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Title: Chapter 3

Told You that Bitch was EVIL! She better be glad that Kenya, is a nice girl cuz if she wasn't Melissa would have a well whipped ass!



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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 12 2011 04:13 am

Title: Chapter 2

Ok, where did he find that bimbo? Grantee Bear? REALLY?.... Kenya better watch out for her, I bet she is only sweet in front of a man, but a bitch all the other time. Grant seems to be loosing it already! " Your vocal, I like that!" Indeed!  And an almost kiss, oh yeah this is going to be good! Too bad I can not give you an eleven!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2011 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 1

Hell yeah, big girls need love too! I am glad she got the job, and I hope he see's that just because she may not be a size zero, doesn't mean she isn't just as sexy as the next model! This is a nice start to an interesting story line, I will give you a 10 to start!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2011 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 6

I'm loving this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the story thus far. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2011 08:43 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I do hope you will be updating this story soon I really am enjoying reading it and can't wait to see what happens next so please update again real soon thanks!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 17 2011 06:05 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Lady update soon!!! I don't want this story to end... And please make them longer... Pretty please!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: BurntSienna Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2011 10:05 am

Title: Chapter 17

Short but sweet. And thank you very much for updating



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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 09:05 am

Title: Chapter 17

Awww...That is so sweet :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 03:22 am

Title: Chapter 17

I just found this story and one hour later...read the last update. thank you for this and publish when you are done. so i can buy this



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: brownie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 10:37 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Another great story.  Melissa is a nut case.  Plain and simple and to see that Grant's dad was this bad is out of control.  I wonder if his gramps was alive--I can see Grant's grandfather saying something along the lines of Grant's father being more spoiled than Paris Hilton. I'm really enjoying the story and I'd like to see where this is going with Nathan.  I would have liked, even more than an adoption, is Grant setting up a special internship for kids showing extraordinary talents in public schools in the area.  That would be really great and phenomenal.    Maybe not even limited there---but to orphan kids in general. However I'm liking this.  I would love to see Nathan interacting with his uncles as well.  Which leads me into another question.  Any chance of Tracy hooking up with Grant's older brother---the workaholic lawyer it sounded like or maybe accountant--can't tell with the word "firm."   Tracy seems to have way too  much time on her hands and Grant's older brother---not enough.  I see potential love match.  Another great read.



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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 09:02 am

Title: Chapter 17

The story is great, but for a sequel introduce the cousin and the brother.



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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: SAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 08:46 am

Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update! Don't wait so long!



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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 01:17 am

Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for update.  Please update again, too short



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Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 12:06 am

Title: Chapter 17

I'm so glad Nathan and Grant are getting so well. I knew they would.

Kenya has impressed me with her maturity. A lot of other women would have been whining about being neglected, but she's just relaxing and rolling with it. She's knows that's her man!

Grant is shining through with the type of man he's proving himself to be. His own man; a generous and observant one at that. I'm liking it. Now he needs to rock her world this weekend! Hot, sweaty, monkey sex!! Seriously!

Nathan...loving the kid!

Nice!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2011 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Oh wow yeah talk about sexy. This man know how to treat his lady by flying her private and taking her to a place she always want to go nice very nice. Glad to see you back on and don't take to long agian ok lol. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2011 11:41 pm

Title: Chapter 17

Awh how sweet!! Love how he takes care of her.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2011 08:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I liked the premise of this story, but I just find some of the plot points a bit unbelievable.  Kenya and Grant's relationship progressed with lightening speed. Would he have reservations about sleeping with an employee?  The adoption of Nathan also moved way to fast for me.  He met him one day and then then the next, the adopted him.  Grant was a womanizer and then all of the sudden...he's not only committed to Kenya, but he's a father.  I just couldn't suspend my disbelief long enough to buy into some of it.  I would have liked to see Kenya and Grant skirt around their growing attraction for a while longer.  I don't know about anyone else, but I like the slow build when it comes to romance.  Otherwise, thank you for writing and posting this story.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: lucky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2011 06:27 pm

Title: Chapter 17

So glad to see an update for one of my favorite stories and this chapter was worth the wait. Hope the next chapter has Grant popping the question to Kenya.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2011 04:42 pm

Title: Chapter 17

great  update yes short but great. glad to have you back



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2011 01:07 pm

Title: Chapter 1

helllloooooooo is ther someone there. it's has been very long that u last update something are you still planing on writing something our is it over. let me know.

 



Author's Response:

 This review really got me back to writing, Thank you so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: ladynaik Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2011 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 16

i love this story keep the good job when are you going to finish it

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: ladynaik Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2011 10:44 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start and good choice! Love the pictures of Grant and Kenya....the best I have come across so far in Valent Chamber. Grant is delicious with his deep blue eyes and Kenya is truly a classic ebony beauty. Well done! Can't wait to go to the next chapter.  

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2011 07:22 am

Title: Chapter 9

I feel a lack of realism here, but maybe I'm wrong.  However, Kenya is 22yrs old not a pre-menstral girl, so it seems odd to me that she would accept a sleep over with Grant, a very virile sexual mature man; yet, with the intent of no sex, to sustain her virginity.  Unless you've been JUST FRIENDS with a man for more than a year sharing the same bed does not work.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I understand your scepticism.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Kenya is still a Virgin at 22years of age!  WOW!  That surprised the hell out of me along with Grant!

Kenya's one voluptuous lady so her Virginity if she's determined to continue keeping for awhile would be hard for any man to suffer! 



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Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 06:52 pm

Title: Chapter 7

WOW!  Kenya gettin the kind of food that will really satisfy her appetite!

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Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2011 06:41 pm



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