Title: Chapter 1

I really love this story. It is well thought out and written.  My heart bleeds for Nayley and I understand MJ was hurt, but the fact he can't put himself in her shoes for one moment is frustrating.  He should at least listen to what she has to say.  So far I think he is a little self centered, but we all were at that age.  I hope he redeems himself.  I can't wait to the next update!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 7

Wow so good keep up the work hope they end up together and that park  forgives her

Reviewer: Li Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2018 01:19 am



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