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Title: Chapter 5

Really...Mackenzie needs to cut Carol loose. Whats she got against Scott anyway? Office tramp AND gossip...that's all I'm saying.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 05:46 am
Title: Chapter 5

great update! Carol is a mess.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 03:54 am
Title: Chapter 5

Great update. I feel Carol is gonna lead Mackenzie astray with her wild ways. Hmmm, Mackenzie got a thing for Scott???? 

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 01:31 am
Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for a great udate.  But I am confused to why they are bad mouthing Scott so bad. Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 12:26 am
Title: Chapter 4

Nice update!

 Reviewer: brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 02 2009 08:33 pm
Title: Chapter 4

How does he get anything down if he has to stop every other minute to sanitize his hands. I take it he won't be going out to the club.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2009 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 3

Great update!! Thanks

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2009 05:12 am
Title: Chapter 4

This is good. MacKenzie might want to lose Carol as an intimate friend though. She seems nice and all but office gossips are never good to keep company with.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2009 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 4

Great update. What's up with Scott??? Why is he stressing Mackenzie??? Hope she has fun with Carol.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 02 2009 03:22 am
Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the update but for Mackenzie to go off on a fellow worker like that was so unprofessional.  I understand that no one seems to like Scott but my goodness the way that they treat him is so wrong.  As for Mackenzie she needs to start acting like a professional instead of a baby.  If she is so home sick then she needs to go back to Arkanasas.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2009 01:03 am
Title: Chapter 4

Scott not liking him at all.

 Reviewer: yummy954 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2009 12:46 am
Title: Chapter 3

Great update.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 31 2009 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 3

This has potential. Jared is going to be entertaining.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2009 04:16 am
Title: Chapter 3

Poor Scott

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2009 08:58 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I like it! I hope to see more soon!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2009 07:51 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for a great update.  I kind of feel bad for Scott.  Doesn't seems like anyone that he works with likes him.  What is POV?  Why is he the way that he is?  He seems to have a germ phoia as well.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2009 07:03 pm
Title: Chapter 3

i llikey, i likely a lot. thanks for the update and will be looking for the next update soon.

 Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2009 06:53 pm
Title: Chapter 2

this story has plenty of potential and i liked what i have read so far.

 Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 30 2009 06:50 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful beginning. I look forward to reading it!!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2009 02:46 am
Title: Chapter 2

Great start to the story.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2009 07:20 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this story speaks to my heart...I'm a simple 'country' girl too...can imagine the culture shock from moving from the country to the big city like Mackensie....whereas people in the country are more laid back and hospitable...and the face-paced lifestyle of the city makes them appear 'cold' on first impression...

Looking forward to reading more...good start...

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2009 04:48 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Interesting so far. Pleas continue.

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2009 11:24 am
Title: Chapter 2

great start, I look forward to reading it.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2009 07:08 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm liking this start and look forward to reading more.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 29 2009 06:50 am
Title: Chapter 2

good start. please continue

 Reviewer: KelleyLi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2009 06:26 am


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