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Title: Chapter 8

I am loving this story, but Kandace such a stuck-up, ho-bag?  How can her family say that they love Alicia and treat her like a bald, headed step child?  Thank god she had her grandmother!!  Have I told that I can't stand Kandace?  Have I said that that ho makes my teeth itch?  I feel all of that.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18 2009 07:59 pm

Title: Chapter 8

i love this story and would love an update.

Author's Response:

 Sorry for the long wait. hope you like the new update.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 26 2009 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 8

Wow, that was so swt man. Pls update. Nick sounds like every grls dream.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: Leila7 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 10 2009 11:52 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Really love this story, Kandice is such a b****. Glad Alicia stood up to her. Please continue your great job, am so eager to know what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait. hope you enjoy the new update.

Reviewer: KLARYBELLE Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 06 2009 08:05 am

Title: Chapter 8

Great update.  They are so cute together.  Thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 02:37 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I love it

heres a song that came to mind about this chapter

 Justin Timberlake - Let's Take A Ride

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=67ayFj4ap1k



Author's Response: Omg love it that is so true its perfect.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 07:50 am

Title: Chapter 6

"I think you should go to the woman's shelter, they have the right people to help you."

Put her azz out alicia

That had me rolling!LOL

 



Author's Response: :) glad you like it, hope to keep you interested.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 07:31 am

Title: Chapter 5

O my goodness I'm so glad she didn't dump him over what her silly lying jealous cousin said. That was soo cute falling asleep watching spiderman cartoons

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 07:22 am

Title: Chapter 4

Nice and sappy just the way I like it! *giggles*

Author's Response: LOL glad you like it.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 07:13 am

Title: Chapter 3

Kandice is jealous!

Author's Response:

Lol yes yes she is.

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 06:51 am

Title: Chapter 2

Great start!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 06:45 am

Title: Chapter 8

Yes, I liked it, but, too short.  Thanks for the update.

Now, what will happen next.  Don't take so long.

Nick and Alicia appear to be getting along, but, do they see what the difference in their life will bring once they take their relationship further?



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait. hope you like the new update.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 04:32 am

Title: Chapter 8

They are too cute.  We want more or at least I do.  Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 8

Awww forgot about this swet story and these sweet kids..I am glad to see it back..I love Nick..he is so thoughtful, romantic and sweet..he is the best thing for her...to help build up her self esteem from her sickening cousin constant put downs...I hope they will be ok with not too much happening to cause their wonderful sweet relationship to waver...though I don't think Nick would let anything come between them for too long!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait. hope you like the new update.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 03:38 am

Title: Chapter 8

i really love this story and it is so sweet. i was going through withdrawal.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 8

Awww...that was so sweet. I like the pace.

Will we see more of Nick's family soon?



Author's Response:

yes we will, hope you like the new update.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 09:00 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Loved it. Hope they continue to bond but I'm sure there will be interferance from Kandice again. Great story so far.

Author's Response: glad you like it, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 8

You are right everything is calm.

This even has the feel of a real calm before the storm to it.



Author's Response: lol yay I did my job. thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 06:10 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Nice touch, the picnic and they make a great couple.  More please.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 05:18 pm

Title: Chapter 7

You can handle it Nick.  Keep it coming.

Author's Response: lol I will! thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 05:11 pm

Title: Chapter 6

WHAT?! How could you even think about not continuing.  I think Nick sees through that tramp Kandice.  Hope Alicia watches her back.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. hope you like the new update.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 05:04 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wow, thanks Mom.  Alicia should just enjoy herself and forget about her family.  Kandice with a black eye, how appropriate.  Too bad Alicia didn't give it to her.



Author's Response: So true, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 04:58 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Good update. Where have you been. I had forgotten about this story. Please give us another chapter soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait. hope you enjoy the new chapter.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 04:17 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Great update, I loved the picnic in the park. You said the calm before the storm, I'm ready for it!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait. hope the new update keeps you interested.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 03:29 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Nick and Alicia are very cute together. Picnic at the park was a nice touch!! So if its the calm before the storm I take it her skanking cousin!!! Thanks for updating

Author's Response: Glad you like that chapter.

Thank you for the review, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: PAW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 03:19 pm



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