I really liked your story and characters. They were realistically flawed but still endearing to the reader. Great job!!!

I absolutely loved reading about James and Tayla. You are a wonderful writer. I actually started reading this story yesterday, and could have finished it then but I had way too many distractions. You provided excellent details, great character development, and a wonderful story plot line. I actually felt like I was in the story (like I was Tayla because I’m a big girl).  I loved reading every bit of it. Keep writing because you truly are talented.

oh no!

oh Damn! That's what I am talking about!

Luved the story, it was a great read!!

Very well written!

BRAVO!!!! BRAVO!!! I LOVED IT!!!

I absolutely l loved this story. All the time I though she would be the one to say 'I love you' first.That was great, and I love a happy ending. Now I would love to read about john and rochelle.. ;-)

You rock girl!!

xx KKMonroe...

The flow of each person tell their side of the story made it so easy to read. Well done!

The characters were so entertaining and I could easily see everything in my minds eye.

The ending was so cute.

Thank you for entertaining us.

I took my time to review since it is a double edge sword.  I have been waiting on pins and needles for it but knowing that it was the last.  But it was SO DEFINITELY worth the wait.  I am so glad that James made the first move.  He was always considered selfish but he showed up on the doorstep.  And finally Maya told the truth about EVERYTHING.  I am glad that their mother was in the middle otherwise there could have been some bloodshed.  But for Tayla to call Rochelle and REALLY put herself out there was the coolest move.  She knew she would have to do something big and big it was.  Loved how Jonathon was in on it and keeping James watching.  I am glad that they are going to give this a go for real.  I have absolutely loved this story from the beginning.  You did an awesome job and I can't wait to read more from you.

Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean letita. It was the same for me. I'm sad I have to end their main story but we'll be seeing more of them in John's story for sure. I'm so glad you enjoyed it that much! I'm really happy because in the beginning, I didn't know where the story would go and I grew to love it even more. I'm glad people got this and loved it as much as I did. Thank you so much for reading :)

What agreat explosive ending much love <3

Author's Response: Why thank you brightnova :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.

Great update.

I really loved this story. Sad to see it come to an end.

I only wished that Alicia the slut,  should have gotten the beatdown that she deserves.

Will Jonathon be getting his own story?

It’s over?!?!?  No!!!!!  I tried to be a BIG little girl about this and suck it up but I can’t,  I’m truly going to miss these characters.  Nobody can spit game, hell lets be real, nobody can talk like JD, I’m sorry but the boy is all kinds of DEAD SEXY and that mouth piece (mmmm)!!!! This is definitely one of my favs and I will continue to enjoy it after it’s left the “Most Recent” section.  If I can give this story more than five stars I would because it’s so deserving of so much more.  The part where JD went to Tayla’s mother’s house was funny; he was there to get her back but he got frustrated and pissed (I loved it). He wasn’t letting up on her and he was not lying.  JD described Tayla to a “T” and she knew it.  She pissed me off when she let him leave though, especially after him telling her how he felt about her. And Tayla at the ESPY without James was pure genius, I REALLY loved that part!!! I would have never thought she would have went there and made such a wonderful speech.  It was just so many moments  in this chapter that just had me all cheesing and what not. Tayla’s speech was so filled with love, awww, I’m getting all emotional again.  LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Can’t wait to relive their story, well, get a taste of sexy JD ; in Johnathan’s story. J