Reviews For Mercy
Title: Trojan Horse

glad your back.. also I still reading so please update when you can



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: tiffany37 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 14 2014 04:20 am

Title: Are U Mine

I love this story. This has been the only story I've read past the first chapter on this site, and not only because I love me some Beyonce <3 But anyway, this story has been sooo crazy and not once boring. I love Baby and Bobby, and can't wait for the next update....whenever that may be. 

Reviewer: Jasmine Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2011 07:11 am

Title: Are U Mine

So thought I had another chapter to read and found out there was none! OMG! I desperately need more of this story! Please please pretty please update as soon as your able. I wish I had this in paperback.  maybe I'll start all over and read it again then maybe I'll have anupdate by then. ;)

Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 07:57 pm

Title: Are U Mine

This chapter was wonderful the depth of emotion from the characters is so captivating I love Bobby and Baby they have some sizzling tension going on... :)

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 07:53 pm

Title: Author's Note

Oh no I am so sorry for your loss.

Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 10:20 am

Title: Bullet Proof

I love how you make the story come to life. I dont think I could ever get enough

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 10:19 am

Title: Boss,of Bosses

This is soo amazing. I thought she was gonna get caught my heart was in my throat....

Spoiler: so in the movie the brother Jackie dies oh please tell me your not gonna kill him off in your story? I was davastated in the movie..

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 09:40 am

Title: Plan 2 Fail

I love heart gripping stories and I think this is the best story I've read on this sight you made me cry..... Omg I hope they dont get caught in the building... this is so much better than a movie but I feel like I'm watching one does that make any since?

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 08:07 am

Title: Hero State of Mind

OMG I can't believe you made her say that. oh man thats got to hurt.

Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 03:54 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Dreams

wow chatper this was h.o.t. cant wait to see what happens when she opens the door..

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 12:35 am

Title: Inadequate Truths

I thought this was juicy and its about to get juicier! 

Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 10:35 pm

Title: Debts, Lies & Video Tape

No reason for you to be unsure about this chapter you are amazing I'm captivated by this story... your making me want to wrtie about bad boys that are good... yum! I'm trying to read this as slow as I can to make it last longer..lol!

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 09:05 pm

Title: Hate Me, Or Love Me

"You don't love him your heart still mine" 

Oh yeah lovin some Bobby and I'm still loving this story...

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 08:10 am

Title: Gone Baby,Gone

Wow! this is amzing! I just happen to stumble on to this story. I'm only into the first part of it and its sooo good way better than the movie... Can't wait to read more. :)



Author's Response:

I just wanted to thank you for taking the time to review all those chapters. It means alot. 

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2011 06:48 am

Title: Character List

Hello,  Just writing to see if an update is maybe coming soon.  

Reviewer: carmel Beauty Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 18 2011 07:09 pm

Title: Character List

I need more Please this is sooooooooo good.

Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2011 05:31 pm

Title: Debts, Lies & Video Tape

Karina's Bobby's ride or die... I'm in love with this.

Reviewer: shellybabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2011 01:57 am

Title: Hate Me, Or Love Me

Bobby and Karina wree made for each other. She's playing herself if she thinks she's over him.

Reviewer: shellybabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2011 05:44 am

Title: Gone Baby,Gone

Nice twist! It's got me.

Reviewer: shellybabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2011 04:49 am

Title: Character List

I can't believe I found a 'four brothers' fanfic on here. It's like christmas all over again.

Reviewer: shellybabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2011 04:30 am

Title: Character List

Yes yes yes!! Bobby and Karina are investigating their feelings!! Ahh I always look forward to your updates!! Oh my gosh, I really do feel sorry for Terence...he was foolish but I liked him!

Loving all the twists an turns..I am literally at the edge of my seat...about to drop off!! I just hope sweet doesn't come back for bobby!!!

Great work girl!!!

Reviewer: MissVee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2011 01:31 pm

Title: Are U Mine

FIRST of all, I'm glad you're feeling better. :-) We'll keep praying. Cheers to you and the family throughout this year.

 Second of all, I laughed out loud because when I saw how long the chapter was I literally said to myself, "It's so long. It's like Christmas."

This is the best story on the website. It was a joy for the update, very well written. Great twists and turns, great dialogue. Amazing pacing of the story. The character development is phenomenal. I mean, I just can't praise this story enough.  Baby is a genius. Bobby is a maniac. I may like the characters in your story better than I did when I first saw the film Four Brothers. Keep up the good work, and thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. 



Author's Response:

Wow! Really? I'm speechless!

I try really hard to continuously improve my writing. It's wonderful to hear that my hard work isn't going unoticed. I want to thank you for taking the time to read this story. I hope to get better and better. Thank you so much, I just really don't know what to say.

Reviewer: FriendSisForwardCupola Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2011 08:38 pm

Title: Character List

I fool with Baby on EVERY possible level. That's my girl. And Bobby has done a lot of bad things, but I still have a soft spot for him. The boy loves to the point of psychosis.

Jackie stood up to Jerry. Thank the Lord. I'm not saying Jerry doesn't have a point, and he loves Camille as much as Bobby loves Baby. But dude, YOU have very dirty hands. He needs to truly deal with that. Camille will love you no less. 

I fear for Baby and Bobby's kids. Their stubbornness and pride will know no bounds. At least they'll be pretty and smart though, lol.

Love this story and I'm glad you're back. And every holiday will get a little easier. You never stop missing him, but yeah, it will, I promise. 



Author's Response:

I don't know why but I couldn't stop laughing when i read your comment. You speak the truth I guess. Bobby does love to the point of psychosis! Lmao!

 

Reviewer: BoSoxQT Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2011 06:31 pm

Title: Are U Mine

I believe Bobby's gonna go up said karina's head if she keeps getting those bright ideas.

loveed the chapter!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2011 05:27 pm

Title: Character List

Love the update.Glad Baby and Bobby are working things out .Baby's confession 0_0 . Hope Bobby burns the box before the cops get to it. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2011 04:50 am



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