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Title: Chapter 17

Carol didn't take it too bad. LOL!  Hope they become a couple.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2009 06:16 am
Title: Chapter 16

Still can't wait for Carol's reaction.

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Date: October 03 2009 06:10 am
Title: Chapter 17

Alrighty then, go Scott!!! Great update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 02 2009 03:04 am
Title: Chapter 17

OK, I am glad that she has told Carol, and I am glad they are going to go out on Friday and I am glad they are taking it slow and getting to know each other and take it from there.

I am proud of Carol so far she did not make snide remarks about Scott and so far she has not blabbed it all over the office.

Great update more please thanks.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2009 12:28 am
Title: Chapter 17

lLved the update. I'm hoping Carol doesn't say or do anything crazy.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2009 10:35 pm
Title: Chapter 17

lol that too cute how he ask her out. im glad that she finaly told her about her and scoot just hope carol doens't make any more trouble for him. now i wanted some pizza now lol thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2009 10:31 pm
Title: Chapter 16

Loved the update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2009 04:01 am
Title: Chapter 16

Ah that are so sweet and so into each other.  I think they should just tell people they are involved.  Bump what others think of either of them.  As long as they make each other happy is all that matters and Carol does not have room to talk when she is known as the office slut.  Rather be know to date a geek then the office slut.

Great update!  Thanks

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2009 07:59 pm
Title: Chapter 16

well glad that he trying to keep the peace with carlo and that he was helping maz out with they fear of flying. i hate plans my self. love the story and thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2009 06:50 pm
Title: Chapter 16

I would not worry about Carol or any of them have to say. They are the two that will be in the relationship, so if they're both happy that's all that should matter. Great update.

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Date: September 28 2009 02:24 pm
Title: Chapter 16

Thanks for a great update.  I hope that they can become a couple without interference from their coworkers.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2009 01:46 pm
Title: Chapter 14

AWWW, this so cute. Who's says the nerd can't be sexy and a great lover. I'm glad Scott and Mackenzie are going to take a chance. Good work. I can't wait for another chapter.

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Date: September 25 2009 12:47 am
Title: Chapter 15

wow well glad she going to tell carlo and the rest about them so they no he no vigin and he love himself some chocolate lol. i cna't wait to read people reaction to them and thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2009 11:22 pm
Title: Chapter 15

That was SMOKIN'... I really like Scott and Mackenzie together.

 Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 24 2009 05:21 am
Title: Chapter 15

There is no need to hide the way they feel for each other. Happy they got to know each other a little better with their talk.. Great update!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2009 04:33 am
Title: Chapter 15

I'll be glad when she tells Carol.  I can't wait for Carol's reaction.  Thank you for the update.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2009 04:30 am
Title: Chapter 15

Telling anyone about them would so not be a good idea. Especially since they haven't established exactly what they are...I mean are they butt buddies, in a relationship...what? Carol sounds like a loose woman who could turn on you fast...I wouldn't trust her with my name.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2009 04:20 am
Title: Chapter 15

 scott and mackenzie are too cute. i dont think she should tell carol, i think carol might have a thing for scott.

 Reviewer: lalala98 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2009 04:11 am
Title: Chapter 14

why does she has to be so mean to scott i don't blame her not telling everything to her she just make fun of her. i hope they tell each other how the feel . thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 08:51 pm
Title: Cast

McKenzie is certainly feeling Scott. Me thinks that Carol  may actually want to get with Scott. He seems to be the only one in the office setting that she hasn't slept with yet. Also, she may be suspicious of both Mac and Scott. Friends like Carol one should feed information with a long handle spoon. I really am enjoying this story. I like the dynamics of Scott and Mac. They really have a lot more in common than not.

 Reviewer: lovedrama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 03:22 pm
Title: Chapter 14

WTH is with Carol, she is getting on my nerves.

 Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 11:09 am
Title: Chapter 14

To bad Carol is determined to embarrass them all.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 08:32 am
Title: Chapter 14

I'm confused as to why MacKenzie would think she would need to tell Carol that she was leaving after what she pulled. That really wasn't necessary of Carol. She needs a life.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 06:22 am
Title: Cast

Loved the update. Carol is definitely a set up, taking them to the strip club. Scott and Mackenzie appear to be getting closer. I hope she doesn't allow Carol to spoil things between her and Scott.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 06:22 am
Title: Chapter 14

Mackenzie's right, Carol is a bitch.

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2009 05:33 am


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