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Title: Chapter 9

LOL, Nana reminds me of Madea. Nick and Alicia are still sweet together. Nana likes him, but Alicia is about to see what his mother thinks of her.

 



Author's Response: lol in all honesty My grandmother is like that.Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 01:03 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Oh, how I can't stand racists...Nick's mom takes the cake...the bitch...yeah, I said it...hope her miserable arse gets what she so richly deserves...her husband barely tolerates her...certainly doesn't respect her...and now her son may turn his back on her simple behind...

Looking forward to more...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Hope to write something very soon like tonight maybe.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 12:58 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I love that the girls on campus saw Nick take Alicia's book bag and hold her.  She deserves to feel like the special one.  He is just so sweet to her.  I'm glad, considering Kandice is still around somewhere.  Nice chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you are enjoying the characters.

Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 12:54 pm

Title: Chapter 6

OMG, for a minute I thought that Alicia really was going to do the smart thing and kick Kandice out of her world.  Why does such a nice girl have a cousin and mother who are so ridiculous?  I love the way Nick was an anchor for her when her own mother was not. Kandice is like a virus.  This was a good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Lovelybears Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 12:42 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Ming is a hot mess. Maybe if she wasn't so judgmental her marriage would be in better shape. Kudos for dad, he stepped up on behalf of his son.   If Momma Ming don’t watch it, she may end up losing her family.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 11:50 am

Title: Chapter 10

OMG the mother is a trip. She didn't care he would cheat it was all about color for her.

I am glad his father isn't as bad as I thought at the beginning of this story. I am glad he checked his wife because if I was alicia and she came out talking that mess to me I would break my foot off in her butt. Even though Alicia would because she is to kind hearted.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 10:30 am

Title: Chapter 10

Oh! Oh! Oh! Go Daddy it's your birthday!

I can't stand Ming but she is miserable and wants to apparently make everyone else miserable as well.

Their marriage was probably that of an arranged marriage.

I hope the father survives his heart attack and can get away from that racist witch Ming.

Great update and yes that was truly a treat now not only do we have Grand mama on Alicia and  Nick's side whe have Nick's dad.

Thank you!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, glad you enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 09:32 am

Title: Chapter 10

WHAT!!! This is a trip! I cant believe pops! Ming is nasty.

That was a funny turn of events. I liked it.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2009 08:39 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh, Oh, now mom's is going to have a stress-induced heart attack!  Let the games begin!  Great update!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2009 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 8

soo romantic I love it!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2009 02:09 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Luv this story! been waiting a loooong time for the update

where you been girl!LOL



Author's Response: Sooo sorry for the long wait, hope to keep you interested,. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2009 01:27 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Oh oh, can't wait to see what Nick's mom has to say about Alicia. I'm really liking Alicia and Nick as a couple. Hope his dad pulls through ok.

Author's Response: lol thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2009 09:17 am

Title: Chapter 9

i love this story and thank you for the update. hopefully we will get an update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you, I will hopefully update within the next few days.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21 2009 05:19 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Not an ideal way tomeet the folks but it had to happen some time I guess. Their reaction wouldn't  be any better no matter what the situation is.

Author's Response: very true but some reactions may surprise you, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2009 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 1

 I am loving your story thus far and am looking forward to seeing what happens.  Thank you so very much for writing and sharing this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Roslyn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 21 2009 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 9

I love Alicia's Nana...she seems to be the only one in her family who truly loves and appreciates the real beauty in Alicia...Nanas are so special...and she's a mess, too...sounds like Nana still likes to get her groove on...

Nick and Alicia are already in love...now, Nick's father has had this setback...what will it mean for them...wonder what his mother will say now that Nick has introduced Alicia as his girlfriend...something tells me it won't be smooth sailing...

Looking forward to more...thanks for updating...

 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 11:34 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for a great update.  It has been awhile since you last updated the story.  I hope that his father will be ok.  I am glad that her grandmother is excepting their relationship.  Please update on a reguar basis.  Take vare and Happy Holidays.

Author's Response: Thank you, I will hopefully update them all soon, Im glad you enjoyed the chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Oh my sounds like the mom is going to be a problem!! I have faith these 2 can handle it!!  Alicia's Nana is to much!! So glad you udated all of your storys you loved them all and look forward to reading more.

Paw



Author's Response: Thank you, I will hopefully update them all again soon.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Drama just follows this couple. I hopeNick parent's acept her.

Author's Response: so true, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 02:14 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Ah! So we have drama of father being in the hospital from a heart attack and now mom is meeting Alicia for the first time under these situation.

Nick already knows that he family will not approve due to a tradition sense of them wanting him to marry chinese.

I can't wait to see Mom's reaction to Alicia.

I love Nana she knows that her other grand daughter is a straight up mess at least Alicia have some family on her side and Nana is still getting her freak on LOL!!!

Great update more please Thank you



Author's Response: Thank you, I will update soon, if not today right after christmas.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 12:39 pm

Title: Chapter 9

MMMM there is about to be trouble. Now there is about to be more drama in his family.

I like Nana. She remind me of my grandmomma.



Author's Response: lol Glad you enjoyed that chapter.

Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 07:18 am

Title: Chapter 9

I hope mom isn't going to be ugly to her. Nana was too cute!! Nice update!



Author's Response: thank you! glad you enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 06:52 am

Title: Chapter 9

All right that was deep, Nick told his momma point blank who Alicia is to him.  I love that about him.

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 9

I love NaNa she is too funny wayy too wild to be a grandma!!

I love how close they have become but I am worried about his family's reaction to Alicia.

I think she realizes how much he cares fro her but can his family give her doubt..we will see!

Great job sweetie!!



Author's Response: Thank you, hope to keep you interested.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 9

So glad you back,Have miss this story.

Author's Response: thank you for the review, glad to be back.

Reviewer: yummy954 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2009 06:36 am



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