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Title: Chapter 12

Oh no. Leave Kandice dumb ass behind bars. That snake can't be trusted.

 

Please update soon!!!



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Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 31 2010 10:03 pm

Title: Chapter 12

update update.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Sorry for the length between updates.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 04:42 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow I hafta to agree with Nana! Kandice would have to get real used to her accomodations.  Wouldn't be me...not one bit.  Sometimes you have to leave family alone.  Hope for another update soon.  Thanks!

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Reviewer: zeta1665 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2010 11:11 am

Title: Chapter 10

That was very cool of his dad. His mother on the other hand...yeesh!

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Reviewer: zeta1665 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2010 11:03 am

Title: Chapter 8

I'm really enjoying thus far.  That fish dinner...OMG, lol, wow!  I didn't think anyone could mess up fish like that?! I hope she puts a swift end to her cousin's craziness sooner rather than later. 

Thanks



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Reviewer: zeta1665 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2010 10:55 am

Title: Chapter 12

They should have left Kandice in jail,if Alicia's mom is so worried why didn't she pay the bail. Grandma seems to be the only one with sense in that crazy family. Nick and Alicia had better keep an eye on that sneaky tramp Kandice, she wants Nick and will lie about him just to hurt Alicia.



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. hopefully Kandice learns from her mistakes...eh...maybe not

Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 13 2010 07:32 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Alicia's grandmother is so right. She better hang on to Nick before someone gets him. Nick is very generous to Kandice and I hope she appreciates it. I really like the update keep it up. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2010 10:36 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Ahh his too sweet! They shudve take the grans advice though

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Reviewer: Leila7 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 01:22 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Good update... Nick is a better person than I am b/c I would have left Kandice right where she was, that girl is bad news, and I know she will try to put the moves on Nick.  I so hope that Alicia finally stands up to her mother and the reat of her family, b/c they are IMO nothing but bullies, and she needs to let them go.

Btw I kinda hope that Nick's dad and Karen find eachothe again.



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Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 10:30 am

Title: Chapter 12

I love this story!!

Kandice is such a brat and Alicia's mom doesn't help matters...I can't believe she would put Kandice's needs over her own childs' needs...SMH

I LOVE Nick!!  I loved the way he stood up to his mother!  And I like his dad!

I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 07:59 am

Title: Chapter 12

You should have left Kandice in jail for a few months, like her grandmother stated.

Kandicie is  bad news.  The fact that she was rude to Alicia..was a no brainer to have her stay in jail. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 07:37 am

Title: Chapter 12

Once Kandice gets out she not going to do right. She is a selfish bitch and I really do think she going try to come between Nick and Alicia. If I was Alicia i will have mama and the rest the family except for grandmama since they cater to Kandice lies.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 06:47 am

Title: Chapter 12

She should have left Kandice to rot. I'm just saying.

Author's Response: lol, Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 12

i wouldn't have helped her ass out. she would still be in jail

Author's Response: Lol Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 06:15 am

Title: Chapter 12

great update

I would have left  Kanzy in jail



Author's Response: lol I totally agree. Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 4

Hey i love this story, but i just want you to know that you have 2 repeated  paragraphs at the begining of this chappter.  paragraphs 5&6 are repeats of 1&2. just thought id inform you, otherwise this story is great!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, and  thank you for pointing that out :).

Reviewer: fleur_delisha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 05:24 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow, Nick is a good man!!! Hope Kandice takes advantage of the opportunity given her and do the right thing with her life. What the hell is wrong with Kandice's mom and family??? Why do they feel entitled that Alicia should be the one responsible for Kandice. Even Alicia's mom seem to encourage the stupidness. They all seem like users and I think if the shoe was on the other foot, no family member would check for Alicia. Glad she has Nick and looks like he's there for the long haul. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 05:13 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow, Nick is a good man!!! Hope Kandice takes advantage of the opportunity given her and do the right thing with her life. What the hell is wrong with Kandice's mom and family??? Why do they feel entitled that Alicia should be the one responsible for Kandice. Even Alicia's mom seem to encourage the stupidness. They all seem like users and I think if the shoe was on the other foot, no family member would check for Alicia. Glad she has Nick and looks like he's there for the long haul. Loved the update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 2

I hope that was the liquer talking, because Kandice has some nerve making a statment like that.

 I mean, she was all smiles when she thought he came to the table for her.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Taccora Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 04:51 am

Title: Chapter 12

I just got finished reading all the chapter that have been written.  I love this story.  Kandace and Alicia's mother are B****.  I love the grandmother reminds me of mine.  Update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Gale Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 12

Kandice is a hot mess and needs to so grow up!! Alicia's mother man some nerve to want her to use her savings to bail out her looser cousin. Nick is such a sweetie. Great update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 12

Great update.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review.

 

Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 02:29 am

Title: Chapter 12

I dont trust Kandice to weasel out of it somehow. I really want Alicia to confront these people at some point here.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 12

Gram's is so right about Kandice...gah...I can't  stand her or her arrogant attitude as if the world owes her something...I believe her superiority complex is bred by people always catering to her every whim and not letting her facing the consequences of her own actions...she should have been left to stew in her own mess for a long while...then, when she'd gained some semblance of humility...then maybe, she'd appreciate having someone liek Alicia in her life...and there are just no words for Alicia's mom...is Kandice secretly her child...she behaves as if that's the case...always trying to guilt Alicia into doing Kandice's bidding...Nick's a better one than me...but he love Alicia so much that he just wants to relieve the stress in her life...so against his better judgment...he bails Kandice out under conditions...but let's see how long Kandi-ho keeps her end of the bargain...

Can't wait to see what happens next...thanks so much for the update...

 



Author's Response: Thank you as always for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 01:32 am

Title: Chapter 12

OK I really like this story but I had given up on it after months of no updts..I hope it is back to finish until conclusion...it has been almost a year.

I love Nick but Kandice did not deserve his kindness..I hope it does not bite them both in the butt!!

I am with grandma..Alicia needs to marry this man..he is good to her and her ungrateful relatives!!

Good to see this story back sweetie...



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, Im soooo sorry for the long wait. Im glad you enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2010 01:28 am



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