Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Glad this story is back! Cant stand that trick Sara!



Author's Response:

lol, thank you for the review.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 02:45 am

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Welcome back!!!!!  So glad you and The Denson's are back. I love that Grace brings out the best in Kevin and i love how he told off Sara but Sara has some more mess up her sleeves. She and Raina are two heffas that need to get the boot and soon by no other than Grace :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope the update is to your liking.

Reviewer: Vie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 02:32 am

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Sooo glad you and this story are back. Yay!



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 02:15 am

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Great update.  Gotta watch out for that Sara she is sure crazy.



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 01:40 am

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

i am glad that he had the TALK with Sara. That damn hussy had a lot of nerve. Kevin put her behind straight.



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 23 2011 12:21 am

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

I really missed this story! It is really good. Grace is perfect for Kevin. She is not afraid to stand up for herself or him. Kevin needs someone grounded in his life. Excited to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoyed the Chapter. Sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 07:41 pm

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

WOW I was so excited to see this update.  I havae missed this story a lot.  I just hope that Grace and Kevin will stand together no matter what is thrown at them.  Sara is not going to give up easily.  A matter of fact no one is.  But most people can tell about someone's personality and intentions when they first meet them.  That is why the team loved her and didn't take too kindly to Sara.



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 05:57 pm

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Aw, Kevin really loves him some Grace!  Sara needs to suck rocks with her crazy ass! Please don't make us wait so long!



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 05:02 pm

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Awwww!!!! He cried cause he does not want her to leave.  That is so sweet.  I was reading this chapter and thinking can't she take a leave of absence for just awhile they are still newly weds and getting to know each other then the drama with Sara and that other wench/ho that wants to be baby mama which I can't wait til the results come back saying in the case of the baby Kevin Denson "YOU R NOT THE FATHER"!

Great update thank you for sharing.

Can't wait for the next update.

Happy writing.



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 04:43 pm

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Ok love how he cried ok. That so sweet it truly show him more then a footall player it shows he really truly cares for her and going to miss her.  His crazy as Sara has to go lol love what that little boy said to her. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 03:27 pm

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this update.  Sara ia crazy, Kevin doesn't want you.  He is happily married to the woman who has become the love of his life.  Please write that he got run over by bus or got pushes on the subway tracks.  Can you tell that I don't like her?  Please give us an update soon, I love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 03:16 pm

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

awwwww sooo sweet!!!!! ive missed this story sooooo much sade!!!!! thanks for the update!!!! please dont make us wait sooo long for the next one mmmkay lol?!?!?!?! more please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoy the story, sorry for the wait.

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 02:29 pm

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

Great updat.  But, where have you been?



Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoyed the Chapter. I have been traveling The bahamas, Holland and Vegas....enjoying life.

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 01:59 pm

Title: Kevin and Sara talk.

I am so glad you are updating your stories. I really like this one. I hate she has to leave and go back to Atlanta. I hope you get rid of that crazy agent. Keep updating

Author's Response:

Thank You Im glad you enjoyed the Chapter.

Reviewer: trina mase Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2011 01:06 pm

Title: Meet the team.

I was just going over your stories and came by this one.  Are you going to finish this one???



Author's Response:

I will do my best yes.

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: Tracy21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 03:03 pm

Title: Meet the team.

oooh can't wait.. any updates soon? love your stories



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: Mary P Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2011 03:09 am

Title: Meet the team.

more please!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: ms dimples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 05:48 pm

Title: Meet the team.

Amazing story.  You know how to weave a great tale here.  I loved this story a lot...and I love where this is going.  Kevin has surrounded himself with a lot of horrible women, that's for sure.  It would be so great if before he leaves both Grace and him find a new apartment.  I say this because I'm under the distinct impression that Sara will try some dirty dealing to get Grace to fall out of grace (pun intended ^_^) with Kevin.   On one side I'd like the Rina's baby to be Kevin's because I don't trust anyone else taking care of the baby.  I don't trust Rina and when she said that Kevin would be the best dad out of the bunch...that says a good deal.  However, on the other side, I don't want Kevin involved with this woman--she's a parasite and very unhealthy and would be unhealthy for Kevin and Grace's relationship.  However, if she's (being Rina) willing to give up her rights as parents even if Kevin isn't the father--since she probably won't be getting help from anyone and she doesn't want a a kid anyway---I'm cool with that.  Plus that kid would have the life with Kevin/Grace and co--I'd love to see the kids faces when they see the kid.

I do have one request...Grace's friends need some guys too.  I would love them paired up with a footballer or even the coach or whoever.  You could turn this story into a series.  I could so see Grace's friends---especially the cop one having a field day with a footballer.  Actually I could see her taking him down in 5 seconds flat with a few choice moves to the neck, solar plexus, and groin.  ^_^  

I'm really loving th story and I hope you keep at it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, I can only hope that you will continue to read future chapters and enjoy my story. Thank you.

Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 06:48 am

Title: Meet the team.

Please give more of this story.  I want Sara and Rina to both choke on their own tongues!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2011 01:47 am

Title: Meet the team.

Please update theis wonderful story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20 2011 03:54 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

I Am missing this story one of my fAvorites

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: Darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 25 2011 05:57 pm

Title: Meet the team.

I'm sooooo glad that you updated!! Even though I haven't been on this site in a while.... I want more updates please =) It's really getting good!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: Aqua09 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14 2011 08:09 am

Title: Meet the team.

Awesome story!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2010 09:14 am

Title: What happens in Vegas!

Hello Sade I hope all is well  miss you from the board.  Please drop a line to let us know you okay.  waiting patiently.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2010 12:47 am

Title: Meet the team.

Please update!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. Hope you enjoy the update.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 08 2010 04:16 am



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