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Title: Chapter 5

I see now her whole family is poison except her grandmother. The nerve of her mother.

Now Kandance have a black eye, I know her thug boyfriend gave to her. Now I am wait to see how she spins it around to make it be Alicia's fault.

TY for the update



Author's Response: lol, no problemo. thanks for the review~

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 5

Awwww Nick and Alicia are cute together. Cant believe Alicia's mom got on her like that, her own daughter. Wonder who popped Kandice. Cant feel sorry for her. Loved the update cant wait for more.

Author's Response: lol the mystery of the black eye will be revealed on the next update. thank you for the review~

Reviewer: pawoo Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 04:47 am

Title: Chapter 5

I really like Nick he i so ood fro,our girl! How unfair of her mom not to even hear what she has to say..how self righteous! I think w/Nick's help our girl can get pass her crazy familyy!! Loved it sweetie!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Im glad you are enjoying it, its been fun to write.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 5

That Kandice is a piece of...well you get my point.  I can't believe Alicia's mom believed and took Kandice's side over her own daughter's.

Nick is so sweet and I am glad that Alicia was confident enough in him to tell him what was said and done. She really needed that shoulder cause apparently she does not have the support from her family and her mom is so big on family support...ha that's a laugh.

Kandice got a black eye that is what that bitch deserves and more and now she is going to have a damn field day with seeing Nick there.  Alicia should slam the door in her face and tell her to go take a flying leap off a short pier.  I can't stand that biatch and now add Jillian to the pile.

Great update



Author's Response: Glad you like it. thank you for the review~

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 5

Alicia's mom done lost her mind. Her daughter calls her for comfort and get blasted for man stealing. Why is it she assumes the worse from her daughter?

As for Kandice, why is she crawling to Alicia's appartment with a black eye?  

 



Author's Response: lol so true, Kandice's black eye is a mystery..till the next update~

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 5

You know Alicia mother need a black eye, to go along with Kandice i'm think.Far the way she treating her child.

 



Author's Response: lol Ill keep that in mind, thank you for the review~

Reviewer: yummy954 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 04:15 am

Title: Chapter 4

Nick and Alicia are a good match. 



Author's Response: Im glad you think so, the pairing is one that I love.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 3

I'm advocating violence here, just for Kandice.  She needs to be slapped down hard.  Hope Alicia doesn't let this ruin her date with Nick.

Author's Response: lol @ advocating violence..Awesome.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 01:16 am

Title: Chapter 2

Time for  Kandice to get out the way.  She gets to stew in her own sick.  Another excellent chapter.

Author's Response:

lol Im glad you like it.Thank you for the review~

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 01:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

Great start.  I like Nick and Alicia.  They forgot all about Kandice. lol

Author's Response: Glad you like it, Kandice is around here somewhere.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2009 01:06 am

Title: Chapter 4

Sweet chapter. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

more to come! soon hopefully

Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 06 2009 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 4

I love this plot but your story is brief and undescriotive. There's barely any detail or dialouge. I do love the characters though.

Author's Response: Thank you...I think. Thanks for the Review

Reviewer: JB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 04:18 am

Title: Chapter 4

This story is good so far, I can't believe I just noticed it, Alicia and Nick are so sweet together, it seems they have known eachother forever.

Kandice needs an old-fashioned Joe Jackson Ass Kicking, she is a bitter shrew who is so jealous of Alicia b/c she is smart and has confidence in herself whereas Kandice has NONE.... Alicla did the right thing by dropping the dead weight.



Author's Response: Kandice is like a parasite, she needs her host and will be back.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 4

Very sweet and cute!! The beginnings of a relationship are always he hardest...they are starting off well!! Sweet story sweetie...

Author's Response: Thank you~

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 02:59 am

Title: Chapter 4

What an awesome first date. They seem very comfortable with each other. That's very important. This was sweet.

Author's Response: Im glad you like it, thank you for the review~

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 4

What a sweet date...

I feel so bad for Alicia...I hate when families favor one child over another...glad she has grandmother who showed her that she had value and she was just as beautiful...thank goodness for Big Mamas...

Sweet story...looking forward to the next update...



Author's Response: Im glad you like it and it is sad that there are many fam's out there like that.

Reviewer: attheritz Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 01:22 am

Title: Chapter 4

I was waiting for the evil cousin to ruin their date. Since she knew they were going out that night. I was waiting for her to call Alicia with a false emergency.

I am glad they are getting to know each other and taking it slow.



Author's Response: lol Kandice is laying in wait she'll be back.

Reviewer: Dimples Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 01:19 am

Title: Chapter 4

So sweet. But please Nick watch out for her cousin. She's trouble.

Author's Response:

lol yes Kandice is trouble, thank you for the Review.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2009 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 3

Please update soon.

 

Thank you



Author's Response: Thank you for the reviw, the next chapter is up, I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: yummy954 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2009 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 3

this is a good story

Author's Response: Im glad you like it

Reviewer: darlene Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 01 2009 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad she kicked her out. Hopefully she won't let her come back in. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

No problem, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 31 2009 05:46 pm

Title: Chapter 3

i think she let kandice off to easy. i would have punch her in the mouth then slammed the door on her. fam or no fam. theres alot of fam i wish i could do that to now. great update.

Author's Response: lol True, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2009 04:36 pm

Title: Chapter 3

love the update! kandice is such a bitch!

glad alicia told her to get to steppin, can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Kandice will get hers soon enough

Reviewer: shameka Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2009 03:56 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Oh Kandice is a bitch my goodness to treat her own cousin like that.  How awful.  Good for Alicia for kicking her cousin out of her house...with her for a cousin Alicia doesn't have to worry about other enemies because her cousin is her biggest enemy.  The person that will get what they deserve is Kandice the idiot jealous heifer.  Thanks

Author's Response:

Im glad you like it, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2009 12:46 pm



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