Title: Chapter 9

finally scott is breaking out of his shell and boy is he coming out swinging lol great update keep em coming

Reviewer: kell369 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2009 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 9

Suki suki now! I hope it's about to get hawt!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 09 2009 01:47 am

Title: Chapter 9

You go Scott!  Good chapter update.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2009 01:27 am

Title: Chapter 9

Continue!!!!

Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2009 12:59 am

Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update. Like that Mackenzie and Scott are bonding a little.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 08 2009 05:10 am

Title: Chapter 8

Loved the update!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 08 2009 02:52 am

Title: Chapter 8

Wha Mackenzie did right there wasn't wasn't necessary. She needs to leave Scott alone when dealing with Carol I think.

Good update.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2009 01:51 am

Title: Chapter 8

If she said that in front of him he may change his mind about going. Great update!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2009 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I have a feeling Scott is going to rock Mackenzie's world soon.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2009 08:01 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update.  I thought that they were in a suite with separate bedrooms.  If they are then how she is sitting on her bed and talking to Scott who is at a desk in their room? Also, don't they have separate bathrooms too.  As for the wager that Mackenzie made with Carol that wasn't very nice of her.  I am not surprised that Scott and Mackenzie are attracted to each other.  But what will he say when he over hears the conversation that Mackenzie is having with Carol? I hope that he doesn't go out with them.  I like Scott and I don't like the way that they treat him.  I don't think that is very nice.  Granted he is not the most social person there is but my goodness he is still is a person.  And persecution of someone because you don't like them is unacceptable.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2009 02:21 pm

Title: Chapter 7

That was short and sweet! 

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2009 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Hmmm, Scott thinking naughty thoughts about Mackenzie,wow. Can't see how things turn out with the room sharing.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 07 2009 03:01 am

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update!! Being in the room together should bring them closer!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2009 07:00 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for a great update.  At east Scoot and Mackenzie are being civil to each other.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2009 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I don't understand why Mackenzie hates Scott so much. He really didn't do anything that bad. She's being over dramatic. Although, I can't deny I'm anxious to see how this plays out.

Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2009 03:20 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Nice!

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 05 2009 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Can't wait for the conference.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2009 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 6

This trip is going to be interesting.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2009 04:10 am

Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait for the conference in the Big Apple.  It should be fun.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2009 01:02 am

Title: Chapter 6

I cant wait till they get to the Big Apple! Geat update

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Loved the update. What's up with Mackenzie??? Its like she's overacting to situations when it comes to Scott. She needs to bring it down a notch and try to be professional. She needs to watch what she says and in whose company as it could be taken out of context.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 07:10 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 12:27 am

Title: Chapter 4

What is Scott's real story?  Waiting on the next chapter.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 12:18 am

Title: Chapter 3

Next update please

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 2

Good start.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2009 12:07 am



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