. You toughed your way through the story and I am thankful. I tried to make it readable and to give the characters some believability. Thnx for your kind words.
God's blessings upon you too as is His will.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21 2018 08:15 pm
Thank you for the update. This was well written. You did a great job. Treat her well John.
You have a blessed and safe day.
Thnx for the review. Not many chapters left for this story. Thnx for reading it.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 20 2018 03:08 am
Thank you for the update. John, John, John...that has to be the biggest piece of cockamamie excuse...sorry explanation, that could have been given. Let's start with "you weren't an option." Really! Evangeline was there all along. You were the one who chose to leave the relationship... first emotionally, then mentally, finally physically. Why when you had what you claimed you loved and wanted, you didn't try to keep it? Let's face it- Natalie gave you what you wanted along...the feeling of being needed. You liked that feeling ,the rush of it. Own up to that fact. By your own admission in the beginning...you watched Natalie treat Evangeline like crap and said and did absolutely nothing! Oh, no..actually you said, "I didn't see it, or maybe I didn't want to." What the heck kind of Detective are you? You can't see things right before your very eyes? It's one of two things...you are the not sharpest knife in the set or you were being vindictive (using Natalie to punish Evangeline). Evangeline you should question why you thought it ok for John to treat you the way he did and allowed Natalie to do the same. Why stay that long with and around him. You must have been getting something out of it.Sorry about the rant. John McBain is like Fredo to me. 'I can't kill him because you are writing him.' LOL! I can't with this guy.. I just can't. However, you have me so hooked... I must see it through. You have a great gift, my little one. LOL!
Have a blessed weekend. Be safe.
Sarah Anonymous you are on a tirade girl! I love it though. Glad to have you expressing yourself on one of my stories. Yes John was a total cad to Evangeline but he's trying to redeem himself. I won't defend him. With that said, did you read my other story, 'The Confrontation'? That might give you a smile. Let me know what you think of that one.
Thnx again for your most thorough comments because they keep me on my toes. I take my readers seriously because I know that you don't have to read my stories let alone leave a review. I won't change my stories to please anyone but myself but I do take into consideration observations noted by the readers of the stories. They sometimes see things that I did not realize were projected in the story. It's all good for both sides. The reader feel engaged and the write gets feedback on their work. Stay safe yourself.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 18 2018 12:12 am
Thank you for the update. Well...that went smoothly. More power to Evangeline, I say. Personally, when she and John broke up, she was well rid. I really do hope that John treats her the way she deserves. I don't believe the past is the past if it hasn't been dealt with at all. As the saying goes, 'those who don't learn from the past, are doomed to repeat it.' I hope John really has learnt from his. Let's hope Natalie doesn't need rescuing yet, again.
I would have had one major question for him, "Had I not left Llanview, would you have come to this grand epiphany?" Evangeline, Evangeline, Evangeline.... I can't...not with John.
You have a great talent. Anyone who can get me to read a story with John McBain in it, has to be good. This story is written beautifully. I am drawn to it.
Have a blessed and wonderful weekend.
Sarah Anonymous thnx again for your most candid response. You are correct in all that you said, we are doomed if we do not learn from our past. John will be the great loser if this doesn't work out. Let's see how it transpires.
Thnx also for the great complement that my story is written well enough for you to read a story 'with John McBain' in it. I guess I like Evangeline's character so much, before the writers diminished' her that if she was happy with John then I want that relationship to work.
All relationships have ups and downs not only 'love relationships'. Hang in there with me a little longer and I hope that you will enjoy the journey. I don't too many chapters left on this story. I can only take it so far. I have another chapter or two to do on this story to finish it. I have the outline in my head but I have to write it out. That takes time.
You also have a blessed and wonderful weekend and thnx for staying with me my stories.Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 16 2018 10:13 pm
I support it either way😆 I'm digging this story😆
Tre, as always, thnx for your comments. I just noticed that you have commented on most of my stories and I sincerely thank you for your support. I thnx all those who take the time to read. Those of you who leave reviews I thnx you too.
I might have a chapter of two more for these two. Their story is not finished.Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2018 12:29 am
Thank you for the post. I must admit...I disliked John McBain with a passion. He treated Evangeline deplorable. I don't think there is a writer out there that can make me ship them, ever. ( He had a great woman and he dumped her for Natalie! Natalie of all people and for what, exactly? Only to end up divorced later on, serves him right.) To be honest, their chemistry was way off, compared to hers and Todd's. That being said, you wrote this story beautifully.
I just wished she waited a bit before saying yes. Got to know him better and got an apology for his and Natalie's ill treatment towards her.
Have a blessed and wonderful week.
Sarah Anonymous I thnx you for your very candid comments. I agree with you that McBain treated her deplorably and Natalie didn't know any better because she was 'gutter trash'. Don't give up on it just yet. I wasn't certain if I wanted to leave it as is and if I continue all will be explained. Evangeline is not stupid and neither is she a glutton for punishment.
You too have a blessed and wonderful week. I always do with God first. Even if junk happens He always sees me through it.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 12 2018 11:46 pm