I am so grateful that I found this story. Wish it didn't have to end.Reviewer: Leoslove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/26/12 10:35 am
I absolutely loved reading about James and Tayla. You are a wonderful writer. I actually started reading this story yesterday, and could have finished it then but I had way too many distractions. You provided excellent details, great character development, and a wonderful story plot line. I actually felt like I was in the story (like I was Tayla because I’m a big girl). I loved reading every bit of it. Keep writing because you truly are talented.Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/12 03:04 pm
Great Story! Your characters had dimension and they did not fall flat! Your grasp on the story from his as well as her point of view was great also! Please never stop writing, you have an awesome ability! Keep it up 10 Stars!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 01:39 am
Luved the story, it was a great read!!Reviewer: PurpleChocolate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/27/11 01:43 pm
Very well written!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/17/10 06:19 pm
Wow... Just a great story!!!Reviewer: Bella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/06/10 11:24 am
I absolutely l loved this story. All the time I though she would be the one to say 'I love you' first.That was great, and I love a happy ending. Now I would love to read about john and rochelle.. ;-)
You rock girl!!
Author's Response: Thank you, Kaye! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That's how I kind of wanted to set it up and make people think that James would be the hardheaded one. I'm glad it was a little twist for ya. His story is coming, indeed. I'd love to read about D and L...if you catch my drift ;) Reviewer: CPM09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/10 06:10 am
The story was great. I love the amazing characters. Keep this story going.
Author's Response: Why, thank you LewisAlabama! There will be a...sequel or sorts with the other brother, Jonathan. That'll be out soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing :) Reviewer: LewisAlabama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/25/10 11:12 am
The flow of each person tell their side of the story made it so easy to read. Well done!
The characters were so entertaining and I could easily see everything in my minds eye.
The ending was so cute.
Thank you for entertaining us.
Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you for reading and being entertained :) Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/10 07:40 am
Enjoyed your story.
Author's Response: Thank you ladi, I enjoyed writing it :)
Date: 04/18/10 11:31 am
I took my time to review since it is a double edge sword. I have been waiting on pins and needles for it but knowing that it was the last. But it was SO DEFINITELY worth the wait. I am so glad that James made the first move. He was always considered selfish but he showed up on the doorstep. And finally Maya told the truth about EVERYTHING. I am glad that their mother was in the middle otherwise there could have been some bloodshed. But for Tayla to call Rochelle and REALLY put herself out there was the coolest move. She knew she would have to do something big and big it was. Loved how Jonathon was in on it and keeping James watching. I am glad that they are going to give this a go for real. I have absolutely loved this story from the beginning. You did an awesome job and I can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean letita. It was the same for me. I'm sad I have to end their main story but we'll be seeing more of them in John's story for sure. I'm so glad you enjoyed it that much! I'm really happy because in the beginning, I didn't know where the story would go and I grew to love it even more. I'm glad people got this and loved it as much as I did. Thank you so much for reading :)
Date: 04/17/10 11:16 am
This was such a good story and I am glad that JD and Tayla had thier happy ending... looking forward to reading John's story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much lady liberty :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I won't keep you waiting too long for John's saga.
Date: 04/16/10 06:44 am
What agreat explosive ending much love <3
Author's Response: Why thank you brightnova :) I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/15/10 11:31 pm
That was a great ending! Glad they worked it out! I thought it was funny when Kayla thought she heard a cricket! LOL Maybe you can revisit them when it's time to have a baby! Just a thought!
Author's Response: Haha! We'll have to see about the baby thing but they will definitely be revisted in John's story. Thanks for reading JuJu!
Date: 04/15/10 10:28 pm
I really loved this story. Sad to see it come to an end.
I only wished that Alicia the slut, should have gotten the beatdown that she deserves.
Will Jonathon be getting his own story?
Author's Response: Thank you very much Janet! I'm glad you liked it so much :) LOL yeah, well, there's still John's story (and yes, I am writing it) so you just never who might resurface. Thanks for reading girl! Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 09:57 pm
I enjoyed the story from start to finish and am sorry to see it end but hope you write a sequel with Jonathan and Rochelle. Glad to see that Tayla and Maya reconciled and that the so-called reporter got her ass handed to her. Oh, Happy Birthday.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it jai! There is a sequel in the works, actually has been one since before I started the last chapter and it'll be out...well...at any moment, really. I'd just like to take some time a be a reader for a minute before I jump back into writing full-time. Anyway (I'm such a rambler) thanks for reading! And thank you for the birthday wish :) Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 11:09 am
It’s over?!?!? No!!!!! I tried to be a BIG little girl about this and suck it up but I can’t, I’m truly going to miss these characters. Nobody can spit game, hell lets be real, nobody can talk like JD, I’m sorry but the boy is all kinds of DEAD SEXY and that mouth piece (mmmm)!!!! This is definitely one of my favs and I will continue to enjoy it after it’s left the “Most Recent” section. If I can give this story more than five stars I would because it’s so deserving of so much more. The part where JD went to Tayla’s mother’s house was funny; he was there to get her back but he got frustrated and pissed (I loved it). He wasn’t letting up on her and he was not lying. JD described Tayla to a “T” and she knew it. She pissed me off when she let him leave though, especially after him telling her how he felt about her. And Tayla at the ESPY without James was pure genius, I REALLY loved that part!!! I would have never thought she would have went there and made such a wonderful speech. It was just so many moments in this chapter that just had me all cheesing and what not. Tayla’s speech was so filled with love, awww, I’m getting all emotional again. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Can’t wait to relive their story, well, get a taste of sexy JD ; in Johnathan’s story. J
Author's Response: Aww Vie! Don't worry. You'll still be seeing some of T&J in John's story, guarantee! Our boy IS dead sexy isn't he? I do love writing his cockiness. I modeled him after my very own boyfriend. The attitude, smartassness and all! So, I guess that would make Tayla...me? Hmm, never thought about that but I guess she would be me, lol! Anyway, I'm glad you cheesed a little and enjoyed the story as much as you did. I appreciate it, girl :) Reviewer: Vie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/10 12:52 am