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Title: Chapter 2

well it nice that she made a new friend the first day at work.  Carol was right people are ass holes lol. thanks for the updated.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 03:27 pm
Title: Cast

like the pics of the cast and like that dr reid from crimal minds is in the story love that show.

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Date: September 13 2009 03:24 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for a great update,  I am glad that they are talking to each other.  Poor Scott being mugged. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2009 02:52 pm
Title: Chapter 11

They are too hot to trot!!! Can't get enough of each other. Wonder how this is gonna play out when they go back to the "real world". Is there gonna ba a lil Scott running around as a result of all that hawt sex????? Great update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2009 06:26 am
Title: Chapter 11

Scott's a SUPERFREAK! I loved it!

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Date: September 12 2009 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 11

Wow! Always the quiet one....hehe.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2009 04:31 am
Title: Chapter 11

Damn Scott ain't that quiet. I like the new Scott. If he wants some good loving he has to deal with the germs. Great update

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2009 03:38 am
Title: Chapter 11

wait a minute now, where was the condom for the second go 'round?

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2009 02:56 am
Title: Chapter 11

im so glad it wasnt weird for them.

 Reviewer: LaLaLa98 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2009 02:46 am
Title: Chapter 11

Nice!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2009 02:09 am
Title: Chapter 10

Wow!  Scott has game...who knew.  LOL

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 11 2009 02:51 am
Title: Chapter 10

Whoa! Somebody got their freak on! lol!!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 11 2009 12:30 am
Title: Chapter 10

Aw, thats so sweet. Hopefully the morning after doesn't suck.

 Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2009 12:12 am
Title: Chapter 10

LOL! OMG!! That was freakin' crazy! Its always the quiet one.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 11:13 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Guess they'll need a little more than sanitary wipes! LOL

 Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 07:47 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Hmmm, they finally did the nasty!!! Wow!!! I guess they will blame the al..al..al..alcohol and try to avoid each other now. Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved the update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 06:47 pm
Title: Chapter 10

He may be a clean freak, but it seems he's also a freak in the bed. He most defitinely isn't a virgin.That was hot!! Thanks for the update!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 04:17 pm
Title: Chapter 10

things finally heated up i wonder if scott will go back to acting normal (weird)???

 Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 02:47 pm
Title: Chapter 10

HOT DAYUM!!! That was the shyte.  I can't wait for the next update. So I wonder will this make them open up to one another that was something hot and like she said he sure didn't act like a virgin :)

So Mr. Taylor it would seem has a thing for Carol but he is such and a-hole or so it seems.

Great update more please soon.  Thanks

Reviewer: Thundakat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 02:18 pm
Title: Chapter 10

I'm happy to see that McKenzie and Scott are letting themselves get close to each other...

A little bit of liquid courage never hurt anyone... I don't think they're drunk just going with the moment and letting their true feelings come out...

I have a feeling their so called "friends" are going to be major "meddling budinskis"... Hopefully, McKenzie and Scott will continue to build from this and not let outside forces meddle to much...

What is up with Taylor and Carol???

 Reviewer: spanishfly69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 02:02 pm
Title: Chapter 10

This isn't good...gettin' drunk and doin' the do when they don't really like each other...

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 10 2009 09:52 am
Title: Chapter 9

Great update. I like how she is pulling Scott out of his shell. However he did seem to know just how to hold on to her!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2009 04:07 am
Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for a great update.  Glad that Mackenzie is starting see Scott as a person rather than the butt of everyone's jokes.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2009 03:30 am
Title: Chapter 9

Hmm, Scott making the moves on Mackenzie??? Wow, he's really trying to break out of his shell. Go Scott!!! Mackenzie is gonna get more than she bargained for after teasing Scott on the dance floor with the dirty dancing.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 09 2009 03:26 am
Title: Chapter 9

Alright now that was hot and Mackenize are feeling each other.  I was just as shocked as Mackenzie when he wrapped his arms around her and then put his hands on her butt...that was funny when she about fell over when he started doing his own thing and thinking outside himself he's just shy around other people and apparently Mac is the one to bring him out of his shell.  She is good for him and maybe vice versa. 

I thought so sure when she told Carol to pay up that she did that in front of Scott and that it hurt his feeling and he was going to change his mind.  I am glad he got out and broke away from the germ thing but only of Mac. :D

 

Great update more please.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2009 03:05 am


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