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Title: Chapter 6

i loved it

Author's Response: Glad you like it, thanks for the review~

Reviewer: darlene Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2009 03:29 am

Title: Chapter 6

First I'm enjoying the story, the chapters are a little short could be lengthened. After what K did to her there is no way in heck I'd have that vulture in my house and I'm saying that if she was sporting two broken legs. If Alicia is really into Nick as he is to her she better protect that blooming relationship or she'll be on my list. Look forward to more updates. JV

Author's Response: They would be if I had time ,at the moment I stay up later than I should, but it is something ill have to work on. Thanks for the review.~

Reviewer: johnandvan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Why does Alicia keep being punked by her cousin?

 

 



Author's Response: I dont think she is being punked, I find that she is trying to gain her family's approval. Doesnt it seem that Kandice is the one being punked...having to gravel before Alicia, needing a place to stay and the only person she could turn to is very person she wants to hurt.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 04:20 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I am so glad that Alicia showed her assertivness with Kandice and I hope she does not allow her to stay more then a day.

I was so hoping she saw thru Kandice fake ass...and her skank ass would think that Alicia and Nick sleep together before anything else.

That was so cute how Alicia and Nick shared their breakfast.

I can already see her trying to sabbatage Alicia dinner date with Nick right now.

Thanks for the update I can't wait til the next one.



Author's Response:

She will do her best but Alicia has an Ace up her sleeve! Enter Granny~

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 03:26 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Oh My Gosh Kandice is such a witch and Alicia's mom is no help feeding into Kandice. I am glad Alicia is going to stand strong you can be nice but that doesnt mean you have to be a push over. Nick is a sweetie and I like him with Alicia. Loved the update please continue. Would love to see how this story plays out.

Author's Response: Lol glad you like it, thank you for the review~

Reviewer: PAW00 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 03:21 pm

Title: Chapter 6

i don't like that Alicia is letting that backstabbing, coniving, tramp stay at her place for a few days. Don't like it one bit. So can we please get rid of her

Author's Response: lol, soon enough.

Reviewer: veronica75 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 03:06 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Oh, they are too cute and Kandice is a pig, she will lose out this time.  Imagine threatening Alicia with her own mother. 

Obviously Kandice thinks she's can have any man and doesn't know how to handle rejection.  Please continue!



Author's Response:

lol I will, thanks for the review~

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 02:17 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Do you even have to ask, girl, lol...of course continue!!!

Why does Alicia so easily allow herself to be manipulated by Kandice...so the stupid has a black eye...so big whoop...wasn't she the reason why Alicia's mom was on her case about "stealing" Kandi-ho's "boyfriend"...the delusional trick..."getting Nick back"...biotch, YOU NEVER HAD HIM TO BEGIN WITH...

I know you're trying to make Alicia compassionate...but darn...Kandice uses her as a doormat...mistaking her kindness for weakness...and is Alicia crazy or just plain unbelievably naive...Kandice is the type of witch no one brings around their man...even if he doesn't want her trifling arse...she'll manipulate the situation to cause strife between you and him...BAD MOVE, ALICIA!!!

I can't wait to read about Nick and Alicia's dinner at his place...but Alicia better sleep with one eye open with that viper under her roof...thanks for the update...



Author's Response:

Alicia's Grandmother will be there soon enough. I think we will have to watch out for Kandice until then. I agree that she is taking Alicia's kindness for weakness, but she will  get hers soon enough...enter Granny =D

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I so wanna Beat the Crap out of Kandice, she is a real piece of work, she knows she has no feelings for Nick, she only wants him b/c how dare he not want her over Alicia, also b/c her other boyfriends proably treat her like crap, hey Kandice, you give what you get, if you act like a selfish Ho, thats how men are going to treat you.... if I were Alicia I would have kicked Kandice to the curb long time ago.

As for Alicia and Nick, they are just so cute together, love how Nick treats her like a Queen.

Btw... should you continue, You BETTER.



Author's Response: lol, Its hard to figure out which stories to update daily and which to do once a week or so. Trying to work around my schedule is harder than I thought.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 01:25 pm

Title: Chapter 1

U know u need 2 stop playing and contiubne the story.

Author's Response: lol I will.

Reviewer: chocolate girl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 12:04 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Yes keep it going. Kandice is off the hook. I hope she gets what is coming to her. Nick and Alicia are great together. He needst o put her family in their place when the time comes.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, She will have to do it. I think Nick will be her support when it comes to her family. Granny will be coming for a visit soon enough.

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 08:40 am

Title: Chapter 5

Alicia's family is so messed up. I hope her mom comes around to see that she has a great daughter. Keep it coming.  I love this story.

Author's Response:

Glad you like it.

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 08:36 am

Title: Chapter 6

I knew Kanho would find a way to get into Alicia apartment.

I just hope Alicia don't fall for her crap.

Nick handle the situration like a man should.



Author's Response: lol we shall watch it all unfold, Kandice will mess up soon enough...its in her nature.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 07:19 am

Title: Chapter 6

Nice udate, but don't have Alicia let her convining cousin stay w/her.   She has mental problem...that Kandice

Author's Response: lol She is mental but we will watch for the crazy side.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 07:04 am

Title: Chapter 6

Alicia cannot be that naive, she has to know her cousin is going to try something. Thanks for the update!!



Author's Response: She knows but family is family, she will be watching her back. thanks for the review~

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 07:02 am

Title: Chapter 5

nick is so sweet to her. i can' t wait to see who gave kandice that black eye LOL

Author's Response: woot next chapter is up! hope you like it.

Reviewer: vmck Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2009 05:31 am

Title: Chapter 5

Why wouldn't her mom listen to what she had to say before taking her cousin's side. Kandice probably hit herself in the eye.



Author's Response: lol the black eye mystery shall be solved in the next update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 08:23 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Wonder  what happened to old Kandace

Author's Response: lol who knows =D

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 07:43 pm

Title: Chapter 1

i am loving this story

Author's Response: Glad you like it!

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Nick is such a sweetie...and better than that...he's totally into Alicia...who has such low self-esteem due in no small part to her trifling "family"...I put quotes there because they are anything but...with a family like that...she'd be more loved and appreciated in a pit of vipers...and let me just say...Alicia's mom really isn't a mother...any "mother" who'd listen to someone else's side of a story without giving her own child a fair hearing ain't worth a good damn...harsh, but so true...Alicia is well rid of the lot of them...

So that lying, manipulative skank Kandi-ho is back...guess one of her many "mens" was showing her just how special she was again (bwahahahahahaha...evil laugh)...slam the door in her face Alicia...don't even think about entertaining trying to sympathize with that conniving, back-stabbing trick...

Loving Alicia and Nick and their growing closeness...he's so good for her...but so sick of Alicia's "family" already...talk about a modern day Cinderella story...



Author's Response:

lol the black eye is a mystery to be solved soon enough.

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 04:28 pm

Title: Chapter 5

My only problem with this chapter is, it's to short.  LOL, what happen to Kandice, I bet she blames Nick!  Alicia is so cute and Kandice is a spoiled rotten person!

Waiting.....



Author's Response: lol glad you like it, we shall have to see how this plays out.

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 01:47 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Great update.... WTH kinda mother is Jillian, she basiclly called her own daughter a TRAMP, Alicia needs to get away from this family b4 they destroy her spirit.

Glad that Nick was there for her, she needs someone like him, he is so sweet and attentive with Alicia, and he proves that most men like MEAT on their BONES,

As for Kandice, she is so jealous of Alicia and that black eye shows the kinda men that she attracts.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it, Kandice will prove to be a very hard person to get rid of.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 09:26 am

Title: Chapter 5

Kandice needs to be drop-kicked.  And Alicia's mama needs to get an earful.  Please let her slam the door in Kandice's face and never deal with her again.  Or better yet, give her another black eye, then dump her on the sidewalk and never deal with her again.  Come on, she's got to stand up for herself soon, set her family straight.

Author's Response: I think at this point she is just finding her place in the word, and for some they seek the approval of family more than anything...Even love.

Reviewer: zmgaillard Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 07:14 am

Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great update.  I just want to make sure that the mother believed Kandice because she is skinny?  WTF?  Her mother had a lot of nerve to blame her daughter for stealing a man that didn't want Kandice.  My goodness the nerve of that skanky heifer.  I likeNick...he has been very clear into who he is attracted too.  So now comes to her cousins apartment with a black eye.  Will she tell her aunt that he cousin gave her the black eye?  What will Kandice do when she finds out that Nick stayed the night with Alicia..this brings to mind that saying that you can't pick your family  Because if there was a soul that needed a new family it would be Alicia.  Thanks

Author's Response: Glad you like it, Alicia's mother has some issues..none of them Alicia's fault and Kandice will get hers...remember that Alicia is a very giving person even when it comes to people who dont mean well, some people dont deserve forgiveness especially when they dont plan on changing their ways, but our girl will try her best.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 07:01 am

Title: Chapter 5

I loved it!! Please continue to update!! ^_^

Author's Response: Glad you like it, Ill do my best!

Reviewer: aquaBLUEpetals Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 05:43 am



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