Title: Chapter 21

wow scott know how to handle his business in the bed room lol. i think it going to be good  her meeting the parents taking it to next level. thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2009 04:10 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Mack and Scott are so cute together.  And now she is going to meet the parents.  Interesting.  Carol is a trip...I don't know what to think about her half the time.  Like Mack I keep wondering why she is friends with her.

Nice update...keep them coming please. Thanks

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2009 12:03 pm

Title: Chapter 21

An unlikely couple but they work.  Thanks for a great update.  Can't believe that she will be meeting his parents soon.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2009 10:28 am

Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for a great read and I winder why she is still friends with Carol too.  And for Carol to state that Sean is mad at her because she slept with his friend WTF?  Is she crazy or just a ho 24/7?  I hope that Mackenzie uses the blindfold wisely LOL.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 05:02 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Thanks for a great update....these two are like teenagers.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 04:56 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Great update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 06:55 am

Title: Chapter 20

wow that one crazy party lol. i wonder what did she get out the bag? thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 20

Yhey're going to have some fun tonight, with the blindfold. Great update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 01:04 am

Title: Chapter 19

Loved the update. Glad Mackenzie decided to give Scott a chance.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 07 2009 06:24 am

Title: Chapter 19

well it a good thing it snow her right he not like other guys and she give him a change to prove that. i like they got to know each other bit better thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2009 08:16 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Great update... glad that Mackenzie is going for it with Scott, they make a cute couple.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 06 2009 08:14 pm

Title: Chapter 19

They are now officially a couple. Great update!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2009 07:27 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Ah!!! That was so sweet. I like that Scott knows what he wants and what he wants is Mackenzie.  She finally opened up to him and wants to be with him in a relationship....good no more snicking around and it doesn't matter what the office says.

Great update. Thanks

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2009 07:09 pm

Title: Chapter 19

That was so cute. He was shy about asking her to be his girlfriend. She was afraid of being hurt. They finally agree to date each other. Yes! Good chapeter. Love it.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2009 06:53 pm

Title: Chapter 18

She wants some loving, he could have made it home just fine. I like them as a couple. Loved the update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2009 04:17 am

Title: Chapter 18

lol yeah she wanted something from him she wanted to tap his behind lol. they make such a cute couple different but a good different. like he show her chicgo and gettting to know her. love the story thanks for the updated.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2009 03:18 am

Title: Chapter 18

Smart girl!  She knows she's interested in Scott.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2009 12:17 am

Title: Chapter 18

They seem to be hitting it off ok.  Glad that she invited him up to her apartment. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2009 09:14 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Now are they acting a little strained . They have already done the do...what is up with that.

will they take their relationship to another level?

Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2009 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Ooooh how sweet!!! Their first official date..... Great update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 04 2009 08:10 pm

Title: Chapter 18

They had sex and now she's moving too fast??

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2009 07:21 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Thank for the update, it was good.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2009 05:01 pm

Title: Chapter 17

I don't think I would have told Carol a thing, my sheisty radar is up around her.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2009 04:56 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Yeah right Mack you aint slick girl.  He lives in Chicago practically all his life he knows how to drive on the roads during the snow.  LOL.

And Scott aint no better cause he could have told her that plus the sooner he leaves the faster he will get home...What is he going to do later when it snow more.  LOL

Yall know you want to go upstairs to Mack's apartment and do some very heavy petting...going to fast pulezze what was that in New York if not start past "GO" don't collect 200 dollars.  

Great update.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2009 09:02 am

Title: Chapter 17

I don't like the fact that Mackenzie told Carol about her budding relationship with Scott.  The next thing that she knows that ho is going to try and get her some of Scott because she said that he had a big dick.  As for Mackenzie doesn't she know that you don't tell your friends about how good your man  is because then they will want him too.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2009 06:34 am



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