All that rat🐀 Terrence need to do now is rummage through her trash... and blackmail her into doing whatever he wants. Girl, why you put that garbage in your trash, and drive that car without your license, with drugs on your hands😕 This story is so good... I'm digging it!!Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2018 03:31 am
Not very sensible of Nayeley to use her personal trash can for MJ’s drug Paraphernalia. Goodness knows who’ll be searching through it considering she’s having her own problems with her dodgy coach (who needs to be fired asap). Also that nurse could still talk to someone. Kahlil should have driven MJ’s car and Nayeley should have driven Kahlil’s.Reviewer: K Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2018 02:58 am
Nooo. What a way to re-enter her life? Your chaarcters are well crafted.. I, especially like Nayely she did not let her abandonment and self esteem issues prevent her from being successful and true to her self. But you hinted of a secret she and Terrence share how do her issues play into that. MJ just shows how when the right/wrong person enter your life your resolve can easily be broken. I like how he kick out Danny strike ONE you out. But how will he climb out of that hole she put him in. Spiteful!!
Like where you ended climatic!! Will you be regularly updating or sporadic. Thanks for the great read.
Thank you so much for your thoughts! I plan on updating weekly so definitely make sure you keep an eye out for anything new!Reviewer: Francis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 03 2018 10:37 am
I really love this story. It is well thought out and written. My heart bleeds for Nayley and I understand MJ was hurt, but the fact he can't put himself in her shoes for one moment is frustrating. He should at least listen to what she has to say. So far I think he is a little self centered, but we all were at that age. I hope he redeems himself. I can't wait to the next update!
Thank you so much for commenting! I know this is a late reply but believe me, these two have a lot in store and some work to get to!Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 04:52 am
Wow so good keep up the work hope they end up together and that park forgives her
Thanks for reading!Reviewer: Li Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 01:19 am